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Argument 16
The following appeared in a letter to the editor of a local newspaper
from a citizen of the state of Impecunia.
"Two years ago our neighboring state, Lucria, began a state lottery to
supplement tax revenues for education and public health. Today, Lucria
spends more per pupil than we do, and Lucria's public health program
treats far more people than our state's program does. If we were to
establish a state lottery like the one in Lucria, the profits could be
used to improve our educational system and public health program. The new
lottery would doubtless be successful, because a survey conducted in our
capital city concludes that citizens of Impecunia already spend an average
of $50 per person per year on gambling."
1. 观点: L 国这个政策成功了—》I国也会成功
驳: 两个不同的国家会受到人口 价值观 收入的影响
2. 即使I有国更多人参与
观点: I国都现在每人平均花费50刀在赌博上—》乐透会成功
驳: 花在赌博上不代表花在乐透上 很多人会花扑克或者老虎机上 赌博 而不是乐透
其次, 首都人民不能代表一个国家整体水平
3. 就算人们都是花在乐透上 而且tax revenues确实增长了
观点: L国的把钱花在教育和健康上 —》 I国教育和健康拨款会更多
驳: I国就算有很多乐透的税收不一定会会用在教育和健康上, 环境,弱势群体上
的拨款会更多
1. L began lottery to supplement tax revenues for education and public health Impe will also success
(different countries have respective condition such as population, value and revenue difference which decide
whether the phenomenon will come true in Impe)
2. Even if Impe have more people spend money on lottery
Capital citizens of Impe already spend $50 per person per year on gambling lottery will be success
( people spend money on gambling rather lottery, other gambling such as card and machine does
negative effects on social atmosphere. Further more the level of citizen in capital can’t represent
the whole country.)
3. Even if I concede that tax revenues indeed increase,
L 's public health program treats people if we imitate, we will gain the same effect on education and health. ( government may spend majority of money on environment and poor people
Argument 21
The following appeared in a memo from the new vice president of
Sartorian, a company that manufactures men's clothing.
"Five years ago, at a time when we had difficulties in obtaining reliable
supplies of high-quality wool fabric, we discontinued production of our
deluxe alpaca overcoats. Now that we have a new fabric supplier, we should
resume production. This coat should sell very well: since we have not
offered an alpaca overcoat for five years and since our major competitor
no longer makes an alpaca overcoat, there will be pent-up customer demand.
Also, since the price of most types of clothing has risen in each of the
past five years, customers should be willing to pay significantly higher
prices for alpaca overcoats than they did five years ago, and our company
profits will increase."
1. 五年没人卖过—》会卖的很好 (新东西被人接受需要一定的使用期, 难被人接受)
2. 有多其它质地的衣服涨价—》alpaca 会卖的好 (其它衣服涨价 作为价钱更贵都的alpaca 人们更不愿意花钱买)
3. 确实具体信息。 一个产品是否盈利和产品本身的质量,成本,消费者的需求有关
1. not offered for five year the product will sell well ( questionable the new product always have an adaptive period because it is hard for customers accepted.)
2. the price of most type clothing risen alpaca will sell well ( irrelated seldom does a person willing to by an alpaca overcoat at the situation they reluctant to by a normal clothes wich is cheaper then alpaca.
3. insufficient to point out some other reason such as first cost, quality and the requirement.
Argument 38
The following memo appeared in the newsletter of the West Meria Public
Health Council.
"An innovative treatment has come to our attention that promises to
significantly reduce absenteeism in our schools and workplaces. A study
reports that in nearby East Meria, where fish consumption is very high,
people visit the doctor only once or twice per year for the treatment of
colds. Clearly, eating a substantial amount of fish can prevent colds.
Since colds are the reason most frequently given for absences from school
and work, we recommend the daily use of Ichthaid, a nutritional supplement
derived from fish oil, as a good way to prevent colds and lower
absenteeism."
作者逻辑:
1. East Meria 鱼消耗很多,人很少因感冒看医生—》吃大量鱼可以预防感冒 (证据不足
EM 的人感冒的人少可能与气候,基因,饮食习惯有关)
2. 感冒—》学校和单位有人缺席 (很多人缺席不一定是因为感冒,差生本身爱逃课用感冒当借口,工作的人也可能因为家里有事而缺席)
3. 最后作者提出 吃鱼油可以减少缺勤 (减少缺席应该是严格的管理政策和提高学校和工作单位人们的积极性)
1. EM high fish consumption, seldom people see the doctor eating fish can prevent of colds. ( insufficient evidence colds may relate climate, genetic, dietary)
2. colds school and workplace absenteeism ( people absence not only for colds, but tell others they got a colds for excuse.)
3. eating fish can reduce the number of people who are absenteeism. ( the essential point prevent the absenteeism is a strict rule and enhance the motivation among people in school and workplace.)
Argument 164
Claitown University needs both affordable housing for its students and
a way to fund the building of such housing. The best solution to this
problem is to commission a famous architect known for experimental and
futuristic buildings. It is common knowledge that tourists are willing to
pay money to tour some of the architect's buildings, so it can be expected
that tourists will want to visit this new building. The income from the
fees charged to tourists will soon cover the building costs. Furthermore,
such a building will attract new students as well as donations from
alumni. And even though such a building will be much larger than our
current need for student housing, part of the building can be used as
office space.
1. tourists are willing to pay money to tour some of the architect's buildings fees will soon cover ( the building is for students, tourists may disturb students’ study and rest. Thus, students will object to this idea. Besides, tourism unwilling to come just for a building living for students.)
2. experimental and futuristic buildings solve students living problem. ( this kind of building may not fit for students, and students will feel uncomfortable while living there)
3. attract new students as well as donations from alumni money will soon returned ( fees for dormitory are low and even the donations are unaffordable for a experimental and futuristic building)
all three it is not suit for school build such a superb building just for students’ housing)
Argument 193
The Department of Education in the state of Attra recommends that high
school students be assigned homework every day. Yet a recent statewide
survey of high school math and science teachers calls the usefulness of
daily homework into question. In the district of Sanlee, 86 percent of the
teachers reported assigning homework three to five times a week, whereas
in the district of Marlee, less than 25 percent of the teachers reported
assigning homework three to five times a week. Yet the students in Marlee
earn better grades overall and are less likely to be required to repeat a
year of school than are the students in Sanlee. Therefore, all teachers in
our high schools should assign homework no more than twice a week, if at
all.
1. M 地区人成绩好 或 S地成绩相对差不一定是因为作业量问题 S地学习氛围好等因素
2. 仅仅是调查数学和理化的高中教师太片面了
3. 作业量也可能不同 S地布置多些 可能量少 M地作业次数少可能量多
Argument 206
The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Parkville
Daily Newspaper.
"Throughout the country last year, as more and more children below the age
of nine participated in youth-league softball and soccer, over 80,000 of
these young players suffered injuries. When interviewed for a recent
study, youth-league softball players in several major cities also reported
psychological pressure from coaches and parents to win games. Furthermore,
education experts say that long practice sessions for these sports take
away time that could be used for academic activities. Since the
disadvantages apparently outweigh any advantages, we in Parkville should
discontinue organized athletic competition for children under nine."
1. Since the disadvantages apparently outweigh any advantages conceal the competition (insufficient evidence never point out the merits of athletic)
2. over 80,000 player injured when play softball conceal sport competition ( some sports just like ping-pang ball and badminton is safety )
3. occupy study time conceal ( even if sports activities are concealed, student may spend more time on entertainment and relaxation rather than study)
Argument 209
The following recommendation was made by the Human Resources Manager
to the board of directors of the Fancy Toy Company.
"In the last three quarters of this year, under the leadership of our
president, Pat Salvo, our profits have fallen considerably. Thus, we
should ask for her resignation in return for a generous severance package.
In Pat's place, we should appoint Rosa Winnings. Rosa is currently
president of Starlight Jewelry, a company whose profits have increased
dramatically over the past several years. Although we will have to pay
Rosa twice the salary that Pat has been receiving, it will be well worth
it because we can soon expect our profits to increase considerably."
1. Pat Salvo, our profits have fallen considerably fire Pat Salvo ( The reason why profits have fallen may because the average companies are fallen. The writer should compare other company in the same area.)
2. Rosa is currently president of Starlight Jewelry hire Rose ( different company have respective situation, workers hard to adapt new leader)
3. we will have to pay Rosa twice the salary to increase the profits ( higher payment may enhance burden of workers’ salary) |
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