[优秀习作] issue41 机井题 爆炒狒狒ing... [复制链接]

最初由 dezhi 发布
[B]我一下午的邓小平理论与三个代表，同晕~~~~
anyway，共同努力吧 [/B]

最初由 dezhi 发布
[B]我一下午的邓小平理论与三个代表，同晕~~~~
anyway，共同努力吧 [/B]

最初由 happymichelle 发布
[B]41"Such non mainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science."

In the era of more civilized and progressed society, non mainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling and psychic, paranormal pursuits, seem to be of little use, because we human beings have already improved a lot in the mainstream science. In my point of view, however, I still believe before mainstream can answer all the questions we encounter, non mainstream areas will continue play an important role in our society.（在科学能够回答所有问题前，非主流仍然保持其重要作用）

非主流作为娱乐~~（这个我没想到哦~8错！）
Generally speaking, we usually entertain ourselves by enjoying the novels or fictional movies, and thus the non mainstream areas can work as entertainment to satisfy human's needs. In fact, lots of stories, movies about fortune-telling, fate, witchcrafts etc, come about to meet the curiosities of human beings. People tend to be fascinated with such non mainstream areas in that they bring about people's interests, dreams into reality, even through books or screens. A good case is Harry Potter, a gripping and electrifying fiction novel, full of suspense, secrets, and of course magic. It is just because of the witchcraft and wizardry that attract both children and adults to enjoy the mysterious world created by J.K Rowling. We all live in realistic world, therefore, we need curiosity, inspiration, encouragement and more space to dream about from the unrealistic world. Without the enjoyment from the non mainstream areas, our lives would become dull and lack of mysterious interests.（Good!）

可以解释许多科学不能解释的现象
In addition, besides the function of entertainment, non mainstream areas still play an vital role in explaining phenomena which cannot elucidated by mainstream science. Before the time when medicine had come into being, our ancestors cannot understand why people get ill, and also why people going to die at last. In the absence of basic knowledge of ailment, it is natural for them to seek help from fate-telling necromancer to explain the cause that people's illness and death are due to the obsession of a ghost. Not only do people from the past time turn to non mainstream areas for help, but, people today, also explain(interpret) something that cannot explained by science in an fortune-telling way. For example, when two lovers telling about their love story, the most frequent words are the "magic" and "serendipity". It seems that they are doomed to meet each other and fall in love because all of these have already been determined by fate. Thus we could conclude that non mainstream areas sometimes could satisfy people's curiosity about the unknown world.
论点立得不错~~论证不太好。前面的例子明显是非主流的负应用，已经被证伪了。而后面这个感觉是偷换概念~~~只不过是人们夸张的形容手法而已，人们习惯讲缘分~~但是跟非主流稍远了~~

与科技矛盾使人会迷惑~~过分相信会使人停滞（两个意群了吧！）
However, when non mainstream meet against science, people will feel confused, and moreover, non mainstream areas, if over emphasized, would prevent people from actively struggling against fate, or making efforts for futures. Opening the history books of our human beings, lots of famous and successful people achieved their dreams because they firstly had no devotion to superstitious fate, and most importantly, they held strong belief that they were able to overcome the difficulties. For example, Roosevelt, overcame polios, and became one of the best Presidents in American history（罗斯福的残疾与非主流有关吗？）. Another example is Forrest Gump, his honesty, strong will to hold his conviction and optimistic attitudes towards life are always move me and encourage me to face the difficulties and overcome troubles rather than passively accept what God gave me. We should master and control our own lives in that we are human beings, not servants to fate.（感觉作者对非主流的理解不太对阿~~~残疾或者疾病与非主流领域~~我认为是两码事）

To sum up, while it is true that non mainstream plays an important role in both entertaining and explaining unknown areas, we should also realize that the non mainstreaming such as fortune-telling, astrology are not panaceas--they have their limitation. Most importantly, however, is that we human beings should master our own fate.

提纲不错哦~~可以试着重写下
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