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130 "How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."

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ts:The arguer suggest that how children are socialized today determines the destiny of society and because of our ineffective ways on education, children cannot help bring about a better society.While I concede the first claim only in certain circumstances.Insofar as the second claim, I think it's the society environment that cultivate children beneficial to the better society.So we should make our society better from our own rather than expect our children to do so.
1.just appropriate children's socialization can determine the destiny of society
  a.child who's socialized//over-socialized children---pressure leads to great depression
  b.only virtuous socialized children can bring about a better society//wicked socialized
children could even ruin the country
2.society influence the growing of children at first, then the well educated children bring
  us a better environment. We should mind our every step to keep our children's growing
  environment positive.
  a.children in Arabom are always aggressive
  b.children in Asia always work hard
  c.the war -- the Lost Generation
3.Turning to the second claim, if we define a “better” society as one characterized by greater tolerance of differing viewpoints and people who are different from ourselves, greater respect for individual rights, and greater cooperation across cultural and national boundaries, then the children of the most recent half-century are creating a better society.

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本帖最后由点燃黑色于 2011-2-24 10:41 编辑

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The arguer suggest that how children are socialized today determines the destiny of society and because of our ineffective ways on education, children cannot help bring about a better society. I concede the first claim only in certain circumstances. Insofar as the second claim, I think it's the society environment that cultivates children beneficial to the better society. So we should make our society better from our own rather than expect our children to do so.

First and foremost, only appropriate children's socialization can determine the destiny of society. Children with appropriate socialized character respect each other and won't cause needless disputation. They share various opinions, cultures and make the society polychrome. In all likelihood, they tend to think about how to deal with them when they come across quarrels. Each smile, each time of shaking hands, each assist would make our society better. But on the other way, over-socialized children are often under huge pressure. They seem to be too sophisticated at their age and take advantages of others without trust. Besides, only virtuous socialized children can bring about a better society. On the contrary, the wicked ones could even cause lots of problems to the society.

Second, it is society influence the growing of children at first, and then the well educated children could bring us a better society. To grow up healthily, children need a harmonious environment, or they will lose their way. For instance, accustomed to the riots in their childhood, Arabic children are always aggressive. They were raised in a discordant country where wars usually happen. And they would likely become warmongers after years. Children in Asia always are forced to work so hard that they feel so much stress from their parents. A large number of Asian children have mental disease. How can a society become better with these children? Who cause this kind of problems, the children or the adults? The answer is obvious. So we should mind our every step to keep our children's growing environment positive.

Finally, whether our society is better depends on how we define "a better society". If we define a “better” society as one characterized by greater tolerance of differing viewpoints and people who are different from ourselves, greater respect for individual rights, and greater cooperation across cultural and national boundaries, then the children of the most recent half-century are actually creating a better society. We should see that the society indeed is in development for the better. Excessive worry is not necessary.

Taking all these into consideration, we could reach the conclusion that the destiny of society is just determined by well-educated, virtuous, socialized children and we should create an upstanding environment for our children’s growth.

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