[i习作temp] issue112 第二次写，感觉没有第一次好 [复制链接]

Reasoning and logical thinking is of great help to people to tell truth from false, while emotion is also important for people to get along with the world and others. Concerning these above, I strongly agree with the speaker's assertion that students would benefit more from an education that not only emphasize the development of students' capacity for reasoning and logical thinking but also teaches them how to explore their own emotions.

In the first place, the important role of reasoning and logical thinking should not be overlooked. Reasoning and logical thinking is essential and teaches a person to rationally and critically treat one thing, which do well for them to tell the good from the bad, to discern the truth from the false, to discriminate goodness from wickedness.（定义Reasoning and logical thinking）Thus, to capture this capacity should （be） the main task be students attend schools (. Besides,用besides感觉不合适，这里不是递进关系，应该是说明你前面提到的学生到校。)where mathematics, physics, and so forth involving much reasoning and logical thinking work, is the basic knowledge for one person to （learn）be taught, and also contribute much too （to）the advanced development of technology, which has greatly promoted the living standard of people and the well-being of a society. //In order to keep the developing trend of technology, the important status of reasoning and logical thinking should not be overturn这句话感觉多余，前后连接都不是很coherence //. Accordingly, reasoning and logical thinking is beneficial not only to a person but also to the society people live in, and so educational systems should emphasize the development of students' ability of reasoning and logical thinking.

In the second place, we should not deny the function of emotion, which is the basic demand to be a person. After all, human beings are gregarious animals, who live with their families but also contact with other people surrounding them. Learning to explore their emotions well would help them to communicate with other more efficiently and harmoniously.好句子In this sense, emotion is of large use to promote the cooperation between people, which is especially significant in nowadays when the jobs divided by society become more and more specific and need more and more people to work together to fulfill one project.好例证。 Moreover, let image, if people, especially professors or scientists, who are excellent at reasoning and logical thinking, yet their emotions are particularly low, what will happen? They are more probably to make use of their capacities to attain their selfish goals, which mostly bring disaster to others. We are so lucky that such people are less.？？？这个感觉有点是败笔，逻辑上好像有问题：if emotions low then selfish goals?按照你的说明“Learning to explore their emotions well would help them to communicate with other more efficiently and harmoniously”里面看不到不explore emotion they will selfish.而且explore emotion 与emotion low 等同吗？

From what have been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion thatboth the capacity for reasoning and logical thinking and ability for exploring emotions should be place （equally） emphasis（都重要和同样重要是有区别的哦）, which is crucial to people themselves and the society as a whole.