[问题求助] 一写issue 脑子就浆糊了，怎么办 [复制链接]

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发表于 2011-3-7 14:18:31 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

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写ISSUE边写边擦，总是自己否定自己的想法，怎么办这已经是我写作文的一个老问题了。写之前也想提纲了，可是写着写着就觉得不对，没说全，说不清，或是说的不够好。然后开头的时候能想好几种开头，例如ISSUE120 - "So much is new and complex today that looking back for an understanding of the past provides little guidance for living in the present." 我开始是这么写的。 As a famous minister in China said, the past, in other word history, can be enlightening to us. Even though, as the speaker claimed, so much is new and complex today in various aspects, from my pespective, it is still necessary for both individuals and communities to be aware of the relations between the past and present for some reasons. Afer all, it seems to be essentially metaphsic to live in the present without a guidance of history.直接亮观点，然后下面各段从个人和社会角度写原因。主要就是个人学习需要经验，社会以前的集权，现在是民主什么的。但是写着写着觉得没深度啊，虽然例子里能表现出现在很新了但过去依然有指导作用。后来又想这么写： A famous minister in China lived hundreds of years ago said that," the past, in other word, history, may enlighten and inform us to make judgements". Certainly, things have changed significantly nowadays, however this old experiences may still make sense just like all the other history does. The reason for this involves a view of the relation of the past and present, and what the past can provide us for living. 打算先深入说说历史和现在的联系什么的，然后觉得力不从心，写不出来，又浆糊了。总是觉得不好，总是不断否定。大到文章结构，小到句子结构，用词。大家说我怎么办啊

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发表于 2011-3-7 20:48:32 |只看该作者

lz浆糊的原因同我当初一开始写issue时或许是一样的就是把写和改放到一起了边写边改加之自己又有些完美主义还担心写不好到时候还得全篇重写所以很容易陷入浆糊状态

建议lz先列提纲列到电脑上而不是脑子里然后根据提纲写成全文至于哪里不满意或者还认为还有不足写完后自己再好好修改修改完寻找G友或者发到版上再互改(我比较推荐直接找考试日期相近的G友效率高)

AW的道路上有这些坎坷是很正常的别怕麻烦也一定要对自己有信心加油~！

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