[i习作temp] issue87 新手与专家　89互助营 [复制链接]

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发表于 2005-7-30 11:44:23 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

Issue87: In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries.

前几天限时写了几篇文章，修改后贴上来吧。这个论题看过一篇范文，因为太同意范文的观点，所以就拿来用了。

提纲：
1。新手具有好奇和创造力，有利于科研发现
2。新手具有更多的工作热情和努力，有利于科研发现
3。这种新手精神并不是新手的专利，专家也好，新手也好，只有具有这种精神，就有机会成功。

Who is more likely to achieve important discoveries in any field of inquiry, the beginner or the expert? Many people claim that experts have mastery over knowledge of the area widely and systematically, thus they will make more important discoveries. As for me, I admit that beginners have obvious disadvantages over experts; however, they possess very precious beginner spirit – curiosity, uninhibited creativity and enthusiasm which can greatly facilitate them to make marvelous discoveries as well. Beginner spirit is a very essential factor that contributes to successful discoveries and anyone can make efforts to succeed with such spirit, no matter they are experts or beginners.

Despite of their disadvantage of lack of deep understanding and meticulous methodology, beginners are always curious and creative in their work field, which are beneficial to making more discoveries in their later works. With less experience, beginners show great interest in any data or process of the research work which may be routine things in experts’ eyes. When encountering new discoveries, experts are inclined to solve problems and seek for new solutions based on routine process or existing methods formed by long-term accepted thinking or study mode. However, less limited by the formed theories and routines, beginners could be more curious and skeptical toward any process and results and sometimes such skepticism and curiosity in certain process or data lead to creative thinking and further scrutiny which contribute to an important discovery finally. There are superfluous examples illustrating this phenomenon. For example, French physicist De Broglie found wave mechanics when he was a university student. And it is a graduate student who found a kind of supernova instead of experienced astronomer.

Moreover, since beginners are the newcomers in a field, they would have much more enthusiasm and stronger desire to make progress. Any single result of research will encourage them to develop further. Also as beginner, they are eager to make progress and demonstrate their performances for recognition in the field. Although this seems a little bit fame oriented, it necessarily acts as a considerable impulse, together with the working enthusiasm, to galvanize beginners to make more efforts in research work. Without such enthusiasm and encouragement, it is hard for researchers, no matter old experts or new comers, to make great progress in discoveries.

However, the beginner spirit is not exclusive to beginner and anyone can make efforts to make important discoveries with such spirit, no matter they are experts or beginners. History is peppered with numerous scientists who owned such spirit and made marvelous discoveries in their fields. Take Einstein for example, as a science giant who successfully developed the Theory of Relativity; Einstein still maintained his curiosity and creativity, spending the last 20 years to criticize his own theories and taking pains to determine how to reconcile them with new theories. There is no doubt that beginner spirit exerted great influence in his theories development.

In sum, despite of the disadvantages of lacking profound knowledge and experience, beginner can still make important discoveries due to their precious beginner spirit such as curiosity, creativity and enthusiasm in their research work. Actually, it is the beginner spirit that helps to make important discoveries and anyone who cherishes such spirit can achieve great success in pertinent field.

[ Last edited by staralways on 2005-7-30 at 12:07 ]

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发表于 2005-7-30 12:08:51 |只看该作者

过两天就考了，不能细改，楼主的语言很不错，如果是限时的话就很好了，连“电镀”这个单词都用上了牛。再说说内容，我觉得第2，3段太空了，几乎通篇在讲道理，而那两个例子也不够cogent，个人感觉了。第4段我觉得写得很好，但不知道这种延伸会不会走题。我虽然没写个这篇，但我也细想过，我觉得最好先给beginner定义一下，那样写起来的例子就可能好找多了。

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