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我照一位G友的意见修改了一下,希望大家能多帮我狠狠拍以下,非常感谢:) :handshake
TOPIC: ARGUMENT16 - The following appeared in a letter to the editor of a local newspaper from a citizen of the state of Impecunia.
"Two years ago our neighboring state, Lucria, began a state lottery to supplement tax revenues for education and public health. Today, Lucria spends more per pupil than we do, and Lucria's public health program treats far more people than our state's program does. If we were to establish a state lottery like the one in Lucria, the profits could be used to improve our educational system and public health program. The new lottery would doubtless be successful, because a survey conducted in our capital city concludes that citizens of Impecunia already spend an average of $50 per person per year on gambling."
WORDS: 309 TIME: 0:30:00 DATE: 2007-3-28
The author hastily assumes that by establishing a state lottery, the profits can improve the conditions in education and public health program. Besides, the author projects that the new lottery would be successful resulting from the survey in capital city of Impecunia. Further, the author makes a conclusion that they should establish a state lottery. Yet, in my view, this argument is well organized, but not well-reasoned in some aspects.
Firstly, while a high correlation between lottery and the profits spent on education and health program is powerful evidence of causal relation, it is actually insufficient. Maybe the money provided by government in education in Lucia is much more than that in Impecunia. And it is entirely possible that the patients in Lucria are more than that in Impecunia. What is more, perhaps the environment there was polluted that more and more people had illness which should see a doctor in public hospitals. Or perhaps, the level of public health system has been improved by employing many experts in different areas, which attracts more people to treat there. Accordingly, lacking clearer evidence in the exact profit spent on education and health program, I cannot fully accept the assumption that lottery contributes to the improvement on education and health program.
Secondly, even if the lottery in Lucria had good effect on education and health program, it is unconvincing that the lottery in Impecunia can have the same effect. Because no evidence is given in the argument to demonstrate that the two areas have the same social environment and hobbies of the residents. It is entirely possible that the residents do not spend much on lottery. In addition, the government of Impecunia may not profit from lottery to advance the conditions in education and health programs. And perhaps the improvement is not apparent even if the profit on education and health program. Without ruling out these possibilities, the author cannot convince me that there will be a success in lottery in Impecunia.
Thirdly, the assumption--the new lottery would undoubtedly be successful based on the survey conducted in capital city is unjustifiable. First of all, the respondents in capital city are not representative of overall population in Impecunia. In addition, without more information about the respondents’ occupations, sexual proportion, and whether it is conducted scientifically, I cannot fully accept the results of the survey. It is entirely possible that the individuals inclined to gamble are more willing to respond to the survey than other people. And the most important of all, lottery is only one part of the gambling. Lacking no sufficient evidence, I cannot rule out the possibility that the respondents spend the majority of $50 on other gambling activities--almost little money on lottery. Therefore, the assumption, which depend on the survey, that the new lottery would success is unjustifiable. More evidence is needed to support this assumption. |
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