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发表于 2009-8-9 22:54:04 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
effective writting一段原话:
注意不要写成堆积型:A common structural flaw in college essays is the "walk-through" (also labeled "summary" or "description"). Walk-through essays follow the structure of their sources rather than establishing their own. Such essays generally have a descriptive thesis rather than an argumentative one. Be wary of paragraph openers that lead off with "time" words ("first," "next," "after," "then") or "listing" words ("also," "another," "in addition"). Alhough they don't always signal trouble, these paragraph openers often indicate that an essay's thesis and structure need work: they suggest that the essay simply reproduces the chronology of the source text (in the case of time words: first this happens, then that, and afterwards another thing . . . ) or simply lists example after example ("In addition, the use of color indicates another way that the painting differentiates between good and evil").


一直以来,我认识开头就是把全文的几个分论点按照一定逻辑串联一下,给文章一个结构上面的暗示。但是看了这段感觉我就是写成了他所谓的堆积型。由于英文弟子不太好,这段话也不是很理解,请教一下版主和大家这个堆积型到底指的是什么,我们的开头应该怎么写呢?具备什么要素才行?


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发表于 2009-8-10 09:51:31 |只看该作者
不是给出了区别了么Walk-through essays follow the structure of their sources rather than establishing their own.

开头一般包括:background information(自选)、thesis statement(必须存在)、structure
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具体应用的时候根据你行文的需求做动态调整,包括用哪个以及顺序
这个在effective writting里也说了的

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