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楼主expression 不错，学习了！

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mxy0911 发表于 2012-10-16 21:58
楼主expression 不错，学习了！

同学，木有看到你的修改痕迹。是word传错了？麻烦检查一下，嘿嘿

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B因子大片段 发表于 2012-10-16 23:52
同学，木有看到你的修改痕迹。是word传错了？麻烦检查一下，嘿嘿

你好我查了一下~是可以看见的 我用了word审阅-修订工具。在我这边显示是正常的。如果不可以的话我截图发给你吧~

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mxy0911 发表于 2012-10-17 09:40
你好我查了一下~是可以看见的 我用了word审阅-修订工具。在我这边显示是正常的。如果不可以的话我截图发给 ...

1. 多谢mxy，neglect那个好有杀伤力，哈哈我喜欢！我自己写完怎么一点都没察觉到这个硬伤呢= =还有the destination is the desire that drives us to travel，经你那么一改，三秒钟变简洁！
2. 第三段我解释一下哈。题干是ABC观点选择题，第三段后半段我想论证的是good firends在这个论点下的劣势。
3. 期待下次合作，嗷呜~

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mxy0911 发表于 2012-10-17 09:40
你好我查了一下~是可以看见的 我用了word审阅-修订工具。在我这边显示是正常的。如果不可以的话我截图发给 ...

1. 多谢mxy，neglect那个好有杀伤力，哈哈我喜欢！我自己写完怎么一点都没察觉到这个硬伤呢= =还有the destination is the desire that drives us to travel，经你那么一改，三秒钟变简洁！
2. 第三段我解释一下哈。题干是ABC观点选择题，第三段后半段我想论证的是good firends在这个论点下的劣势。
3. 期待下次合作，嗷呜~

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B因子大片段 发表于 2012-10-17 17:37
1. 多谢mxy，neglect那个好有杀伤力，哈哈我喜欢！我自己写完怎么一点都没察觉到这个硬伤呢= =还有the de ...

不谢~我的作文也求改啊~ 虽然题目选的有问题。。

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Some people think that government and companies should keep their patents forever, while others think that governments and companies should share their discoveries with all the scientists in the world. What is your opinion and why? Use specific reasons to support your answer.

Although there has been a strain of compliments that a patent brightens our intellectual world, I am, on the contrary, pretty much concerned about whether this policy benefits us in the long run. Instead, it is reasonable for government and companies to share discoveries with scientists in the world, which shortens problem-solving process (As a noun phrase this has to either have an article or be plural. I can't decide which because I don't know if you meant there's a universal process on problem-solving, or there is a particular problem-solving process that can benefit, or something else.), enhances academic communication, and ultimately pushes scientific development into a new era.

First and foremost, spreading new discoveries to the rest of the scientific world provides expediency to problem-solving. A concrete example of the famous database Medline fits perfectly into this idea. Medline provides scientists with the latest information mostly for free, or at least with relatively easy access. Accordingly, it becomes perhaps the most reliable database in the scientific world. Groups of doctors, researchers and technicians log on to Medline every day, sniffing around for even the slightest hints of new discoveries that can possibly settle their remaining problems. Some companies or governments, on the other hand, stick to their principle of patents, offering mostly charging papers. I have personally suffered a lot from writing e-mails to corresponding authors for their papers, with explicit explanations of my intention, which is time consuming and always results in vain.(This is good. But, as I love to challenge people, think about this: you seem to assume that this information should be provided free and promptly when you or some other people need it – why? In other words, what makes your personal desire to solve your problems using someone else's discoveries more valid and proper than an author's personal desire to protect his financial/academic interests, should he have any?)

Furthermore, sharing new discoveries enhances communications between academic groups or individuals. Whether it be a scientific conference, or a report tour, of simply e-mails between scientists, sharing makes smooth communication. This effect can be of two sorts. First, for those who want to learn from the discoverers, communication means self-improvement. Second, after listening to critical ideas from other scientists, the original researchers may pay attention to details or even flaws that might seem unnoticeable in the first place. Seldom can we imagine a dynamic academic world where patents are kept forever, sharing new discoveries blocked, and spreading knowledge oppressed.

On a larger scale, whenever a new discovery was spread to the public, there was a landmark era. Darwin’s On the Origins of Species by Means of Natural Selection, Bruno’s claim that earth is not the center of universe, and Elbert Einstein’s quantum theory-none of these great minds or their upper class (? Do you mean 'boss'?) have kept their intellectual treasure forever.

To be sure, keeping their patents for the consideration of copyright was not so far off the mark, yet those governments and companies neglect to take into account the most important forces that drive our society forward-solving problems, communications, and scientific development. Only by sharing new ideas can we truly make a difference.

总结：

Very well executed. Excellent job.

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mpromanus 发表于 2012-10-19 18:59
Some people think that government and companies should keep their patents forever, while others thin ...

给力！

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mpromanus 发表于 2012-10-19 18:59
Some people think that government and companies should keep their patents forever, while others thin ...

非常感谢，有种被抠到思维死角的感觉。果然是exact的大湿呀，:$

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LZ逻辑清晰，表达流畅用词到位，学习了！

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写的很棒啊~~~这么难的题说的挺清楚的。

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无意中路过~给lz鼓了个掌！

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