[备考经验] AW考前四部曲 之 紧张心情调节贴 [复制链接]

AW考前四部曲 之 紧张心情调节贴

前言

此贴内容是要帮助同学们在考前放松，推荐在离考试还有两天或着一天的时候并且心理紧张的同学来看。

提前说明三点：

1、其中不乏煽动性言论，但是本人始终保持实事求是原则，绝对不会给大家杜撰的信息，用语的模式只是为了做心理暗示，帮大家树立信心，克服紧张

2、此贴内容以绝对应试思维为主，与我的主要方法思路相左，仅仅是为帮大家临场克服紧张之用，而且有些话只是说了一半。对于正式准备，我还是建议大家要脚踏实地用心去做，千万不要舍本逐末。同时请不要拿着本贴内容去指导实际备考和以后的申请过程中，这里说的只能当做临场缓解压力来用，切记！切记！！

3、此贴不做具体复习方法计划安排，将在另一个系列（分阶段备考计划要求）中说明

一、你们自己写的要比这些好吧~

首先，既然咱们来弄AW了，那就搬来ETS的范文大家先看看~

如果你觉得自己不行，那么就看看下面这些吧

格式错误，字数可怜，错别字显眼，用词低级，语言啰嗦，句式重复，挑错已久软弱，the和I有的篇幅里甚至多到上百

ISSUE范文一：

WORKING TOGETHER FOR EACH OTHER AND THE ENVIRONMENT

Our Environment, if we take care of it, it will take care of us.
CFCs destroying the ozone layer, hundreds of acres of the rain forest being destroyed daily, smog-infested air to breathe, global warming, world population increasing at an exponential rate, these are but a few of the things that we need to not only think about, but find ways to deal with them.

We are not given this world by our ancestors we are borrowing it from our children and our children's children.We spend so much time trying to fix other countries problems, when we should be incorporating them in working toward solving the environmental issues.If we do not this huge, living planet will eventually become a lifeless hunk of rock floating in the large universe. There are many ways that we can begin to work on these problems. First decrease the amount of CFC production and usage. Second save the rain forests, which are being cut down to make farmland that is not properly maintained.
In a few years this farmland becomes infertile and more land is needed; thus more of the rain forest is destroyed. Educating farmers on different crops that will replenish the soil and keep it fertile.
Third develop alterative methods of power other than fossil fuels, such as more hydro-electric, solar, and wind generated.
The increasing population is going to require more food production as well as other needs. We need to be willing and able to manage our resources to meet these needs. If we work together we can accomplish the things that are necessary to protect the Earth and our future on it.

全文282词

得分：三分

ISSUE范文二：

In today's society, there is too much emphasis placed on students desires rather than their needs. The students of today should have to study what is presented to them, rather than what is desired by them. Students are searching for the easy way out, and educators' are supplying them with that. Students should not only be presented with mandatory curriculum, but the educators should strive to insure that each individual student truly gains from their education, rather than just breezing through it.

It is vital to the continued success and expansion of the United States, that the young people be challenged in their curriculum and be encouraged to succeed in all that they do. The educators should determine a more strenuous curriculum, and enforce it at an earlier age. Thus, the young people of today will expect to be challenged, rather than avoiding it. Students have the easy way out, and they are not truly giving all that they can. There is so much potential that is just waiting to flourish, but it is the educators' responsibility to tap into that potential.

In conclusion, it is the educators responsibility to enforce curriculum and than requesting it. Students should be challenged and expect curriculum that will eventually lead them to a path of success.

全文213个单词

得分：三分

ISSUE范文三：

The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things. This is something I learned from everyday experiences. I always found that the things I decorated my life with abundantly, were the things I treasured most. It could be a memory, a possession, or just a view. It's hard to create a whole picture without first looking at the pieces within it. My whole life of school and studies have brought me to college and have sparked my interest in applying to a graduate program. Never before did I realize how these little efforts would create this dream. In my field of dietetics many would be amazed to find that the food we eat could kill us or help us from disease.

There are many times where I'll be looking at the beautiful view, and I just have to go out and enjoy it. I do this by walking, gardening, or just lying in the grass. The feeling of the warm sun makes me dream. I know I'm not the only one who tends to overlook the basic things, like the tree outside that you used to climb, or the food you eat to give you energy and growth. We just have to take the time from our busy schedules to stop and smell the roses. Everyone's life is different, with our own  experiences and thoughts to motivate us, and no matter who we are, some of the simplest things can bring great achievements in our lives.

全文248个单词

得分：三分

ISSUE范文四：

The technological tools we as a society have developed are not in themselves positive or negative, they are just that, tools.
The uses, however, are definitely a different story. Computers, I believe at one time, were developed to save us time. Do our work more quickly for us so that we could have more leisure time to spend doing those things we enjoy. We have found now, especially those of us that are parents, that all of the leisure time we have gained is either spent watching our children learn things on the computer or creating our own unique something on the family computer.

For one thing, it has become a very fun item, the computers have become more than just work related technological tools. The amount of human interaction is limited, because people in general are spending much of their leisure time doing solo on the computer.In the past, it was common for the new young executive to get a membership to the exercise club as a perk, where he could socialize with the upper crust. Now the new young exec. gets a car phone or a portable fax, so that he can work from wherever he is, usually doing that solo trip to somewhere. Given these as examples, I would tend to agree with the statement that loneliness has increased as a direct result.

全文227个单词

得分：三分

ISSUE范文五：

I believe this statement is how you look at a glass of water. Either the glass is half full or it is half empty. The optimist would look for things in life, whereas the pessimist would try to avoid things in life. This summary will explain how looking for things in life better than overlooking a persons involvement in new opportunities and to learn from these new experiences.

I am strong believer in hands on experiences. If I have a open mind, try new things, and look for new answers to my questions about life, I will in the end gain wisdom because I have experienced many new situations. I plan on becoming a speech language pathologist in the future. In this field I will be dealing with clients who may have a disorder, such as autism or a cognitive delay.
I must be aware of the red flags that identify these disorders. I must look for the obvious symptoms before I can overlook anything. If I would in my mind tell my self to overlook things. The result would be detrimental to my career and the individual I am treating.

Who can predict the future?So how can someone purposely overlook an experience in which they may receive a life lesson or gain knowledge.In conclusion, a person should look at the glass half full.No one can predict the future so how can one know what to overlook.Look for things in life, you may even stumble across that wisdom you were looking for in the first place.

全文260个单词

得分：三分

ARGUMENT范文一:

This argument does not have any concrete information. It seems by Forestville, increasing their speed limit more accidents occured. We all know that accidents occur reguardless of what the speed limit of the highway we travel. Fortunately, Elmsford's accidents decreased during the six-months in discussion. This could be because of good weather, careful drivers, or any number of situations. On the other hand, Forrestville had an increase in accidents. The only determining factor given was the speed limit increasing. This in fact probably did play a big role in why there was a 15% percent increase in the accidents, but may not be the only factor. In order to make an accurate judgement on why there was an increase in automobile accidents the situation needs to be researched. Solid facts need to be stated. Clearly, to reduce the speed limit back to normal in Forrestville would not eliminate the problem.

全文150词

得分：三分

ARGUMENT范文二:

The argument about Scott Woods being undeveloped land seem to be a well thought out. The community has thought long and hard about what they wanted to do with the land. They do not want any homes or shopping malls on the land because it would not benefit the community as a natural parkland. By building the school on the vacant land is not benfiting the community as natural parkland either. There would be the same type of construction and traffic. That is very contradictory in itself. I think that the community would have to meet again and decide exactly was is best for this particular community and the children in the community. The presentation sounded so close and shut about what was going to be done about the land that it seemed usless for anybody to try to purchase it and do anything with the land. So if the Morganton community want something such as a school being built on the land that should have been what they voted on in the first place. They look very indecisive and even controlling. These are not very good ways to accomplish or do business.

全文193词

得分：三分

ARGUMENT范文三:

This argument is unreasonable in stating that people who do not want capped teeth should not use Smile-Brite toothpaste. There is no solid proof that indicates that there is such a relationship. The recent survey only stated that people who use Smile-Bright toothpaste are most likely those that have capped teeth. It could be the case that this toothpaste is best for capped teeth, although it did not say this. It also did not mention what percent of people have capped teeth later in life and use this toothpaste. The statement about when in life somebody uses the toothpaste is related to if they have capped teeth does not make sense. There are other reasons people get capped teeth like eating habits and regular dental check-ups. In addition, people brushing twice a day with this toothpast should have a positive effect not a negative one. People brushing more should get less capped teeth than people who brush less.

全文158词

得分：三分

ARGUMENT范文四

The argument is well presented and supported, but not completely well reasoned. It is clear and concisely written. The content is logically and smoothly presented. Statistics cited are used to develop support for the recommendation, that roller skaters who invest in protective gear and reflective equipment can reduce their risk of severe, accidental injuries. Examples of the types of protective equipment are described for the reader. Unfortunately, the author of the argument fails to note that merely by purchasing gear and reflective equipment that the skater will be protected. This is, of course, falacious if the skater fails to use the equipment, or uses it incorrectly or inappropriately. It is also an unnecessary assumption that a skater need purchase high-quality gear for the same degree of effectiveness to be achieved. The argument could be improved by taking these issues into consideration, and making recommendations for education and safety awareness to skaters.

全文151词

得分：三分

ARGUMENT范文五

This argument states the problem but the conclusion is not compatible to the rest of the statement.

Silver Screen recognized that fewer people attended movies in the studied year. I would recommend that they find out if this was happening with the entire movie market. It might of have been a poor year for movies for all movie companies.

Silver Screen recognized that of the movies that they did, they received favorable reviews. It should be concluded that they are doing well with the movies that they are making. Obviously, they are on track with the consumer in what they are producing.

I understand the conclusion that more people need to be exposed to the movies available for viewing. The last statement focuses on the fact that advertising needs to be increased, but does it by cutting production costs. This is wrong, instead of continuing what is working the company plans on focusing on advertising while taking away from producing. The consumers like the movies they make. If Silver Screen focuses their funds with advertising, producing funds will suffer. It will not matter how much advertising is done, if it is a poorly produced movie, nobody will want to go? Eventually, Silver Screen will get the reputation of producing bad movies. There has to be some compromise which doesn't hurt producing costs.

全文222词

得分：三分

看过之后作何感想呢？我想就算是让你现在不准备了，明天直接去裸考也要比这些好吧，这样的两篇ISSUE+ARGUMENT就是最终的AW三分，各位的实力应该远在其上，那么也就是说写个四分五分没问题了吧~

二、字数啊字数啊~~

上面10篇范文，issue普遍稳定在250上下，argument甚至降到了180，想必大家及时再紧张，模考的时候也可以写的差不多到这些的二倍吧~那还怕什么呢

而且ETS不会用绝对字数的线去卡你的~

三、错别字啊错别字~~

Rater在看你作文的时候是当做初稿来审的，谁的初稿没有笔误呢？不用过于追求完美的

四、思路啊思路啊~~

放心，作为天朝的人，我们小学时候具备的思维只要表达出来，也就可以去满足四分ISSUE的思维模式了，注意，ETS对四分的标准核心是一个“clear”，仅仅这个对于几乎所有国人，只要审题不错，无论你是用谁教的方法，都是没问题~

五、不行了啊~我要推考啊~

早也是这一刀完也是这一刀，想想你还有笔试要去准备

我见过不少推考的，其中真的可以推后之后认真准备的是极少数，多数人一推再推，退无可退的时候依旧是裸考受死

想想吧，推考要400两银子，退考你也要白扔掉700两

而且你真的甘心么？

你真的忍受的了再来一次的痛苦么？

你真的可以看着周围的同伴一个个都过去了，然后开始准备笔试的时候，自己还在为了干瘪的作文发愁么？

六、结尾啊结尾啊~~

关于结尾，不行就扔，万不得已的情况下，弃車保帅

而且ETS也是认可这种做法的

对于开头有疑惑的也是这样，上面的那些范文有的通篇写成一段，开头结尾都没有滴

七、申请啊申请啊~~

满目望去真的在申请过程中会被AW成绩卡到的人微乎其微，和中彩票的概率是差不多的，那么我们还怕什么，尤其是对那些像我一样从来没有抽奖中过奖的同学，考砸了也无伤大局，为什么不放手一搏呢？

八、找不到错啊分析不清啊~~

上面那五篇argument还不够说明问题么？放手去做，你总比那些要好吧

九、句式语法不够强啊不够强~~

你总比上面的十篇范文强吧，剩下的我就不用说啥了~~

十、组里都是牛人啊我好弱啊我好弱

跟他们比啥，你自然有自己的优势，而且最后谁考得高谁考得低还要另当别论呢，越是牛人才越该有压力，你怕啥。要知道从高分上丢分是很容易的一件事，从低分上长分也是~~

十一、

想想你过去的付出！想想你的同伴给你的鼓励！想想寄托上这么多战友的互帮互助！想想版主们天天累死累活的劳动！就算都不想了，好歹也要想一下我嘛~我的RP你随便拿，想拿多少拿多少~

为了给dies in flames组用上，临时赶工，做的有些粗糙了，回头我好好充实一下~~

最后，附上两首前辈留下的诗