寄托天下
查看: 2012|回复: 5
打印 上一主题 下一主题

[作文] Cambridge 6 test 2 writing task 2 [复制链接]

Rank: 2

声望
0
寄托币
232
注册时间
2010-6-24
精华
0
帖子
3
跳转到指定楼层
楼主
发表于 2011-10-4 17:43:39 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
When talking about successful sports professional, there's a wide admiration that they can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions.
   Some people claim this is fully justified,because the sports professionals have made tremendous effort to become successufl.Common People can't imagine their hardship. No success can be gained with ease. Thousands of sports men and women are trainning day after day. Getting up at 5 o'clolck,while you are still comfortably dreaming in bed,is just a start of their whole day's suffering. Furthermore, after years of training and races, most of them will suffer from some kind of pain and injure. But the cruel truth is that lucky comes to the few.The successful ones are just a tiny part of the whole group,many have retired silently, with no popularity,no much money,only an injured body.So when they do succeed,they deserve what they get.

   However,there are people holding different opinon that it's unfair for them to get that much.There are so many other professions in the world,and they all do contribution,may be comparatively more,to the society,but they get much less. The government should reallocate its money at a reasonable proportion to different field based on thier own significance.

   Perhaps there's an element of truth in both two sides,but in my  opinion,every contribution deserves to be awarded.So I would go for the first opinion that the sports professionals deserve what they get.But I also think that some other professions really deserve more than what they get now.
回应
0

使用道具 举报

Rank: 9Rank: 9Rank: 9

声望
44
寄托币
20189
注册时间
2005-1-23
精华
43
帖子
131

Taurus金牛座 荣誉版主

沙发
发表于 2011-10-4 18:03:05 |只看该作者
5-5.5
Reaching soul
As time pass
Hearing voice
On the magic cross
Creating interface
Through finger touch
Searching peace
In cyber space
Hunch is stylish
Above superficies
Life is synchronous
In between balance
It is for you …

使用道具 举报

Rank: 2

声望
0
寄托币
232
注册时间
2010-6-24
精华
0
帖子
3
板凳
发表于 2011-10-9 22:36:11 |只看该作者
2# bqiana


谢谢你 :)
我会继续努力。。。

使用道具 举报

Rank: 2

声望
0
寄托币
232
注册时间
2010-6-24
精华
0
帖子
3
地板
发表于 2011-10-9 22:51:04 |只看该作者
这是我朋友修改的:
When talking about successful sports professional, there's a wide disagreement on if  they can earn significantly more money than people in other important occupations.

Some people claim this is fully justified, because the sports professionals have made tremendous effort to become successful. Normally people cannot imagine their hardship. No success can be attained with ease. Thousands of sportsmen and women are training day after day. Getting up at 5 o'clock, while you are still comfortably asleep in bed, is just a start of their whole day's suffering.  After years of training and races, most of them will suffer from some kind of pain and injury. But the cruel truth is that luck only comes to the very few. The successful ones are just a tiny part of the whole group, and many have retired silently, with neither popularity, nor huge fortune, but only an injured body. So when they do succeed, they deserve what they get.
(Notes: You need give ur personal examples, at least one specific one to support your argument, for instance, there are tons of report on former Olympics winner end up homeless, given their limited and shorter professional lifespan, they shall get more)

On the other hand, there are people holding different opinion that the athletes’ income is unfair. There are so many other professions in the world that might contribute to the society comparatively more while getting less reward. The government should reallocate its money at a reasonable proportion to different field based on their own significance.
(Notes: I am not sure if to give suggestions like the last sentence is appropriate or not, I personally feel it is not. Give more solid argument, following your thought on more people are contributing to the society, after all athletes only mainly bring entertainment and maybe inspiration to the world while other occupations like doctors or peasants are saving lives or providing food for our survival. The ultimate result ascribing to their work is fundamentally more important, thereby demanding more reward)

Perhaps there's an element of truth in both two sides, but in my opinion, every contribution, no matter how much it is, deserves to be awarded accordingly. So I would go for the first opinion that the sports professionals deserve what they get. But I also think that some re-balance measurement shall be put in place to ensure fairness in other professions’ reward

使用道具 举报

Rank: 5Rank: 5

声望
0
寄托币
837
注册时间
2011-10-16
精华
0
帖子
33
5
发表于 2011-10-31 00:14:40 |只看该作者
谢谢!
想要飞的更高,就该把地平线忘掉。

使用道具 举报

Rank: 2

声望
0
寄托币
232
注册时间
2010-6-24
精华
0
帖子
3
6
发表于 2011-12-16 19:10:34 |只看该作者
5# 翔天之翼 谢什么

使用道具 举报

RE: Cambridge 6 test 2 writing task 2 [修改]
您需要登录后才可以回帖 登录 | 立即注册

问答
Offer
投票
面经
最新
精华
转发
转发该帖子
Cambridge 6 test 2 writing task 2
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1308938-1-1.html
复制链接
发送
报offer 祈福 爆照
回顶部