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发表于 2010-8-23 00:00:24 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

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发表于 2010-8-24 23:50:12 |只看该作者

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（09.01.23 NA） Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people should try several different jobs before they take a long term career.

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Many young people nowadays prefer to try several different jobs before they take a long term career. But is it right for all young people to do that? I believe that the author's statement is too absolute for me to accept. And I agree with the opinion that young people should try several different jobs before they take a long term career.

On the one hand, young people who try different jobs before they take long term career could bring them many advantages.

First of all, young people will gain lots of unusual experience when trying several different jobs before take a long term career, which will help them do their long term job better. For example, when I was a freshman, I have tried many part-time jobs. Once I got a job as a dish washer in a restaurant. After I was up on the job, I started to think about how to wash as many dishes as I can in a limited time. I tried several methods, and my efforts have been fruitfull. My boss even commended me upon my diligent spirit in my job. After went through the job, I believe that a man need to study assiduously no matter what job he take, and he will always be admired and get his goals fulfilled. And I can think of no better illustration of the idea than the obvious fact that young people could gain experience through trying several different jobs before take a long term career.

In addition, through taking several different jobs before take a long term career, young people could achieve knowledge of different areas. And I believe that it would help young people win out in their career. For instance, you could learn how to keep your stuff in order through taking a part-time job as a librarian. You also could learn how to get along with your work mate when you are doing different jobs.

On the other hand, not all young people need to take several different jobs before take a long time career. Individuals major in different fields must have different choices and plans for future career. For example, I am a major in law in the university and I think it's unnecessary for me to take several different jobs now. But this case is rare and too weak to weaken my conclusion.

To sum up, the issue whether to take several different jobs before take a long term career is a complex one, requiring subjective judgment. By both considering the factors discussed above and dissecting other circumstances not even mentioned here, I hold the opinion that young people should try several different jobs before they take a long term career.

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本帖最后由 cocomilky 于 2010-8-27 13:54 编辑

8月26日(09.02.21 NA) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Newspapers and magazines are the best ways to learn about a foreign country？

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As the globalization is booming, it becomes more and more important to learn about foreign countries. There many methods to learn about foreign countries. Among them , I hold the position that the Internet is the best way according my experience. Whereas, we cannot deny that some other beneficial ways to learn about foreign countries , such as newspapers and magazines, also bring us many advantages at same time. In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide concrete evidences to support my viewpoint.

To begin with, the amount of information about foreign countries is really plentiful and abundance on the Internet. The Internet provides us with different points of view of foreign countries. And the Internet describes different landscape and information about foreign. For example, you want to learn about New Zealand, and you could read travel notes of New Zealand by web celebrities or by "National Geographic". And you also could enjoy a film of landscape of New Zealand and the kiwi bird. You can admire "God Defend New Zealand" , the national anthem of New Zealand. What's more, there are many courses of The New Zealand Sign Language and you can study the language if you are interesting in it. And I can think of no better illustration of the idea than the obvious fact that the Internet is the best way to learn foreign countries.

Moreover, the refresh rate of information about foreign countries is fast and timely, and the Search Engines on the Internet is so useful that you could get what you want about foreign country easily. It is convenience for us to search the information on the Internet and the information is always up to the minute. For example, type "New Zealand" in the search item, "New Zealand - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia" is appear first. If you want learn the history of New Zealand, you can type " the history of New Zealand" in the search item, and you can get it quickly. simple like this!

Admittedly, the Internet has its undeniable demerits. For instance, some people visit a foreign country but it's an unhappy journey. When they are writing on their blog, maybe they will only talk about their prejudice of the country and do not mention the information about which aspect of the country they are fond of. It will bring other people the wrong information about the country. If you have a trip to this foreign country, you will have a new understanding by yourself. Or you could learn through newspapers and magazines, and it could reflect the tastes of the nation and is objective. However, the advantages of the Internet carry more weight than those of travel, newspapers and magazines. The case is rare and too weak to weaken my point.

To sum up, the issue of whether Newspapers and magazines are the best ways to learn about a foreign country is a meaningful but complex one.By both considering the factors discussed above and dissecting other circumstances not even mentioned here, I hold the position that the Internet is the best way to learn about foreign country.

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