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发表于 2012-10-26 17:09:22 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
“No field of study can advance significantly  unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study."



In this society, things are composed by many different elements .When we study one field ,we should apply different fields of knowledge to the field which we  learn.Borrowing experiences and knowledge from other fields of study has indeed brought great progress  in many subjects.  biochemistry,molecular biology  and so on are undoubtedly the hybirds of subjects originally thought far distant from another.
BUt such phenomenon by no means indicates that only  through sharing academic light of outsiders ,can an area of study make its frog-leap. In fact ,truly revolutionary advancement in some fields of study ,Newton's Law of Gravitation and Einstein's Theory of Relativity,for instance, are utterly genius ' flash of wisdom,little of  which is borowed from other subjects.
As for factors contributing to an academic subjects' signicant growth, they include many apart from sharing the outsiders' intelligence ,such as the long-term academic accumulation ,the appropriate social and economic support,the good-timing birth of geniuses and so on.
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发表于 2012-10-29 22:57:20 |只看该作者
“No field of study can advance significantly  unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study."



In this society, things are composed by many different elements .When we study one field ,we should apply different fields of knowledge to the field which we  learn.Borrowing experiences and knowledge from other fields of study has indeed brought great progress  in many subjects.  biochemistry,molecular biology  and so on are undoubtedly the hybirds of subjects originally thought far distant from another.


BUt such phenomenon by no means indicates that only  through sharing academic light of outsiders ,can an area of study make its frog-leap. In fact ,truly revolutionary advancement in some fields of study ,Newton's Law of Gravitation and Einstein's Theory of Relativity,for instance, are utterly genius ' flash of wisdom,little of  which is borowed from other subjects.

As for factors contributing to an academic subjects' signicant growth, they include many apart from sharing the outsiders' intelligence ,such as the long-term academic accumulation ,the appropriate social and economic support,the good-timing birth of geniuses and so on.

BEN评:
同学,你要好好梳理下你的习作。首段中心论点--分论点各段(理由+例子)--结尾段。

需要补的基本功:从网上下载The Elements of Style这本写作小书,重点看句子和段落的写作。

认真研读OG官方指南上的写作部分,4、5、6分文章及reader commentary。比较下自己不足的地方和改进的方向。
问我,考我,检验我的话,以便改善你自己!

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发表于 2012-10-31 13:00:32 |只看该作者
panmingming2008 发表于 2012-10-29 22:57
“No field of study can advance significantly  unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience ...

我以为没有人拍我呢 我写的不好 不知如何下笔 这篇烂透了 谢谢你的评论 ~

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发表于 2012-11-1 16:23:39 |只看该作者
本帖最后由 panmingming2008 于 2012-11-1 16:26 编辑
blestrock 发表于 2012-10-31 13:00
我以为没有人拍我呢 我写的不好 不知如何下笔 这篇烂透了  谢谢你的评论 ~



千里之行,始于足下。

写作要一鸣【惊】人,是要从一鸣【烦】人开始的。


通过写作、审视,发现自己的不足,然后修改,是可以不断进步的。

不妨坚持一个星期,每天一篇:写一篇,改前一天的文章,查相关题目的英文资料来扩展知识面和思考角度。

一个星期后再来把第一篇和第七篇对比一下,你会有【惊】喜的。

用这样的方法,你去做两个星期、一个月呢?

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