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发表于 2002-12-29 08:52:03 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

23. "People have been so encouraged by society to focus on apparent differences that they fail to see meaningful similarities among ideas, individuals, and groups."
斑竹前面那题太难咧，偶来贴一个，也算社会类吧，偶也写了一个，大家给批批。呵呵

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Noting that the idea of personality looms so large in the modern world, probably because as the society progresses, people are craving for more abundant information and distinctive ideas to adapt such a incessant varying world. We do are encouraged to focus on apparent differences, but do we fail to see meaningful similarities among ideas, individuals and groups? I don’t think so, so I will not agree with the issue above.

First of all, people never fail to notice similarities, actually, they never attempt to. Obviously, people chase differences is just because they notice the similarities and they get tired of too much of them. We need consistency after all. Who can imagine that the soldiers in the army wearing various clothes, some like being on vacation in Hawaii, while some like western cowboys, be strong and solidary enough to defend or to attack? That might be quite an interesting scene, but also terrible, hence impossible. Moreover, as far as nations are concerned, they can ally each other only if they realize their similarities of opinions on certain issues, of benefits their share, etc. On these similarities built the European Economic and Monetary Union, the NATO and so on, and the whole world is becoming a union as we see.

Secondly, it is people themselves focus on apparent differences rather than the society encourages them to do. The society is formed by people, whose living in the society lead to the formation of the conventions, mores, and trend of opinions. Similarities and differences are two edges of a thing which exist simultaneously, the more people focus on differences, the more similarities they had payed attention to. Therefore, they are not able to fail to see similarities, let alone meaningful ones. Say, although students are encouraged to have respective interests and to think independly, they use the same textbooks for learning in school. It is because the educators realize that the similarities of fundamental knowledge is important for them.

No doubt, there are possibilities that people fail to see meaningful similarities when they pay too much attention on differences. But it is the same as people may pay too much attention to similarities to notice they important difference. They, as a kind of mistakes, are unavoidable, but we could be more meticulous to reduce it.

In sum, people didn’t fail to see meaningful similarities among ideas, individuals, and groups, as the two are both significant to us. Neither do they want to be able to.

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我总觉着有点走题，可是不走题好象也写不了多少，郁闷。

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发表于 2002-12-29 23:37:09 |只看该作者

呵呵，gteryy你真可爱，帮我把题目都给发了：p 不过很巧哦，我今天刚好是要来发这道题的。：p

我看了你写的，也觉得有点跑题，主要是你的第二个观点，我觉得题目重点是在说differences and similarities哪个更重要的问题，而你的第二点是在驳斥题目中的society encourages people的说法，当然我也不能评判到底重点来驳斥这个地方ETS会不会欣赏。

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发表于 2002-12-30 07:50:46 |只看该作者

不奇怪

我通常是把ISSUE和ARGUMENT一样对待的，一个单词一个单词抠骨头，呵呵

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