寄托家园8T互助小组第四组

guozaiUID：33200

都已阅, 大家都很勤奋辛苦啊, 我还在堕落,惭愧惭愧
明天开始改了,痛改前非
好好学习

eyemeiUID：205999

晕，戒网了？这样也好，思想集中一点

我也是，控制上网时间，呵呵，加油

fmac97UID：2164711

不好意思，
我可能要消失一段时间。
特向组长请个假。
（具体多长时间我也说不清楚，也许两三天，也许直到考托）

大家继续加油！
我也要开始拼老命了！

bless all of you.
:handshake & :hug:

fmac97UID：2164711

我也简单说两句，

1. 文章第一句有好几处语法问题，我觉得这应该是大忌，别人看你的文章，第一眼就看到很多错误，印象分可能就不会高了。

2. 还有最后一点论据似乎说服力不大，养Pets有时可以增进人和人的交流，一些患有自闭症的儿童也是通过宠物疗法来克服自闭的。

总体感觉还行，继续努力！

[ 本帖最后由 fmac97 于 2006-8-5 12:19 编辑 ]

mayaUID：199038

原帖由 eyemei 于 2006-8-5 09:04 发表

Pets, such as birds, cats or other animals which people treat them as their members of family, have an ambiguous relationship among human beings. When it comes to the advantage or disadvantages p ...

感谢eyemei和coquelicol (维生C熊) 帮我批改
另外coquelicol (维生C熊)，我有点疑问，回复到我作文链接里了，你看一下
看来我还没从AW的思维中转换过来，感觉一段根本还没说个什么时间就快过去了
:L得好好看看TWE了，争取下次写好
我还有几个问题请教一下大家：
听力PARTA部分有时有那么几个题牵扯到习语问题，一半我可以根据语气判断出来，另一半就做错了，大家是怎么解决这个的？
另外问个弱点的问题:L，语法是多长时间啊？我一般17、8分钟做完，大概2－4个样子，后面争取全对
T单词我看有人说李小来的太少，是不是应该找个更多点词汇的书？
大家都加油，多多写作文，我喜欢改:lol

annocquUID：2127832

原帖由 eyemei 于 2006-8-4 12:32 发表
spawn是谓动吧

汗,只记得spawn是鱼卵的名词,忘了还有v的形式..

eyemeiUID：205999

原帖由 maya 于 2006-8-4 23:28 发表
同主题182，我的第一篇，有写的一起互改哈
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

Pets, such as birds, cats or other animals which people treat them as their members of family, have an ambiguous relationship among human beings. When it comes to the advantage or disadvantages provided by pets, different people have different opinions. However, in my view, I believe that there are far more disadvantages than benefits from the pets.

To begin with, with the social speed change leading to competitive and pressing daily life, people are facing more and more work to do no matter when they are at home or in the office.放在一个特定的case里，很好哦In this case, cultivating a pet is not a wise idea for us. Regardless of working outside, people have no time to consider more about their so-called "pets" family member. For example, as for modern people, we should always do work from dawn until night and particularly there's no time for coming come at noon or ideal time from work. Pets would easily distract employers' attention and diminish the work efficiency. If this phenomenon continues for a long time, not only would employers be fired but also the constantly developing pace of society would be decreased.感觉说的有点夸张，呵呵，:L感觉在闹革命

Secondly, pets, especially some luxurious ones, are too expensive for the normal family. After all, plenty of poor inhabitants who are still living in slums in some places and many immediate problems have been existed in this world. Nurturing a pet would definitely waste money which can contrarily solve the above problems and otherwise no benefits for the whole society. In addition, in certain circumstances, lots of infective diseases are owing to the pets since people always prefer embracing or walking with them in their spare time.:L感觉有点牵强哦，抱抱或是走路也没多大关系吧 Every year, government and certain offices will spend much money on this issue.

Last but not the least, paying more attention on pets would ultimately alienate one with others. Pets can just serve to some minor functions such as guarding the gate, playing with children. After all, humans are higher animals who should communicate with others to present their ideas or emotions about their daily life, while pets cannot play this role. According to some reliable surveys,if one could not communicate with others for a certain time, then some psychological or physical problems would emerge in this one's health. 这个挺好的 In short, people should not spend too much time on their pets.

In conclusion, although cultivating pets can help people enhance their kindness-especially for the children, more problems would affect people's normal life. Problems such as diseases, lonely individual characteristic, wasting too much time and money would all decrease life level of people and even harm the whole society.


开头：感觉很好啊
         就是那个ambiguous relationship好像有点别扭，我也不知道这样是不是很好

To begin with：感觉思路是好的，只是说的有点夸张，毕竟社会还有很多好年人，或是disable他们需要pets。感觉是不是把case范围缩小一点会好一点，比如说，从整个social到特定的一类特定的人，好像一个人奋斗在外的young people或是其他什么的。

Secondly：1感觉大多数穷人养的pets都不luxuriou哦
               感觉说浪费是个不错的角度，就是感觉是不是可以找个比普通人养了luxurious pets再更有代表性的呢               
               2同上啦，呵呵

Last but not the least：感觉能说这么清楚真很不错了，呵呵

结尾：还好，呵呵


感觉maya说的有点夸张，只在最后一段有一句夸奖的话啊，呵呵，pets快成全民公敌了。感觉写一般性的结论，写的时候是不是还是不太夸张的好啊。
个人感觉像有争议的issue类还是要稍微加一些好的方面平衡一下保险阿。
呵呵，感觉毕竟是考试阿，安全第一。

ps:感觉外国人非常非常喜欢pets.

mayaUID：199038

同主题182，我的第一篇，有写的一起互改哈
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

eyemeiUID：205999

晕哦，不是高手拉，也是查出来得
细细碎碎的不好记哈

fungsingUID：195065

原帖由 eyemei 于 2006-8-4 16:23 发表
(F)即可数又不可数的名词
不可数 可数
paper 纸 文件
rock 碎岩 块岩
collection 各种收藏品 同一种收藏品
sugar 砂糖 方糖
area 面积 地区
land 面积 区域
work 作品；工作 著作；工厂，工程，工 ...

谢谢高手了，哈哈
完全明白了:)

eyemeiUID：205999

原帖由 fmac97 于 2006-8-4 18:46 发表
1. 有sorry啊。
我们来大概翻一下吧：
W: 这门课对我来说太难了。
M: 后悔选它了？

我是这么理解的，不知对否？

第2题是不是答案错了？:confused:

呵呵，第一个明白了:handshake

第二题，95-08-22貌似答案没错

fmac97UID：2164711

1. 有sorry啊。
我们来大概翻一下吧：
W: 这门课对我来说太难了。
M: 后悔选它了？

我是这么理解的，不知对否？

第2题是不是答案错了？:confused:

[ 本帖最后由 fmac97 于 2006-8-4 18:53 编辑 ]

eyemeiUID：205999

原帖由 fmac97 于 2006-8-4 17:44 发表
1. 没有要放弃的意思啊。
不要做习惯性的推论。

2. 也看不出来。
by the way, 应该是I talked to philip.....

1，感觉regret也有推的成分吧
2，you are right~~:L

fmac97UID：2164711

1. 没有要放弃的意思啊。
不要做习惯性的推论。

2. 也看不出来。
by the way, 应该是I talked to philip.....

eyemeiUID：205999

感觉95年8月的听力，呼噜呼噜的，大家有没有这种一样的感觉阿

ps:1w:this course is much too hard for me
      m:sorry you decided to take it,huh?
      what dose the man ask the woman?
   
    answer: if she regrets taking the course
    问: if it's too late for her to drop the course
         感觉意思是说现在放弃太迟了，好像也是可以的吧

    2.M: I walk to philip today and he said he'd be coming to the party
      W: Oh, so he can come after all
      what can be inferred about philip?
     Answer: He has changed his plan
     问：没有看出来啊，汗
           还有，这是不是非典型的oh,so题型

[ 本帖最后由 eyemei 于 2006-8-4 17:27 编辑 ]