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If you ever have a chance toimmerse yourself in a college library for a full weekend, you must be impressedby this amazing experience of spending time with immeasurable amount of printedbooks. What is the pity? (这句话放在这里有点突兀,可以放在后面一点吧) The people nowadays seem seldom spend weekends or spare time inthis way, choosing a more relax kill-time entertainment--Television programs.It is surprising to see a new media can be spread so quicklly that almost beatthe old ones, sneaking into people's life so deeply. But i still hold apositive view toward the significance of our historical media method
(应该没错,但给我感觉这种组合很别扭) -printed book, reasoning that italways stand an irreplaceable state in human-beings' civilization.) H1 _& u, c# c' e
Undoubtedly, printed book has alonger history, which contributes to
(我觉得这个短语不恰当,一般理解为贡献,有作用的意思吧 contribute to a system? 我觉得还不如用set up建立系统之类的 ) a more perfect and amplest systemof knowledge. As everyone knows it, as a new media controled by the editors andcertain people, televison is not an efficient and effective way to reinforeone's wisdom and knowledge. But everyone can access the printed books andchoose the needed one for himself/herself. The system of information built bythe printed books are (is) wider and moreoptional than the TV programs. For example, supposing a student is doing hisresearch about a certain subject, the first way to gain the resource mostlywould be the printed books in the library, especially some historic references.It is no possibility for him to sit in the coach to wait for the topic he isdoing
(related) before the TV set." _' l5 @5 {4 E: G
Printed book has another importantfeature-the potential collective proper
(适合的,形容词?). Even today, with the rapid development of so many new media,the book basing on a permanent subtle (又是形容词?) is still of its cultural market is never gona to change (这句话为啥有两个is呢,没有读懂). Have you ever considered thisquestion, where are the information and resourses of the history on Internet orthe TV program came from. No surprising, from the printed books, for itsuniqueness of recording the history and the wisdom of ancient people. Inaddition, the feature of collection of the printed book is also of its proseven to today's cultural market. It is easy to find the materials in booksabout 100 years ago, when the television first invented, while the filmmaterials of TV show at that time are certainly difficult to be kept.
Some supporters of the television,or this digital media now, would probably say television is more educationaland at same time entertaining than the printed book. But just because of themoving images and constant information it is providing, (这里前后衔接得不是很顺畅) it seems no time for the audienceto make their response, not mention to think oneself. It seems more reasonableto call this process "receiving information" rather than "obtainknowledge" .- u( ?2 O* i- g! n, X! m
The new media such as televisionare really familiar to people in this modern society, and with their greatefforts in adding the fresh to our new life, the culture and tough topics seemmore accessable to folks. But the new ones are still not comparable to theprinted book, the one conveys the wisdom of ancient people and the realheritage of whole civilizations, has no doubt had greater effcts on society.
拼写错误没改
总的来说我觉得楼主的句子很流畅,就是个别的短语,句子之间的承接以及精确的用词要稍微留意一下
还有一个文章的题目主要是论述哪个对社会的影响比较大,而不能仅仅在信息量上面做比较,要从信息量过度到对社会的影响,所以我觉得有时不太切题,特别是最后一个论点说tv过得太快我们来不及反应,我觉得这个跟与社会的关系不相关呢
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