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A job with more vacation time or with high salary but offering less vacations, which one do you prefer? Many people may prefer more free time, while for others high salaries are more tempting. In terms of me, a job with high salary is apparantly more attractive and I'm willing to sacrifice my vacation time for it. There stand several incentives as well as(good~) reasonable considerations for my option.(观点明了)
First of all, as a novice in the laborforcemarket, what I am avid now is accumulation of working experiences and capitals,rather than plenties of spare time for vacation. Vacation time is attractive,though, I prefer to obtain more working skills and experiences in an intensiveworking condition. I appreciate a job with large amounts of tasks and challenges, with which I will grow rapidly in my career. However, if I don't have much work to do, I will feel lost at the meaning and value of myself.
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Furthermore, with limited money at hand,even the job offers me multitudes of vacation time, I cannot afford to pay forthese traveling cost. All the destinations in travelling Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement(这句在这感觉有点生硬, 个人觉得连后面那句合并成一句 Do you want to accept the less salary to spend more vacation?)? A job with more vacation time is better than a job with high salarybut less vacation time.
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(这段楼主paste过来的?好像首段啊~~)A job with more vacation time or with high salary but offering less vacations, which one do you prefer? Many people mayprefer more free time, while for others high salaries are more tempting. Interms of me, a job with high salary is apparantly more attractive and I'mwilling to sacrifice my vacation time for it. There stand several incentives aswell as reasonable considerations for my option.4 g3 X3 @2 ^( r0 ]) N& J
(paste)First of all, as a novice in the laborforcemarket, what I am avid now is accumulation of working experiences and capitals,rather than plenties of spare time for vacation. Vacation time is attractive,though, I prefer to obtain more working skills and experiences in an intensiveworking condition. I appreciate a job with large amounts of tasks andchallenges, with which I will grow rapidly in my career. However, if I don'thave much work to do, I will feel lost at the meaning and value of myself.4 {4 q! L" M$ {0 s$ O' w
paste?Furthermore, with limited money at hand,even the job offers me multitudes of vacation time, I cannot afford to pay forthese traveling cost. All the destinations in travelling brochures areattractive. Paris, the romantic city with clusters of classic architectures,artisy galleries, and vogue designed clothes, Hong Kong, the placecharacterized with both modern skyscrapers and traditional Chinese customs,Hawaii, the summer island with glorious sunshine and beaches, the blue sea andsky, are all what I’m long for. But the tangible problem is that I can affordnone of these trips, since I don’t have enough money., t# J4 z2 e3 w" d0 l( f
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Finally, I suppose a wiser career plan is to earn sufficient money at first. Only with the preparation of enough depositscan(这个词好正式啊~ saving用于个人的储蓄是否更准确些? 个人想法)(that) we decide a most suitable life style and take implementation in next step.Some people are inclined to the job that requires much energy and time(Chglish了 没有这个用法吧), since it (has given)give them a sense of satisfaction in career. Some people are susceptible to a job with more spare time to play, to travel or to focus on their own interests. Without the first accumulation step, we are more subject to makecompromises and choose a less perfect and suitable job that can hinder the happinessand valuation we originally deserve.brochures areattractive. Paris, the romantic city with clusters of classic architectures,artisy galleries, and vogue designed clothes, Hong Kong, the placecharacterized with both modern skyscrapers and traditional Chinese customs,Hawaii, the summer island with glorious sunshine and beaches, the blue sea and sky, are all what I’m long for. But the tangible problem is that I can afford none of these trips, since I don’t have enough money.
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Finally, I suppose a wiser career plan is to earn sufficient money at first. Only with the preparation of enough depositscan we decide a most suitable lifestyle and take implementation in next step.Some people are inclined to the job that requires much energy and time, sinceit give them a sense of satisfaction in career. Some people are susceptible toa job with more spare time to play, to travel or to focus on their owninterests. Without the first accumulation step, we are more subject to makecompromises and choose a less perfect and suitable job that can hinder the happinessand valuation we originally deserve.
总结: 论点明了,层次分明。
缺点: 出发点多从个人考虑了,可以尝试着以第3人称的角度出发,例子都是个人的想法,这样子没啥说服力~
ps: 感觉楼主用词是在追求难度,但是ets的要求是accurate, 所以用一般性单词也许会比生僻的词显得合理些
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