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shadowranUID：2864083

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2009.7.25
　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Movies and TV programs made in one’s own country is always more interesting than those made in other countries.　

Coincident with the development of the entertainment is the growing discussion that whether movies and television programs made in one's own country is more interesting than those made in other countries. From my own perspective, I disagree.


First of all, ancient movie broaden our horizons. It is common that the TV programs and movies from other countries always come with their own unique culture background. By watching Gossip girl, people in China get familiar with the scandal life of Manhattan with the gorgeous clothes and the special spots which are not easy to see in China. Prison Break like the name said told the story that happened in the prison which is unfamiliar for Chinese even for Americans themselves. The O.C shows the American school life with the love story around a couple of teenager, the thought and the attitude to the love are totally different from those of Chinese girls and boys.


Not merely the different life, do other countries' TV programs and movies also produced by advanced technology. Car chasing scene is one of the most significant aspects of the American movies, they have the profound experiences with that, the lens they used and the explosion scene are always with the precise technology. The CG animation technology make the unrealistic scene come true. The 3D film is also the big stride of the history of the movie.


Striking although the valuable aspects of the foreign TV programs and movies leads to are, the merits of our local country should not be ignored too. Our own products could be easily understood by the audience due to the same language, and it is easy to feel the emotions of the spots which are the common spot in our daily life. Who will not feel comfortable when the scene of hometown being before your eyes during living abroad?

In conclusion, although the local TV programs and movies is appeal to us as the similarity, ancient products give us the experience of different life and the enjoyment of modern technology. So, it is too reckless to say that the TV programs and movies of our own country are always better than those of other countries.

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Coincident (感觉有点不对？) with the development of the film is the growing awareness of the discussion that should movies and television always show audience good people being rewarded and bad people being punished. From my perspective, I am firmly convinced that it is necessary to show the bad ending of the good people and the bad people without being punished.


Basic to the film is the attraction. A recent investigation conducted by Chinese Academy of Social Science demonstrates that in China three-quarter people want to see the movie with the story that could not be seen in the normal life. This statistic may manifest the phenomenon that the majority of people will pay more money to the movie that contains the unusual plot on account of the attraction of the different experience. Thus, the movie with bad guy running away without the punishment is one of the best way to attract people, for most of the movie end with the good guy kill the bad guy, and audience commonly could predict the general ending even at the beginning of the movie so that they will lose the passion of appreciate all merits of the movie, which could also lower the interest of the movie. Consequently, trying something unusual is a good option for the film maker.


Not merely the attraction, does(去掉？) showing bad guys without punishment also contribute greatly to enhancing audience themselves. It is common that in the real world, most of the ending is not good, the good people often get nothing but the regret even though they show their kindness all the time. On the other hand, the bad guy such as the one lies to others and the greed business man, they always have the way to avoid the punishment and the law, and enjoy the life which should be adopted by good guys. So the movie should sometimes show the reality so that people could get access to the actual life and thinking about life after the movie.


Striking although the advantages of showing bad without the punishment leads to are, the good points of showing good people getting reward should not be ignored too if the positive influence is taken into deliberation. Obviously, most people could be encouraged by the movie which shows the bad guys with the bad ending, and know that no matter what, justice exists.(know that justice exists anyway) In addition, especially for the children, they believe what they saw and the positive movie is the best advisement(advice) for them. Thus, movies should depict the story that bad guys sometimes could avoid the punishment.(意思说反了？)


In conclusion, though the movie which shows the bad people getting punishment has the positive impact, it is reckless to say that moves and televisions should always show audience good people being reward because showing in the opposite way could attract more attentions and reflect the reality.
总体上写的不错，结构，理由都没问题。有一些句子说的不太恰当。

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