【daily writing 特训小组】作业贴 by zypxfkl

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Colleges or universities should offer more courses to prepare the students for the future before they start working ,agree or disagree?

Nowadays, colleges and universities are playing a more and more important role in people’s life. For most of people ,especially for young students, if they are still at sea about what will lead them to glory,then the colleges or universities could be the option.Students who attend the colleges or universities are going to take full advantages to prepare themselves
for the future.As for the topic
whether colleges or universities should offer more course to prepare the students for the future,I totally agree .

The most important reason for my opinion is that it is necessary for students to enlarge their vision by allowing diversified courses into their curriculum.By this way, students will have a great chance to expand their knowledge span,which is helpful for their future job.Supposed that you major in mathematics, a boring but useful subject,how could you survive in the society knowing nothing but the formula and equation.Obviously, taking more courses means that you will have more opportunities than others who have a smaller knowledge span.Here comes another example, you
and
one of your classmate apply (for the same position of ) the same company, when you have the same GPA, but coincidence with the CEO is that you and your possible boss have the same interest on football ,then the outcome is obvious.

Moreover,different courses do have many other meanings in one’s daily life .It is the art classes that show you the beauty of the world
and teach you how to appreciate the arts .And when you play the piano or guitar in music classes ,you will learn the philosophy that the more you practice ,the more confidence you will gain.What’s more,the writing skills of you will be improved when you attend the literature classed (by the poems that tell us profound meanings in few words,which teaches us how to write precisely).

What is important to students’ personal relationship is that taking more courses make it easy to make new friends. When you have the same course ,you will have abundant topics to talk about ,such as the history of the course ,the questions you may have about the course ,or even the personalities of your professor.It makes your school life corlorful.

In a word , life is like a box of chocolate ,you will never know what you are going to get . Taking more courses improves the students’ ability and prepare them for their future,so that I agree that colleges or universities should offer more courses for students.


红色部分为自己稍微改的，求狂批。

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etako0 发表于 2012-6-27 22:13
lz 改好了 我的作业今天交不了了 寝室断网 还麻烦过两天帮我看下吧？

好嘞。。。

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lz 改好了 我的作业今天交不了了 寝室断网 还麻烦过两天帮我看下吧？

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songlu87 发表于 2012-6-25 10:35
非常抱歉，有些晚了，望楼主见谅

谢谢帮改啊。。。好几天没写作文了。。。期末事儿特别多。。。

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0626 作业贴

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非常抱歉，有些晚了，望楼主见谅

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0622 作业  各位看官过目

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作业改好了。。。

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0621 作业

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6/20 作文已改，楼主过目。

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6.20已改

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这两天事儿确实太多。。。0620 独立写作

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mikejason2005 发表于 2012-6-18 15:57
a round mentality is essential
不是round是sound

恩恩。。。感谢点评。。。确实在选取论点的时候是问题。。。共勉！！！

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秋雨荆州 发表于 2012-6-18 14:07
继续加油

恩恩。。。一定坚持。。。:victory: