issue80 这一篇写的巨烂，不好意思贴了都，所以比较好拍哦

foreverlovesUID: 166930

80."All students should be required to take courses in the sciences, even if they have on interest in science"

With the rapid development of society, science has played an important role in every aspect of our social life. I totally agree with the quotation that all students should be required to take courses in the science because of the following reasons.

In the first place, science is a valuable bequest handed down from one generation to another and finally to us. If we take a look at the human history, we will find it brutally true. Even before languages are invented, science is passed from one to another by means of carving characters and pictures on the walls of the caves-the place where they lived. After printing comes about, books dominate this process.  To say it is valuable is because in this way, we only need to take advantage of it instead of repeating what our ancestors have tried and failed to do. Thus, in the scientific field, One’s success is largely due to the work done by the forerunners.

In the second place, science invests with us such an ability as to conquer the nature and make our life more comfortable. This can be well illustrated if we compare our ease, colorful life today with the hardship which our ancestor once experienced long times ago. In ancient times, our ancestor lived in caves cold in winter and hot in summer, wearing leafs and the fur of the animals. they made a living by hunting games, feeding on themselves with all kind of edible things which from today's point of view is incredible; As to keep alive is the main task of daily life ,they have little spare time to enjoy. On the contrary, nowadays we live in tall buildings, temperature in which is controlled by air condition. We wore clothes from all the part of the world which is well knit and made. We need not go out for hunting yet we can still have a good meal. When we feel boring, we can browsing the internet and download a new game for entertainment. How do all these great change come about? it is quite sure that without science compelling, all this is no more than a mirage.

In sum, science is a tool with which we not only understand but also change the world. Therefore, it is necessary for  a student who is going to be the architect of the nation, to take scientific courses in order to qualify himself for their work in the future.

foreverlovesUID: 166930

谢谢
是有点少了啊,本来应该好好改改的,但是觉得自己有时候有想法但是表达不出来,
我本来想说科学很重要,所以我们无论有没有兴趣都要学习科学,但是写出来之后
找不到兴趣在什么地方了,所以就跑题了
但是要说为何没兴趣的也要学,论证就费点周折了

总之这篇文章不是很成功,回头好好改改.

lakeqianUID: 157560

正文就两段？

science is a valuable bequest handed down from one generation to another and finally to us.Thus, in the scientific field, One’s success is largely due to the work done by the forerunners.第一段扣题吗？

science invests with us such an ability as to conquer the nature and make our life more comfortable.扣题吗？

这篇是想让你写学习科目与兴趣的问题。
可以写：
学理工的人当然要好好学科学。
我们的日常生活充满了科学的产物。任何人想对日常生活有了解并能正常的生存就要学科学as基础素质。
对于对科学没兴趣的人，也应该学但是标准可以降低。

九月爱上乒乓球UID: 151821

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