0910G SPECTACULAR 备考日志 by juventusland[洋彼岸之风]--just treat as a game

juventuslandUID: 2631955

一个大二的学生就要准备GRE，真不容易啊。这是很多同学跟我说的，曾经犹豫过，也犹豫从1月考试背红宝是否太早，怕停不下来了。前天终于报完名，心也定了，想起最近因为考试都没怎么复习，突然觉得有种紧迫感。
     呼呼，加入作文小组还是感觉到一份压力啊。作文一直是我的弱项，习惯了4 6级作文，在半个月前考试看作文大讲堂时，不由得头晕目眩无奈放弃。拖了几天才逼自己写了第一篇ISSUE，但实在是很不满意。可以说，AW也是我最怕的一部分了，希望今后自己不断加油，在大侠们的帮助之下稳步前进，我也会好好努力地。由于此前没怎么准备作文，希望从6月开始，每两天至少一篇ISSUE（6月份考试很多，比较忙），争取慢慢学会帮人改作文，作文确实是我的弱项，我会通过我的努力来弥补和大家的差距的，还准备阅读GRE难句。每天看ECONOMIST一篇S T。同时不忘红宝。。
个人格言：God never closes a window without opening another.
理想分数：issue 5,argument 5.但ISSUE 4 我也满意了。V 600+ Q 800(理想的~）
  接受各位的监督，共同努力。为AW好成绩奋斗

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哈哈，欢迎欢迎，这个组不仅是作文的组，还有建议将计划细化，一周或是一日一做，进程大家清晰可见，自己也不能偷懒，:-)

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忙里偷闲5 24
   明天就是可恶的一门专业课考试了，焦头烂额中，看得晕了看了两个LIST红宝，突然发现难得看看红宝比复习专业课还是有趣的。。。晚上继续奋斗专业课，没时间上网，现在就写下成果吧
   其实也就是看了两个LIST而已。。。让人PLEASED的是，终于收到ETS确认函了。。
   明天考完专业课就很闲，可以好好准备G到周三了，然后端午陪女朋友。。。回来正式AW奋斗行动！！

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第一次作业。。。(先交提纲吧，完整的晚上再交。。课比较多，见谅。。）
A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow students in different parts of the of nation to determine which academic courses to offer.
提纲：
The speaker asserts that balbalbal… may be on the basis that national curriculum is more economical and easy to manage .But the final judgment should need more analysis
这个观点要从多方面的角度来分析看待。
1我们得承认，使用国家统一的课程更加方便统一化管理，特别如一些举出的道德课等，对学生的好处是不言而喻的。而且全国统一，更加经济而且方便老师和学生和教育方法上的相互交流。
I concede that using national curriculum is easier for the ministry of education to manage. Especially if some moral lessons open over the whole nation ,It is surly beneficial to students in their ethos and psycho.What is  also very important,national curriculum spares less and gives more convenience to educators and students to communicate  in different districts  
2然而由于各个地区的生活，风俗、经济水平等差异（如计算机课程对在落后地区的普及）。用国家统一课程标准来限定学生们的学习发展可能会抑制学生们对不同知识进行探究的热情，也让教学模式过于单一化。会在一定程度上限制不同地区人的特点。
While,there will be diversities of customs,economic quality levels.For example,can we force the under-developed areas to propel the use of national computer classes?Worse more, national curriculum will inhibit students the enthusiasm to seek after what they want to know and make the classes prosaic.
3对于现今激烈的竞争社会，在求学阶段，学会一些独特的技能和思维是很有用的，如果用国家统一课程的话，学生的创新思维在一定程度上就被局限了。而学习一些有地方性特色的课程，在以后的竞争中，就可能拥有自己的特长之处。
In the fierce-competition society,learning some unique skills and nurture some creative ideas are beneficial to students’ future.If the nation use the same corricculum,students’ minds may be limited.While studying some classes with local color may help you stand on the vantage ground in few years’ competition.
可见，虽然国家统一课程有着减少花费和利于交流的优势。


论证主要方式：分析，对比论证。
主要事例：比如国家统一要求计算机课时，落后地区该如何办？当今社会竞争激烈，学生们如果学习同样的课。以后用什么特长来证明自己的竞争力？ETC
哈佛大学就连续多年开设统一道德课，对全学院开设，有着广泛好评。
与ISSUE 34 比较：中文大意：与其让学生选择不同的学科：从艺术和人文科学到物理、生物。还不如只选择对以后工作有帮助的学科。此文的论证也能为我的第三个观点提供支持。（对将来工作地重要性要放在更高位置）。

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题目：ISSUE5 - "A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer."
字数：375          用时：00:48:44          日期：2009/5/26 22:05:04
字数很不够，以后努力！！

   The speaker asserts that same national corriculum until students go to college is better than different academic courses  determined by different parts of the nation.But I think the final conclusion should need more analysis.
   I concede that national corriculum can save money by printing same books,for instance.And be more effective because the ministry of education can just design rules so that they can easily protect the education system.
What is more essential,It means provides both students and teachers a more larger space to change ideas and solve problems together.It is necessary to open  same classes such as moral lessons over the country.In harvard,there is a very popular moral corriculum focus on practical ethics.I think it can make its students to be more chaste.Harvard is a good example to assert the importance of opening moral classes in different areas if we see harvard as a nation and diversity faculty as different areas.
   However,I have to say that because there are different economic quality levels,customs and cultures in different areas.It is hard to just use a unique corriculum.How students can propel the commputer classes in under-developed districts where few students own computers?And how can you make Muslim learn believe in Academy of Christ?Yet we can force them to learn but it will not be a good start.Another  national corriculum's disadvantage is lack of  flexibility. That everyone learns the same makes the classes prosaic,and it will inhibit peoples' enthusiasm and intrest who are whether educators or students,while they are what successors should have.
  In the society which is fiercely competitive. It is beneficial for students to learn some unique skills and nurture some special ideas,which can make them more competitive when they want to find jobs or do business.However,national corriculum is hard to make them be adinstinctive person when they accept same classes over the whole country,What also means  inhibiting students' creative ideas.While when you learn some classes with local color may benefit you more,ande help you stand on the vantage ground in competition with others.
   In sum,I think although  a same national corriculum have some adavantages campared with allowing schools to determine deifferent couses,It is should be more cautious to make the final decision,because it is lacking in flexibility and hard to educate a person with creativity.

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第一印象：48分钟啊  第一次来说很快了
  第二印象：第一段的题目改写好像改写的不够充分，改的句式变化再大一点就好了
   第三印象：句子之间有点碎，感觉不整体。长难句用的不够，不过那个What also means  的语法没看明白，给我讲讲好不？
   第四印象：诶呀呀，我这个坏人  我自己明明都写不出来这么好的，怎么净挑毛病呢？？
总结：向你学习

juventuslandUID: 2631955

谢谢评价啊~~确实写作是我的一直以来的弱项。What also means那个写的时候没认真想过，好像是有点问题，回来再查查~~看来句子的组织还是有很大进步空间的~~总之谢谢你点评了。
   再一次对你端午帮我那么多忙表示感谢~~好好督促另外两个没出现的组员法~~

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作业第一部分。。
1、"We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whose views contradict our own; disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning."总频34 学习类
关键词:share contradict inhibit
类型：比较型，相同观点比不同观点更重要
ISUUE主要结构：Without B there will be problems, Without A there will be more problems,A CAN…..so I can not agree with the speaker ,need more analysis.（1 2 分论点）
Disagreement SELDOM cause inhibit learning,some pressure can make them work effectively（3 4 ）

分论点1：虽然我得承认，有时候分歧容易造成争吵，太多反对可能会让人丧失信心。（without B,only A）。然而，更糟糕的是。如果所有的旁人全是支持他的，就不容易发现我观点中存在的漏洞，不利于理论的完善。而且太多的支持容易滋生他的骄傲情绪，不利于他继续发扬研究精神。（without A,only B）
分论点2：不同的意见能让观点持有者更加敏锐的发现观点中存在的问题并努力改善它们，找更多的证据来证明观点，因为没人都希望自己是正确的。Disagreement can facilitate people to find their mistakes in their views and work harder to find more evidence to approve.
3：contradictory opinion is the way to strengthen the competition and people’s enthusiasm，，while not cause stress and inhibit learning, with appropriate preesure.不同的观点往往导致激烈的竞争，这能提升人们的热情。伴随而来的压力有益于促进人积极性而不是抑制学习。
4：很多伟大的思想结晶都是在质疑和反对声中不断进步而形成的，这种思想上的形成过程对伟大科学发明有强的推动作用。。。例子：。。。波尔和爱因斯坦在相互的辩论过程中各自发展处了伟大的理论


7、"The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records."总频99 科技类
关键词：record ,comtemporary life,form of documentation.
论点：video camera(?) 记录现代生活来说比用written records为更重要的documentationgl应用
video camera摄影机，觉得应该理解为影像记录，和文字记录对比written record文字记录documentationg历史的整理
支持作者观点。
1：The advantage.影像记录作为一种更现代的方式，具有承载量大，更直观（视觉刺激），传输更方便。体现当今的互联网和多媒体时代文化。
2：当今社会广泛应用video camera：网络的发展为它提供了大平台。各种实拍视频网站。还有各种电视电影资料片等。而且直观的视频能让观众以自己的角度来认识历史事件
3相比于video camera 文字记录并不十分直观，并且劳动量过大。而且可能会被渗入个人情绪，不知不觉感染读者。而且在高科技时代。我认为文字记录也要不断革新，如现在的论坛，新闻网站（这句有点偏）
4然而，不得不承认文字记录还是有很强生命力的，他作为一种古老的记录事件方式。早已被人们所接受。一些古老的资料也只有文字记录了。而且文字记录更能表现出一种历史性。
8、"It is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders（政治领袖） to withhold information from the public." 总频69 政治类
关键词:political leaders, withhold information, public
Withhold隐瞒，不宣扬。
同意作者观点---- 论证----让步
分论点1：有些是否向公众隐瞒信息是非常必要的，是政治领袖必须的。比如一些信息虽然真实，但如果宣传出去由于民众或者媒体的夸大，造成社会的恐慌和动荡。如当今的H1N1型流感
分论点2：一个优秀的政治领袖，就必须能掌控什么时候该向民众宣布消息，什么时候该适当隐瞒，如果一味向民众隐瞒。会造成信息的阻塞，而造成严重后果。如当今的H1N1型流感，就不能让人们觉得传染病蔓延很快。但也必须让公众直到这种流感的危害性和预防方法等。这样就避免人们可能的因为不正确的渲染误导引发社会问题，也不会因为对疾病的不了解而造成很大的伤害。
分论点3：信息的透明化在很大程度上评判一个国家是否民主的标准。政治领袖在这方面的政策也会影响人们对国家政权的看法。如在民主化很高的国家推行政府信息公开化的等，有利于遏制贪污腐败现象。满足国家居民的信息渴求。反而有利于社会发展
（总之，。。。我的总之。。。觉得ISSUE 8感觉内容比较贴近，但是很难展开思路。。。
晚上赶得一部分作业。。。明天写ISSUE 8 和另3篇提纲，提纲可能会写的快点了）

juventuslandUID: 2631955

[xiaxia~~~a good news for video game lovers.Let's tell our strict parents to see the article
http://www.economist.com/science/displaystory.cfm?story_id=13726738.
But do not too be optimistic,You and the article can persuade your parents only you play non-violent games^_^.You  love Online games?war3?cs?Oh,bless your parents are volubilities.

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Issue 138:Only through mistakes can there be discovery or progress  学习类
关键词：only,mistakes,discovery,progress
通过错误才能有发现和进步
这个是不是1分论点反对意见能促进人们发现更多的错误的进一步延伸？也是论证“这种思想上的形成过程对伟大科学发明有强的推动作用”的一种论证可从此ISSUE中提取？

关键的关键ONLY！！
分论点一：错误确实能促进人们发现和进步，在错误中不断汲取教训，寻找更合适的方式。
分论点二：而这种不断的失败和错误，不断的继续尝试是科学发展的主要动力，也可以培养人们的优秀品质。历史上很多名人事例哇。。。
分论点三：然而，并不仅仅只有通过错误能发现和取得进步。人不是一辈子活在错误中的，享受成功的喜悦，体验竞争的激烈。只要能增强人的自信和动力，提高他们的热情。就能discovery or progress

Issue 114:Humanity has made little real progress over the past century or so.Technological innovations have taken place,but the overall condition of humanity is no better.War,violence,and poverty are still with us.Technology cannot change the condition of humanity
关键词：progress, the past century.change
2个主要观点：1技术革新未带来人类更好的处境。。2技术不能改变人的生活处境
与ISSUE 7。影像记录相对于文字技术是一种上世纪的新技术。114我想否掉2个观点。这样我就可以用ISSUE 7的方面观点来作为分论点的一个论据
提纲
1一个世纪以来，人们的生活水平还是有很大提高，从机械时代步入信息时代。衣食住行更加方便。
2。。不过得承认，一些战争的阴影和全球暴力还是威胁着安全。但这是多种因素造成的，不能否决掉技术的好处（意思就是一个问题仍然存在且与A有一定关系，但不能因此否定A的作用）
3说技术不能改变人的生活更是错误的。BALABABALA。。一堆事实论证（技术对人类的影响）
4发散。要更好的发展科技，并且利用科技。这是需要努力的。科技发展和合理应用对人类的生活提高有很大的作用。

ISSUE 43 To be an effective leader,a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.
关键词：effective leader,must,standareds.
Must maintain standards!!这么强的命题，什么标准。HIGHEST。什么方面？伦理和道德。道德标准，向公众隐瞒信息和道德有关么？这是种联系吧
提纲
1：一个具备highest ethical and moral standards能符合民众对领导者的价值期望，也能让民众更安心。获得民众的信任，才能有利于领导者政策思想的推广。
2EFFVTIVE LEADER必须拥有的特质。领袖气质，大局观，临危处事能力等都是要基于highest ethical and moral standards的
3如果没有highest ethical and moral standards。那么将会带来很多麻烦的问题。也不利于领导者威信甚至导致遭弹劾。。。克林顿？
4诚然好的领导者需要有一些其他的优秀特质。但不可忽略highest ethical and moral standards。
我总觉得我政治方面缺少知识，2篇政治类相对于科技和学习来说写提纲更困难。

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政治类的文章看来是我的难点啊，要好好筹备ISSUE 8估计11点前上交~红宝在过第三遍，最近由于端午没背。这星期的成果是LIST 27-LIST 31。43-46.难词打上来比较麻烦~~以后写备考日志的时候再上传吧

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The author claims that as desirable political leaders,they never tell all information to the public.But I think the conclusion need more reasonable analysis.
    Political leaders often keep the public from knowing some information for the purpose of keeping the society stable.Sometimes what they do can pretend panic from spreading  uncontrollable.We also can say they tell white lies what can keep people away from depression and stress to the public.If they tell everything they know,the information may be contorted by some media or some groups of conspirations to mislead citizens.For example,the H1N1  influenza epidemic spreads over the world.The government should tell the truth so that can improve people’s awareness of defending the flu,and not exaggerate its threatening which will make the society in a panic.
    However, sometimes leaders hold much information while it contributes to people’s hostility and social turbulence. If a government hide less information,the public thinks the government is more demorcratic.People will doubt less thus the government is more trustworthy,even that  is about financial problems, forest fires more related to social stability,or epidemic more  related to individuals.What is more, though if the public know more information,political leaders may suffer criticism, and various sounds and opinions will come out in the society.criticism will also encourages leaders to think out the ways to solve problems.And different ideas will also accelerate solving problems,therefore makes the society in harmony.People should have right to know truth,they play main role in society,when meeting problems,it is a right for them to know and also an obligation.
    No leaders succeed in propagating supreme because even they can force the public to conform their govenments ,the discrepancy and resistence confrontery creates in the public.The result is always that these leaders all from power.So desirable leaders will not do such fool things.They know how to keep the society in harmony and make a good relationship to the public.
    In sum,Though in some special period,political may withhold some information.The public prefer see the government with its leaders hide less information because  it is a good reflection of a democratic society and  a harmonious society.

juventuslandUID: 2631955

11点断网。。所以把作业先发上，没来得及怎么修改。我已经发现我写政治类的提纲和文章时都有言之无物的问题。。。需要以后练。。。还是那句话。。。虽然我的基础在小组中算差，但慢慢赶，我相信我能

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今日日志大头条。。。
俺电脑进水硬盘坏了。。估计明天才能人来修好。。。换硬盘重装系统。。。真是个悲剧。。我亲爱的数据啊。。。今明两天只能借同学电脑上网了。。。不能很多时间。。干脆好好准备后天的考试了，。。。

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终于考完了。。。虽然几天后又下一门。。。然后2天后又下一门。。。不过总归好点了。。。。先去背单词看难句。。。背范文明天。。。第二次作业写的很烂，自己修改。。明天。。。明天。。再写3提纲吧。。。考试实在是很繁重。。。不舍得绩点的说