0910G[North America Flying] Issue131 by 麦子

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Issue 131
As the most important treasure of humans, arts have been promoting the improvement of the society for thousands of years, from the ancient Egypt civilization to the Europe Renaissance, and even the high-speed developing world today. Even some times, the artwork only represents the artists’ incomprehensive ideas, the art, is still reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulse of a society in most cases, for most of the successful and influential artist are ones who have acute insight of the living condition and the strong society responsibility, which will showed in their works.

Admittedly, arts are derived from the normal life, but superior to it, which is the reason why arts could disclose some essence of the society in some ostensibly unrelated way, such as reveal the darkness of the society by painting. As we know, almost all the artwork, such like music, painting, literature, are all based on the creator’s fundamental life experience. So no matter what the artwork is, we can also find the realistic prototype in life which reveals the society hidden ideas at the standpoint of the artists. The famous Chinese tang poem is an apt illustration for this point. There is no doubt that the middle tang dynasty is one of the most powerful period of China, so from the poem that time, we can easily feel the beauty and leisure of the whole society, such as the poem of the idyll that time. But comparing with such poem of the later period, there is an extreme strong contradiction. With the society’s turbulence, poet inclined to show the people’s poor life and the cruel battle, disclosing the dark side of the government.

What’s more, the art was definitely not the copy of the real world. Before it can be called a real artwork, a work needs to be recreated by the artist for a long time, so the artworks can always contains the deeply thought of the social problems leading people to the answer of the further society problem. For example, the famous Russian writing “The Chameleon”, in which the writer lashing a man who is always changing his own position without considering any other people’s benefits, is a topical instance probing a society serious problem in a simple way. Thus, the art can do help the normal people know more about the conditions they lived in and help to perfect the society.


On the other hand, I admit that the art may not reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulse of a society all the time. Because not all the artist can present what they thought in an appropriate way all along, which is also an important facts that criticizes a work’s success or failures. So only those minority successful works meaningful in help the discovering of the essence behind.

All in all, as a subjective creation derived from the normal life, art is not too far to any one. What’s more, it also gives us a special view of the world. So, even though there are some uncertain facts, art is still a revolution of hidden ideas and impulse of a society which can help the better understanding and improvement of the world,

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As the most important treasure of humans, arts have been promoting the improvement of the society for thousands of years, from the ancient Egypt civilization to the Europe Renaissance, and even the high-speed developing world today. Even some times, the artwork only represents the artists’ incomprehensive ideas, the art, is still reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulse of a society in most cases, for most of the successful and influential artist are ones who have acute insight of the living condition and the strong society responsibility, which will showed in their works.

Admittedly, arts are derived from the normal life, but superior to it, which is the reason why arts could disclose some essence of the society in some ostensibly unrelated way, such as revealing the darkness of the society by painting. As we know, almost all the artwork, such like music, painting, literature, are all based on the creator’s fundamental life experience. So no matter what the artwork is, we can also find the realistic prototype in life which reveals the society hidden ideas at (from)the standpoint of the artists. The famous Chinese tang poem is an apt illustration for this point. There is no doubt that the middle tang dynasty is one of the most powerful period of China, so from the poem that time, we can easily feel the beauty and leisure of the whole society, such as the poem of the idyll that time(可去掉). But comparing with such poem of the later period, there is an extreme strong contradiction. With the society’s turbulence, poet inclined to show the people’s poor life and the cruel battle, disclosing the dark side of the government.

What’s more, the art was definitely not the copy of the real world. Before it can be called a real artwork, a work needs to be recreated by the artist for a long time, so the artworks can always contains the deeply thought of the social problems leading people to the answer of the further society problem. For example, the famous Russian writing “The Chameleon”, in which the writer lashing a man who is always changing his own position without considering any other people’s benefits, is a topical instance probing a society serious problem in a simple way. Thus, the art can do help the normal people know more about the conditions they lived in and help to perfect the society.


On the other hand, I admit that the art may not reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulse of a society all the time. Because not all the artist can present what they thought in an appropriate way all along, which is also an important facts that criticizes a work’s success or failures. So only those minority successful works (are) meaningful in help the discovering of the essence behind.

All in all, as a subjective creation derived from the normal life, art is not too far to any one. What’s more, it also gives us a special view of the world. So, even though there are some uncertain facts, art is still a revolution of hidden ideas and impulse of a society which can help the better understanding and improvement of the world,

除了个别地方有小错误，整篇文章还是不错。
论述点充分，逻辑有阶梯性，语言流畅。

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呵呵 我也看错了 我应该改ha的... 既然改了就发上来吧...
131"The arts (painting, music, literature, etc.) reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society."

As the most important treasure of humans, arts have been promoting the improvement（这个用法重复啦~改一下） of the society for thousands of years, from the ancient Egypt civilization to the Europe Renaissance, and even the high-speed developing world today. Even some times, the artwork only represents the artists’ incomprehensive ideas, the art, is still reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulse of a society in most cases, for most of the successful and influential artist are ones who have acute insight of the living condition and the strong society responsibility, which will showed in their works.
先来了几句background information，再表明support的立场，给出理由for***

Admittedly,(总觉得抛出来这个词之后，肯定有要反驳的东西，但你这里可能不是这个意图。) arts are derived from the normal life, but superior to it, which is the reason why arts could disclose some essence of the society in some ostensibly unrelated way, such as reveal the darkness of the society by painting.（too generalized，可以举个具体的例子。） As we know, almost all the artwork, such like music, painting, literature, are all based on the creator’s fundamental life experience. So no matter what the artwork is, we can also find the realistic prototype in life which reveals the society hidden ideas at the standpoint of the artists. The famous Chinese tang poem is an apt illustration for this point. There is no doubt that the middle tang dynasty is one of the most powerful（or prosperous）
period of China, so from the poem that time, we can easily feel the beauty and leisure of the whole society, such as the poem of the idyll that time (which present***解释下更好). But comparing with such poem of the later period, there is an extreme strong contradiction. With the society’s turbulence, poet inclined to show the people’s poor life and the cruel battle, disclosing the dark side of the government.（例子很好，如果叙述得再清晰点更好，首先可以点出唐诗在一定程度上记录和体现了唐朝的历史，both前期和后期。）

What’s more, the art was definitely not the copy of the real world. Before it can be called a real artwork, a work needs to be recreated by the artist for a long time, so the artworks can always contains the deeply thought of the social problems leading people to the answer of the further society problem. For example, the famous Russian writing “The Chameleon”, in which the writer lashing a man who is always changing his own position without considering any other people’s benefits,（这句重新组织一下吧，没表达好） is a topical instance probing a society serious problem in a simple way. Thus, the art can do help the normal people know more about the conditions they lived in and help to perfect the society.

On the other hand, I admit that the art may not reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulse of a society all the time. Because not all the artist can present what they thought in an appropriate way all along, which（word纠错是建议改成that，我也说不出个所以然…哎…从句学得不好） is also an important facts that criticizes a work’s success or failures.（感觉这句不太顺，语法结构太复杂，把意思说明白了才是目的！） So only those minority successful works are meaningful in helping the discovering of the essence behind.（具体的分析不是很有力，理由有点牵强，鄙见鄙见）

All in all, as a subjective creation derived from the normal life, art is not too far to any one. What’s more, it also gives us a
special view of the world. So, even though there are some uncertain facts, art is still a revolution （我感觉这个有点言重了） of hidden ideas and impulse of a society which can help the better understanding and improvement of the world.

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很好的意见和鼓励，谢谢，二位~