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Obviously,museum is a great place for us to learn about a country.It is always better to bring the history in front of our eyes.If you can see the stuff people 1000 years ago used with your eyes,you may easily imagine the life at that time.However,to state that visiting the museums is the best way to learn about a country is to ignore the value of the huge amount information which new technology may bring to us and the value of the education in school.

It is true that museums can bring us the reality of a history about a country and make us think about it more.The textbook only tell you what happened in the history,but by viewing things used or left at that time we can imagine what happened and figure out the history by ourselves.Visiting the ShanXi province museum,we can see the sculpture of solider dug in the tomb of emproe YingZheng.Watching the vivid face of the sculpture, i can actually feel there are human just like us in 1000 years ago at that minute

Even though museums may bring us more personal thoughts,you have to take a lot of time to go there.Sometime it is better to search the information online to learn about a country because it can save your time and provide you specific information.For example,last year we decided to go to Japan for our summer vacation.Before we go there we have to figure out where is the most interesting place and what is the most delicious food in japan.And the most important thing is where we can live and how much money we need to prepare.All this information could hardly find in a museum,however, with a computer we can solve the problem easily.We can see the picture of the tourism site and select which we are interested in.we can book the hotel with better view and low price.At last,We make a 10 days plan ,list the hotel we will live in and the specific money we will spent on every projects.With all these works,we learn a lot about Japan as if we will go to a place we are familiar with like our own country.

Sometime we can hardly really go to this country and visit a museum there,As we all know,to travel abroad will cost you a lot of money.So the education in school may become the best way for people without finical supports to learn about a foreign country.I still remember the class by Miss Li to introduce France to us.She tell us its location in Europa  in a map and the war happened in its history.She even play a tourism video about France to us.

In conclusion,museums is a good way for us to learn about a country.With all these light and display we can learn the history directly.but when it comes to the most finical and quick way to learn a country the answer may different.Both internet and school education are great way to make us better know a country.

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已改好，请查收。

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改过的。。。

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11.2自己改的

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我来啦，I am sorry，晚了会儿，这里改时间了，所以没瞅准，见谅~

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mimimomo666 发表于 2013-11-3 23:58
我来啦，I am sorry，晚了会儿，这里改时间了，所以没瞅准，见谅~

改的很好啊，我综合一直有问题，一直都是fair。。。昨天看了你的自己总结下，还是听力总结的不好，阅读说的多了。

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wangxiang870725 发表于 2013-11-3 21:57
已改好，请查收。

谢谢啦~~the best这种可以一面倒写法，比较好些。。。我选让步式写法是因为当时点想的不够，其实都可以的，有人说gre作文最好让步一下写，tofel 坚持一面就可以啦。我觉得都可以的，重点是看你论证的充分与否

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我要改几号的？？？、

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llsss_1234 发表于 2013-11-7 23:17
我要改几号的？？？、

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