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本帖最后由 糖先生 于 2014-9-5 20:29 编辑

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8.16考试。磨叽了半天,终于踏上口语小组的大船。--6.29

希望自己能和大家一起坚持下去。
一起加油吧!

ps:partner请直接戳http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sjNPv6P,我的百度网盘里面有我所有的口语作业,一般第二天一早我就上传好了作业。小伙伴的作业我也会尽快改的

写给自己:正是因为说的烂,所以更要勤加练习,请假的事不要想~!~!!

9.14继续再考,虽然成绩还没有出,还是进入备战状态比较靠谱。8.19


9.5 题目 已传
task1 what community service task would you like to do? helping children with their homework, teaching old people how to use computers, or cleaning a city park.
task2 do you agree or disagree with the following statement? the government should spend money on projects that can encourage citizens to lead healthier lifestyle. please give your opinion and reasons.
task3-6 tpo 29



9.4题目  已传
task 1 How to improve the quality of teaching in your country? include specific details and reasons in your response.
task 2 some people prefer to do one job or project at a time. others prefer to do several jobs or projects at the same time. which do you prefer and why?
task3-6 TPO 30



9.3题目 已传
task 1 describe the most important development in your country in the past 20 years. explain its significance.
task 2 do you agree or disagree with the following statement? watching sports programs on television is not a good use of time. please give your opinion and explanation using specific examples and details.
task 3-6 TPO 31



9.2题目  已传
task 1 Describe the most important day in your life. explain why it is important.  Include specific reasons and details in your response.
task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? children should learn how to draw or paint. please use specific reasons to support your answer.
task 3-6 TPO 32



9.1题目 已传
Task 1 Describe a job or career that you admire but do not want to take. Include specific reasons and details in your response.
Task 2 Some people think that students should study during weekends, but others think that they should relax and to socialize during weekends. What is your opinion on this issue?
Task 3-6 TPO 33



8.31题目  已传
Task 1 Describe the steps, through which you once learned a new subject and explain how you learned it.  Please include details and examples in your response.
Task 2 Some people prefer to read or watch news every day, others prefer to read or watch news regularly, which do you prefer?
Task 3-6 TPO 1



8.30题目 已传
Task 1 Describe a person who you would like to spend time with. Explain why you want to spend time with him or her. 
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should always study in a quiet place.
Task 3-6 TPO 2



8.29题目  已传。 发现t3-t6是一个月前,第一次做的全套~~
Task 1 Among the following three professions, which one do you think makes the greatest contribution to society: teachers, farmers or doctors?
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to stay happy, you must have a job that you love doing.
Task 3-6 TPO 3

8.27题目 已传 T1说得很奇怪,因为想说的太多了,不知道怎么删减。。所以就加速加速,就很奇怪了。 麻烦小伙伴帮我听一下怎么精简啊~ 谢啦
Task 1 Describe the most unforgettable success in your life. Explain why this success is unforgettable to you.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is never too late for an old person to  receive higher education and get a university degree.
Task 3-6 TPO 5



8.26题目 已传  8.16考完之后一直都没有感觉啊。。。。构思显得很奇怪,虽然有例子,总显得论述不够充分。以前是毫无语音语调,但现在说的语音语调也很奇怪。。。唉~
Task 1 Many people have pets, like cats and dogs. Do you think that raising pets is good, why? Please include reasons and details to support your response.
Task 2 Some students prefer to choose a career before getting into college. Other students prefer to choose a career after taking some university courses. Which one do you prefer and why?  Please use specific reasons and examples to support your response.



8.24题目 已传
Task 1 Nowadays robots are widely used in the society. What are the benefits and risks of this?
Task 2 Should employees be required to wear suits in the workplace, or should they wear casual clothes?



8.22题目 已传
Task 1 What advice would you give to a friend who just got a job. Explain what the suggestion is and its importance. Please include specific details.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: children should have their own cellphones. Give specific reasons and details to support your response.



8.20题目 已传
Task 1 Do you like to take outdoor activities in summer or in winter? Please give specific reasons and details in your response.
Task 2 The school has required students to read the same book and during vacations give a report on it. Do you think it's a good idea or not? What are the advantages and disadvantages?



8.19题目 已传
Task 1 What time of a year do you like most? Please give specific reasons and details in your response.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Having a relaxed or unhurried lifestyle is the most important for a person.



8.18题目 已传
Task 1 What are the benefits of chatting with older family members? Give specific details in your answer.
Task 2 When things at home such as furniture are broken, do you prefer to have them repaired in a shop or
fix them by yourself?



8.5 已传 以前的作业都是说得很多遍再录之类的,今天差不多随便说了三五次就录了。马上要考试了,估计这个也就是水平上限了。。。哎
Task 1 Would you agree or disagree with the university’s decision to allow food during class? Explain with specific reasons and details.
Task 2 Some people like to collect old things , while others throw things away after use. Which way do you prefer and why?



8.2  已传
Task 1 Describe an activity you enjoyed doing with your family when you were a child. Explain why it was enjoyable.
Task 2 Some students prefer to work on difficult assignments early in the morning. Others prefer to do this type of work in the evening.Which do you prefer and why?



8.1 已传
Task 1 Describe a time when you tried to do something that had never done before. Explain what you did and why you did it.
Task 2 Some people prefer to do one job or project at one time. Others prefer to do several jobs or projects at the same time. Which do you prefer and why?



7.31  已传
Task 1 How has the availability of the worldwide Internet changed people’s life? Please use specific reasons and examples to support your response.
Task 2 Some students prefer to go universities or colleges in their own cities towns. Others prefer universities or colleges in new faraway places. Which do you prefer and why?
说好不请假还是请了两天。哎,托福把我的渣英语暴露得漏洞百出,啊,各种恶补啊



7.28 已传,小伙伴辛苦了~实在太渣。对了task6的时候最后剩了好几秒不知道该怎么办。。
Task 1 Some universities are planning to sell paper books and magazines and to use electronic books instead. Do you agree or disagree with this practise?
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Government should spend money on certain projects that encourage citizens to lead healthier lifestyles.
Task 3-6 TPO 1



7.26 已传 第一次挑战全套~~后面说得简直了了。。。。。
Task 1 As we are facing serious environmental problems, what suggestions would you give on how to save our planet?
Task 2 Are you willing to carefully choose the gift which your friends like or choose whatever gift you like? Explain with specific reasons and details.
Task 3-6 TPO 3



7.25  已传
Task 1 Which technology has made the greatest impact on people’s life in your country: airplane,
computer or television?
Task 2 Some people believe that it is better for children to grow up in big cities. Others believe
that it is better for children to grow up in small towns or rural areas. What is your opinion and why?



7.24 已传
Task 1 How to deal with homesickness?
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: it's easier to teach children in primary schools than students in universities. Include reasons and details in your explanation.
前几天已经可以较快地完成了,今天又是花了很久
构思不是问题(虽然也不觉得自己内容多么好),主要还是这些词老嗑吧打结~~哎呀呀,一些很简单的词怎么放到句子里就说不来了~~基础啊
tenfold十倍的(地)



7.23 已传
Task 1 If you have a chance to study a form of art, which one would you like to learn? Sculpture, portrait painting or landscape painting?
Task 2 Which do you prefer: card games or computer games? Please explain why.



7.22 已传
Task 1 The university is recruiting volunteers to help the community protecting the environment. If you were recruited, which one of the following three tasks would you like to do? 1)pick up trash and litters on the street; 2)plant trees and flowers to decorate the town; 3)teach children to protect and be friend with the environment.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: it is acceptable that students disagree with their instructors. Please explain your answer explicitly.



7.21 已传
Task 1 Your friend wants get a better grade, what advice that you want to give her? Please include details and examples in your answer.
Task 2 Some people play games for enjoyment. Some people play games just for wining. What about you? Please include detail in your explanation.



7.20 已传
Task 1 Describe a piece of news or a story that you concern recently. Explain why it gets your attention. Include details and examples in your answer.
Task 2 Do you agree with the following statement? The first year students should live with senior students. Please explain with details.
摸索中~~本打算今天做个全套的。但是我没有。想想清楚,只有26天了,怎么去修炼。今天向老弟请教了很多,结合以前的各种,还有自己的不足,大概从跟读VOA,读单词,直接用英语思考入手。



7.19  已传
Task 1 Describe your favorite area in your city. Please offer your explanation with details.
Task 2 Some people believe that college education should be free. Others don't think so. What's your opinion and why? Please include details and examples in your explanation.
T1说了一遍,录了两遍。太喜欢这种题了。 feel great pressure
T2磕磕绊绊组织了几次语言,录了四遍。感觉比较空,没有举什么例子。
总的来说,还是有进步,不用在那么多多次。以后争取两次搞定。
本来说今天尝试全套的,做听力受打击惨了惨惨了~~



7.18 已传
Task 1 Among the following three professions, which one do you respect most? Photographers, musicians or painters?  Please give specific examples and opinions.
Task 2 Are children the most difficult challenge that parents can face in their life? Please state your opinion with well-developed opinions.
进退两难dilemma~~怎样才能说得字正腔圆啊~~这两题思路比较简单~~



7.17 已传
Task 1 Describe a project that you've ever done. Please include details and examples in your answer.
Task 2 Do you agree with the following statement? A person needs talent to be an artist.
说起来没感情~~under my skin~



7.16 已传
Task 1 Describe a learning experience of yours. Please include specific details and examples in your answer.
Task 2 Do you agree with the following statement? Personage changes with age.
录了很多次,说的还是干巴巴的~~



7.15 已传
Task 1 When choosing a house or an apartment to live in, what is the most important characteristic you care about, why?
Task 2 Some students take notes very often during class. Other students do not often take notes or rarely take notes. Which do you think is better? Please explain with details.
录的时候感觉好绕口啊。。。明明不是很难的单词。。卡卡。卡壳。壳
zone out 走神.



7.14 已上传
Task 1 In your opinion, what are the important characteristics of a good school? Please include specific details and examples in your answer.
Task 2 Do you agree with the following statement? Childhood is the most happiest time in one's life.



7.13 已传
Task 1 Describe a news that excited you. Why did it excited you? Please use specific details and examples.
Task 2 The best way to learn lessons is through making mistakes. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
第二题看漏lessons,balabala练了半天发现不对。。。又重新来



7.12 已传
Task 1 Describe a historical event that you’re interested in most. Explain why you are interested in it and want to know more about it.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? What a person wears can show his or her personality.
历史题还真不好说啊~~还去查了一下单词怎么说~



7.11task1&2已上传
Task 1 Many schools do not allow students to take their laptop computers into the classroom. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of having laptop computers in the classroom? Use specific details and examples to support your opinion.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The Internet plays an important role in your life. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
task1上传了两个版本,内容都是一样的。
只不过,那个吃力版,是我自己说的时候有特别注意一些发音,但说完之后我觉得说得特别费力特别吃力的感觉。我自己听了一下感觉像是哮喘病发作,累得慌。所以然后又按照自己习惯的方式说了一下。小伙伴如果有时间,就帮我听一下,看看哪个听上去稍微舒服一点(捂脸,因为我觉得都很差。。。自己感觉不出来啊),我好大概有个努力的方向~~(*^__^*) ……thx~~



7.10task1&2 已上传
Task 1 In your opinion, what are some important characteristics of a good leader? Use  reasons and specific examples to explain why these qualities are important.
Task 2  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important lessons couldn\'t be learnt in the classroom.
第一题是说过了,果然完成得快。第二题想了好久的例子。
为什么单个单个单词发音还凑合,凑成一句话说出来就很奇葩了呢。。。



7.9task1&2 已上传
Task 1 If a foreign friend comes to your country, what kind of food would you recommend and why?
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: students should do some part-time jobs before they attend college.
第一题居然说了四十分钟,第二题十五分钟。每次第一题都会很久。。。。



7.8task1&2 http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sjNPv6P
Task 1 What personal quality do you admire most? Creativity, courage or intelligence? Explain why? Please include details and examples in your response.
Task 2 Some people prefer to listen to music while they are studying or working. Others prefer to stay in a quiet place while they are studying or working. Which way do you prefer and why? Include reasons and details in your response.
第一题录了很久。第二题不到十分钟。果然啊,不到没时间,不知道抓紧的。
做了作业这么多天,终于敢问出一个在我心中环绕很久的问题:怎么提高语音语调的水平呢?



7.7task1&2 http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sjNPv6P
Task 1 Which type of movie is not enjoyable for you to watch: action, romance or science-fiction? Please give your answers with specific examples and details.
Task 2 Some people prefer to make detailed plans for the future, others prefer to concentrate on the present and don\'t make any plans at all. Which way do you prefer and why?



7.6task1&2 http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sjNPv6P
Task 1 Describe an event in history and explain what you learned from this event. Please explain with details.
Task 2 Some people prefer to do one job or one project at a time, others prefer to do several jobs or projects at the same time. Which do you prefer and why?
task1说了两三次,然后录了两次。嗯,有进步



7.5task1&2 http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dD1Tecp
Task 1 Describe a time when you were asked to do something you don\'t want to do. What happened?
Task 2 Do you prefer to take courses related to a specific career or do you prefer to take a variety of courses?



7.4task1&2 http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dD3paU1
Task 1 If you have a chance to study a form of art, which one would you like to learn: sculputre, portrait painting or landscape painting? Please explain your choice with specific details.
Task 2 When on a trip, some people like to keep a journal or take pictures, others just enjoy the journey without recording. Which way do you prefer and why?



7.3task1&2 http://pan.baidu.com/s/1c009iBQ
Task 1 Describe a person in your family whose personality or behavior is very different from yours.
Task 2 Some schools require students to bring their own computers to the classroom. Do you agree or disagree with this policy?
除了之前东磨叽一下,西磨叽一下,录音的效率已经提高很多啦。



7.2task1&2 http://pan.baidu.com/s/1Gmq4m
Task 1 An environmental group is planning to organize an activity to help protect the environment. What activity do you suggest and why?
Task 2 When you give gifts to others, do you prefer gifts that are fun or gifts that can be used?
明天起坚决只给自己留半小时的时间。。。



7.1task1&2 http://pan.baidu.com/s/1qWpvtvA
Task 1 What kind of qualities should a good leader possess? Please state your opinion and give specific details and examples in your explanation.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should always tell the truth.
和6.30的作业一起完成的。4道题录了个一个多小时。
听了小伙伴的录音,觉得自己的进步空间相当大啊!



6.30task1&2 http://pan.baidu.com/s/1hqf2nJY
Task 1 Which of the following extracurricular activities would you recommend children to take? Playing sports, playing music or visiting art galleries? Explain why.
Task 2 Which do you prefer? A job with a high salary but requires you to take a lot of business trips, or a job with a low salary but does not require you to take businss trips.
好吧,还是录了很多次。



6.29task1&2  http://pan.baidu.com/s/1gdy1dZH
Task 1 Which of the following ways of education do you prefer the most: through books, through communication within the community, or through travelling around the world?
Task 2 Some countries try to ban the noise during the night. The opinions are divided. Do you support the decision or not? Please state your reasons with specific details.
第一次交作业。也差不多是第一次录音练习。批改的小伙伴,要难为你的耳朵啦~~
当然,上传的作业不是一次录好的。。。遮脸。
task1录了n次,task2录了3次以下(看来想睡觉也是一种动力啊)
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Task 1:
时间不够,要多说两秒;
18“physical exercise 的发音问题;
21” could enhance/improve the ability of resisting the disease 这么说试试;

Task 2:
2“的really中间别停顿;
所有的business发音都不准;
30”的visit的发音;
31“the places where I have strong interesting;
35”enjoy 用的太多了。


看的出来 LZ是想下狠心拿下口语,也看到LZ录了四个花了一个多小时的情况,以前我也会花很长时间去录制。现在基本上一天也就5分钟左右,所以,只要坚持! 就会越来越好! 加油。   
建议不要写下来,照着念,直接头脑风暴,什么tips都别写最好了。留在脑子里面的才是最好的!

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Yao.C 发表于 2014-7-1 21:29
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Task 1:

恩恩,你说的问题我都会注意。
把你指出的发音这几个单词好好纠正
然后学习你的方法

非常感谢!

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发表于 2014-7-3 13:29:45 |只看该作者
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Task1:
同学,不好意思,是我听力太差,这段意思我听了几遍还是好多没听明白。仅就我听出来的大概说一下:
开头,I recommend(你发的是recomme, d好像没发出来,不知道这里是不是可以吞音)
2`picking up trash in  之后说的什么没听懂,是在说垃圾分类么?               
8`huge amount of rubbish...之后没听出,是说游人扔垃圾?
15`it strongly destroyed the...and make the neighborhood un...没听懂
21`左右停顿两秒,这个停顿时间比较长,要注意
23`in the through such activity with later advertise but to the public 我听出来的是这样,不知道什么意思...
29` recognize 发音不准确
31` how...没听清,另外此处 environment 发音有点瑕疵,不够饱满和连贯
后面 great wall,similar activity 没听明白...

Task2:
4`左右稍有停顿
之后I think those things 似乎th的发音不够饱满,像这种需要连续咬舌的发音我也很头大...
11`benefit的发音
22`左右比较明显的停顿
24`helpful 的发音
27`another example that 中间好像少了个 is
29`I bought 后面是 a set of? 还是其他?a set of 的话 set 好像发音有点不准
31`sketching 发音
38`左右比较明显的停顿
41`finish(ed) a lot of perfect draw(ing)
结尾好像没说完,结束的比较仓促

总的来说,说的比较流畅,举得例子也足够详细。我觉得可以提高的一个地方是语音语调,那种抑
扬顿挫的感觉没有很好地展现出来,当然大家都说这并不影响分数,所以如果有时间你可以再
这方面加强下,可以看看《American accent trainning》这本书的第一章,专门讲
intonation的,平时看美剧的时候多模仿下也可以,没时间的话专注于内容就好啦!

好多地方我也不明白,说得不对,请多多包涵!

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本帖最后由 糖先生 于 2014-7-6 22:36 编辑
dafen5434 发表于 2014-7-3 13:29
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Task1:


你听得好仔细!!!非常感谢!!!!

对了,你说你是照着念的,尽快脱稿,脱稿的语音语调自然会比照着读要自然很多,虽然可能会打结~


这两个题是说的很不好的,估计那天脑袋被热晕了
美国语音训练那本书的确很好,如果你有时间,希望你坚持下来。我以前是有时间不坚持,现在是没时间。。哎
ps:才看了一下你改的是7.2作业。写错了。

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Task 1:
开头的解释就说的不是太贴切,I really admire JB, he is my model and I know a lot of his preeminent leader quality.
32’’的politful 是什么品质?
45’’的obviously的发音问题;
此题说的点太多多了,具体说一个就够了,然后展开为什么,在举例子。你没发现你自己后来说的都不够吗?
Task 2:
7’’ however的发音问题;
26’’的pressure的发音问题;
27’’ 病情状况是 state of illness;
33’’longer的发音问题,o要发饱满;

这一天的效果就比第一天的好了啊,连贯了,注重单词的发音,提升发音,连读,弱读,省读的就更棒了。

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Yao.C 发表于 2014-7-4 20:31
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Task 1:
开头的解释就说的不是太贴切,I really admire JB, he is my model and I know a  ...

task1的第一个说的太好了!
32‘ 是positive哈。。发音啊。。。

非常感谢你第一天给我说的,不要写下来,我觉得很有用!!之后,一直这样练习,反而感觉更像在表达自己的想法,效率也提高了。

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task 1
前面in什么morning 没听清
come out应该是came out 不过我觉得come out没有work out表达的意思准确 个人意见 你体会一下
最后说的 my niece got good take care? 改成my niece was taken good care of可以吗
rest的发音不准确

task 2
advantages后面没听清0 0
second发音问题
different什么?
area后面a是发音的
even though不是even
i am an engineering student不如说my major is engineering或者你可以说的更具体一些

感觉第一题说的更流畅一些,第二题说了很多点,但是没有具体展开,另外建议多练常用词的发音。

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本帖最后由 糖先生 于 2014-7-7 00:43 编辑
CJX112 发表于 2014-7-6 22:42
task 1
前面in什么morning 没听清
come out应该是came out 不过我觉得come out没有work out表达的意思准确 ...


task1的work out确实用的好,take care那个啊,确实是没有注意到。
task2,因为想到的方面多,然后觉得举例子时间不太够,就省略了。这个题我再琢磨一下。
发音确实不太好啊,多加练习~~

谢谢哦!!


一起加油哈!

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楼主,进不了你的7/6网盘链接啊。是不是再传下?

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martinmx87 发表于 2014-7-7 11:13
楼主,进不了你的7/6网盘链接啊。是不是再传下?

谢谢提醒!!
现在应该可以了哈~~你的作业已经改好了。

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我来辣。
7.8
我先总的说一下哦,刚刚我在我的贴子里回复你的时候,没有听过你的作业,现在我的建议会比较适合你,望采纳。1. 最重要的,不是好听的语调。是非常清晰的重读,不然外国人真心听不懂。2.次重要的是,跟读和练。跟读你比较喜欢的美剧或者英剧的发音,我很喜欢绝望的主妇,后来才渐渐的去学习,千万不要为了学习而去看一部经典的美剧,会辜负他们的~
T1
语法细节方面我自己也做不好,
结构我来评价一下吧,
你必须要非常鲜明的点出你的主题,俗一点的开头没有关系的。例子最好紧跟开头,然后展开~像你的这个例子最好是展开比较具体的,rater喜欢具体鲜活的例子。

T2
结尾还被你圆回来了,略棒。
转接词有点混用的感觉啊。其实不用很复杂多变的转接词,但一定要有逻辑~

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hellsjo 发表于 2014-7-9 13:26
我来辣。
7.8
我先总的说一下哦,刚刚我在我的贴子里回复你的时候,没有听过你的作业,现在我的建议会比较 ...


谢谢你的建议!一定试着练习!
我也觉得很清晰的重读,很重要。我同学也给我讲过,单词说清楚了,外国人才知道你在讲什么。

我觉得我的例子不够饱满。前面说的略多。
t2那个啊,是我看到还有两三秒,但没有话说了,就只好再点一下我的主题了把时间凑够~~
嘿嘿~

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糖先生 发表于 2014-7-9 15:45
谢谢你的建议!一定试着练习!
我也觉得很清晰的重读,很重要。我同学也给我讲过,单词说清楚了,外国 ...

哈哈哈哈是不是看到我的分数觉得绝望啊

没事的天道酬勤
练得多总会厚积薄发哒

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7.7

首先呢,卤煮要注意以下整体的发音,辅音都有点重,元音感觉不够饱满清晰
第一题:
卤煮一定要整个语段的流畅和起伏,停顿,不要把单词都说的黏在一团,句子与句子之间的停顿,一定要注意,另外就是流畅度的问题,可以说慢一点,但是一定不要太磕绊
much more两个单词的元音开的都不够大 more后面的ore尾音的卷舌没有出来 舌头太直
exciting fascinating这两个单词ting的发音都有点不对 t 和t做辅音的单词都要浊化d
totally 卤煮to和ta的发音是一样的昂 注意ta在这里一个是要弱读 一个是要浊化 ta发音te ta不翘舌 把舌尖放平一些
以后千万别用very very much,这个千万千万不要说了(无老师分享过一个考官最不喜欢的口语就有这个,因为太低级,而且老美也不这么用)


第二题:注意以下词语的发音
college 的发音 后面ge发的不清楚 嘴型没有到位
when I 的连读没有读出来
confuse to 好像没有这样的用法啊 confuse=mix up 你要说困惑的话 confused吧
i don't know where should i go 这句的发音太硬了 语音语调要加强一下
Test 的发音听起来像 Taste

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