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还有20多天就考了，现在急死了。作文根本来不及。求拍
下面2篇都没在规定时间完成，一篇1h，一篇45分钟。。。怎么办啊？
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is forthem to learn facts.


It is widely acknowledged that collage students usually feel a great deal of pressure before examination due to they have to memorize a great number of disciplines. Are't there any witted means to help them get out of the stress and meanwhile they can also gain the perfect scores. Definitely, there are ways to promote a easy study. Problem lies in that alway we care a lot of factors and ignore the useful of understanding the ideas and concepts. So if you ask me concepts and factors, which one are important, i will choose the former without hesitation.

First, understanding the ideas and concepts is helpful to our study, which allow us to remember things quickly and efficiently. For instant, as a medicinal student, I have to recite enormous principles and factors. I always feel stressed and overwhelmed, and sometimes even discouraged at the close of test. Then I try hard to find if there is better way for me to learn so much knowledge into my heart during limited time. After a long time exploration and experiencing, I finally realized that it would be improve my learning rate if I try to understand the meanings and concepts of the factors.

Second, learning the ideas and conceptions also help us save tremendous time, which can give us more time to do something more significant. For example, we live in a information-explosive world ,and inevitably we have to go through a lot of information and statistics everday. Can you understand and remember all these messages just by recital its factors. Of course, we can not. While some materials may connect, so if we learn its idea and concept, it also help us to maintain others.

Last but not least, understanding the ideas and concepts not only help us to pass the exam and save time but contribute to a long memory which can contribute to our further development and advancement. The more you comprehend the ideas and concepts of a fact, the long memory you formed, and thus the more competitive you are. Such as an employer would choose a candidate with more knowledge.

No doubt, facts also has some tiny advantages in some subjects like history and literature, but in these subjects ideas and concept can also be applied. Although factors do have one or two merits, the strengths of ideas and conceptions far outweigh them.

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第二篇，tpo6
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?a
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Due to the explosive technology and science development, people's lives have been undergoing a significant change. When it come to the question that whether people's lives become more easier and more comfortable or not, different opinions may be held by different people in varies fields. Some may claim that the rapid development has caused tremendous unfavorable consequence, such as people's lives become more complex and stressed and at the some vein they feel life become miserable and unpleasant owing to fierce competition , heavy assignment and less leisure. For my part, however, I reckon that it is the advancement of society that makes our lives more comfortable and easier.

First, compared with what our life was decades age, we may confidently draw the conclusion that our lives become easier during the modern age. A lot of modern devices has put us in a positive position. For instance, twenty years ago we relied mostly on bicycle when we went to anther place, sometimes a place even far away, which spent a lot of time and make us tired as well. Everything has changed with the advent of various vehicles like bus, train and plane. These vehicles has totally changed our traditional means of transportation and makes our lives more easier and convenient. Thanks to these great inventions we can go everywhere we want without spending a lot of time and physical strength. In addition, we can easily get what we want. Nowadays we are surrounded with supermarkets and we can get what we want and need without spend a lot of efforts.

Second, in respect of various kinds of entertainments and amusing activities, we live a more enjoyable and comfortable lives than our ancestor. For example, We have access to a larger number of recreation facilities, such as television, computer and amusement park. Watching some light TV series may help us get relieved after a days stressful work. Computer provides us not only a variety of recreations, but makes our work more efficient and save us a lot of time as well. Thus without the advent of various new inventions, we can not resolve our problems so easy and reap the comfortable of life. What is more, people's more senses of happiness than before also indicates that our life become more beautiful. According to a recent survey conducted by XinHua newspaper about people's feeling of happy, it revealed that 64% people rated that they feel happier then before.

Admittedly, there may also existence some unfavorable effect with the development of society. On the one side, so many transportations do cause a lot of pollution, which may do harm to our health. On the other side, people face so much competition which make them under severe pressure that they may find life become harder and more difficult.

Even though in some aspects life becomes slightly more complex and harder than before, a lot of new inventions plus tremendous progressive of our society has made our easier and more comfortable .

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秋雨荆州 发表于 2012-6-19 15:52

伟大的斑竹，感动ing，斑竹，能不能麻烦你给我作文提点意见啊，就是指出哪些问题比较严重，我每次写完都很恶心自己。。。万分感谢

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6月20 作业

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这篇写的很纠结。。。

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ohlyeona 发表于 2012-6-20 21:13
Timicao 我十一点之前改完你的作业好不好？

好的，谢谢啊。。。

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ohlyeona 发表于 2012-6-20 23:05
啊 我辛辛苦苦标的红色字体怎么都没了！！

谢谢啊，辛苦了。。。我现在去学习一下，呵呵。

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ohlyeona 发表于 2012-6-20 23:05
啊 我辛辛苦苦标的红色字体怎么都没了！！

再次谢谢，改的很细，我以后得仔细点。。。

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美好的一天，又来贴作文了，大家来拍啊。写的慢伤不起啊，这篇写了将近一个半小时。。。
When a new technological devices become available. Some people buy it right away, while others will wait until many have acquired it. Which view do you agree with and explain why.

Every time when Apple release a new version of product, needless to say,  it will certainly cause a wind of mania, especially in such a modern society thirsty for equipping new technological devices. People in a increasing number are eager to follow this trendy and try to enjoy the new technological devices as soon as they can. For my part, while what I care is not the trendy or new version of devices, the quality and price is what I really mind. Therefore when decide to buy a technological devices I will wait a long time after a new product has put into the market.

Why so many people are eager to follow the fashion and urge the desire of owing the latest technological devices. I assure, there may be for two reasons. Fist, there new products can provide them with access to the newest technological innovations and designs. For instance, owing the Apple4s can provide one considerably new functions which make this/her excited and happy. Second, especially young people, these new inventions can largely satisfy there inner desire. They want to keep up with the current trend and look fashionable, which can make them confident.

Even though owing a new fashion product can surly meet some of our inner needs, as for me, quality and price are the main focus for me.

To begin with I am not a trendy man, and it is the quality that I care when I purchase an new thing especially a technological devices which may accompany with us for a long time. There is no denying the factor that the newly released devices are more likely to have some quality related problems since new products have not been widely tested or these new technologys have not came into mature. So it is safe to buy a product until it is widely used and the technologys have became mature. One of my friends, who always run in the front of trend, is a typical example. He bought the Samsung galaxy note the first day when it was ut into market, but a couple of days experience made him to realize it not a good choose for his due to its frequently power off automatically. So it wold be wise to buy a device till a lot of people has experienced it and turns out that it has no technique problems,

In addition, as a student, price is also the major factor I will consider when I decide to buy a new devices. The newly technological device are usually costly and we are not able to afford it. But after many people have maintain this device the demanding will surly descend and then price may be declined since price is decided buy demanding. Just using iphone4 for an example, now its price has became 20% cheaper at least compared with its original price. So if we can wait for a period, we can not only enjoy the fun the technological device providing but save a great sum of money which enable us to buy other necessities.

In sum, the ample evidence stated above can conclude that I am in favor to buy a technological device when many people has acquired it, which can enable me to acquire the good quality and low price , at same time,without decreasing my enjoying playing it.

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laotaitai 发表于 2012-6-21 13:03
挺好的！
基础很好啊！

谢谢啊。。。我单词打错，单复数，主谓问题太严重了。。。

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6.22作业贴
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It's more important for the government to build new housing than preserve old and historical building.  Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Do you agree or disagree?


When it comes to the question whether it is more important for a goverment to build new housing then preserve its the historical building, there are a host of different ideas held by different people in various fields. Some people may claim that building new building is of more significant then preserving these old buildings. However, as far as I am concerned that preserve old building is also deserve our attention and maybe play a even more remarkable role then buiding new houses does in this modern society.
Addimittedly, with the remitting increasing of population, a lot of new houses is needed to meet this growing trend. And they also maitain that old buiding just contibute nothing positive to the development of a nation. So they suggest we should tear all these old building down so that we can build more new houses.
Even though the historical building can not promote the development rate of a nation, they need to be preserved since they maintain great value in culture sustaining and history recognition. The historic building is a symbol of a country's culture and history. So destorying the historical building partly means abandoning the cuntral and history of a nation. Though you might say history can be written down and cuntral can be passed by, these reserved architecture are vivid and concrete . The history building has not only values of culture and history, but a statue through which we can distinguish our country with others. In this rapidly changing society caused by globalization, if a coutry destroying all its historical building, at last, it will lose all its distinction, then can it still be a unique country.
The historical building also has something to do with education. First,it can serve as a reminder of our history. A typical example is us, the young generation, who have not gone through the history of that period related to the historical building, can have a vivid knowledge through visiting the historical building since history book is abstract and sometimes makes us boring. Also the historical building has some aesthetic beauties through which we can learn a sense of charming. For instance, if Beijing has put all these old architectures down, where can we still enjoy these unique palaces and temples, how can our next generation to appreciate these wonderful wonders.

Fom what discussed above, I can safely draw the conclusion that the advantages of preserving the historical buliding far outweigh these slightly merits of building new houses.

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6--21作业贴
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:the car has had greater effect
To society than the airplane has to.

The rapidly development of economic and modern society has sparked a lot of inventions which make us wealthy and ameliorate a great deal of our living standards. Car and plane are just two of millions of inventions, which contribute a lot to our modern lives. When it comes to the question does car play a more significant role to society than plane, there must be a host of different ideas held by different people in various fields. As for me, I can not agree more with this issue.

Firs of all, car is easy accessible than plane. Nowadays, car has became a indispensable mean of transportation, and we may use it almost everyday, wether driving it you own or take a taxi. For instance, we can drive car to walk; we can drive car to travel; we can also drive car to relax. Unlike the car, we can not depend on plane to do all of these things since plane is less accessible than car is. Nowadays with our living standard's improving we can afford a car, while few people can afford to own a plane. Meanwhile, cars are just everywhere crowed on the streets, while plane may not so widely appear. For example, if we need to take a car, just wave your hand or make a call. That is so simple and easy. However, taking a plane is just not so simple. We have to book a ticket in advance and undergo a complicated procedures before we get in a plane.

In addition, the car not only provides remarkably convenience to our life, but makes our daily life more comfortable and enjoyable. A apt illustration involves the traveling. When we travel by car, we can enjoy the beauties all along our way to the destination which bring a great feast to our eyes and, at the same time, it can reduce our tired and relax our mind. But if your choose plane as your mean, how can you know countless beauties just exist in the road, which may attract you more and impress you deeper than the destination alone.

Admittedly, when you go abroad or want to a place where car can not reach, then you can and you have to turn to planes since plane is capable of getting these palces. Moreover, plane can save us a lot of time especially when you are in a harry. But we all know, plane can become a must only on these conditions. Car have alreadly penetrated into our every daily life. For example, short distance tour you can only count on car because plane is unavailable.

Just as listed above, it is car that has many merit and influences almost in every aspect, so I reckon compared with plane the car has more effect on the society.

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meanttobe 发表于 2012-6-22 19:12
楼主你也是7，14考么？

7--15