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It is more enjoyable to have a job and work long hours for three days in a week than to work shorter hours for five days in a week.  习作2In the context of the extreme competitiveness and dizzying work environment change, a soaring number of the office men and ladies are looking for a better and enjoyable way to spend their work time. When it comes to this, some workers point out that it is more enjoyable to have a job and work long hours for three days because it can save plenty of time for themselves to determine how to spend. For my part, however, i believe that working shorter hours for five days will be more meaningful and enjoyable in that this kind of working mode means health, efficiency, and cooperation.
  Working shorter hours for five days in a week limits a comparatively short period of work time for labors or employees, and spurs their potential energy to work more hard and efficient. There is no doubt that the efficiency plays a vital role in the work circumstance, and taking my brother Edward for example. Edward Cullen, who have the inclination to decay every task given by others, never complete his tasks before the deadline because he are eager for more time and space to enjoy his life instead of being trapped in the prison of job-finishing. Thus, if there were a rule about work shorter hours for more days in one week being set in the company, those employees who are willing to delay their job until the deadline, like Edward, would have to accomplish their everyday's duty in a very short time because the working time has been shortened. Thus, this new working mode can enhance the efficiency of those workers and make contribution to the productivity of company.
  Moreover, workers' health also obtains benefits from the new working mode. For example, no one can deny the fact that you have to pay more price if you just desire for accomplish something in very short time. not only the long work hours but also are your health and your right to enjoy the colorful life forced to pay. You have to be absorbed in the work for so long time, maybe 10 hours, 12 hours, even 16 hours. Your body just like a machine that is operated for such a long time without a adequate rest, and has an great possibility of breaking down. As for the right to enjoy your life which is based on your health, it will be devastated with your body falling down. Compared to such a stressful working mode, working for short hours may relieve these workers from the work pressure, and confer them more chance to use their rights to enjoy their life.
  Furthermore, working for more days in a week can help workers establish a more impressive friendship and cooperation among colleagues. You know, one of the main proponents of our friends comes from our working circumstance. According to a survey conducted by the psychology research department of Beijing University, 89% of people have a tendency to make friends with their colleagues who stand with you and encourage your when you come across some difficulties in your work, and there are 51% people willing to some of their colleagues as their soul mates because they have share the happiness and sorrow during their work. Therefore, work for more days can do help to create a great cooperation and friendship among the workers because they have more opportunities to meet with each other, communicate with each other, and share with each other.
  Considering all the analysis above, although working long time for three days can bring a much more weekends or so called mini holidays for workers, however the surmount of rest time is equivalent to the other working mode. In my eyes, working shorter hours for five days can be more suitable working mode for nowadays' workers who live in such a sophisticated and versatile society, and can lead our life to being more efficient and healthy.

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