【独立写作】芥菜粽·作业贴

芥菜粽UID：3344214

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2月6日作业：辛苦一下帮我互改的同学看看那个哪些固定搭配或者用法错了请毫不留情滴圈出来……多谢多谢
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2月10日作业：改的同学辛苦了，不仅超时了而且感觉很混乱（不是说ETS不关心政治的么T T）……蒋友柏那个例子嗯我知道是他遵祖训不能从政而不是……但是我这里实在想不到其它例子了只好扭曲一下他的例子了……
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2月18日作业：相隔四天俺又回来啦~刚回学校…行李又超重神马的然后手洗冬天的衣服…五脏六腑像给挪了一遍…OTZ
2月19日作业：= =俺觉得要开始控时了，最近越写越多…话唠神马的毛病又犯了…
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2月22日作业：呃我自己写完之后改了一点…SO里面已经有一点改动了哈…辛苦了！
2月23日作业：同上，自己有先订正一些地方，互改的同学辛苦了^-^
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2月26日作业：单词拼写已订正。辛苦了！
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shancheUID：3386780

你是不是写错题目了？

芥菜粽UID：3344214

shanche 发表于 2013-1-20 12:21
你是不是写错题目了？

= =呃我是按照题库的顺序里的第一题写的……

芥菜粽UID：3344214

2013/1/20第二篇
A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your reason.

The community I live now is a mature community which stands in a region designing for living. Most people here have their own jobs in the other area of the city. Peaceful and comfortable feelings are the tone of communities here. If there will be a large factory locating near my home, it does bring us some benefits. However, the negative influence will deserve more concern.
On the one hand, it looks good if we have a large factory outside our community. First of all, factory is the sign of financial income in most cases, which often results in the determination of the local government to develop industrial regions. Stable production, technological facilities companied by numerous products, especially some chemical industries which are the basis of the whole production chain, makes it profitable for highly increasing local economic. Secondly, a large factory often guarantees a variety of jobs. Those who seek for jobs can have more chances.
On the other hand, a factory makes things worse. Since my city aims at developing the third industry which is also called the service industries, all the factories have been settled in a special district at a distance from the city. It is impossible for one factory earn the right to construct here. Apart from that it disobeys the city designing, civilians’ protesting about the environmental pollutions, including water pollution, air pollution, and the noise disturbance, will surely stir up people’s negative reaction. One possible result is that the factory moves to another place under the stress of civilians living around it.
In a word, building a factory near my community seems lead to much disadvantages than benefits. However, if an area’s population lives hand to mouth, there is no better method than set up a factory to help the region get rid of poverty. Whether it is good or bad to have the factories depend on the places where it locates.

芥菜粽UID：3344214

……自己占个位子其实是换掉之前没传上来的附件OTZ……

芥菜粽UID：3344214

……这是个意外，删掉了，在一楼都有……

月明日暗UID：3400027

1.19已好


请修改一下我的

yhgggUID：3399477

1.21的改好了，多多交流讨论~

芥菜粽UID：3344214

月明日暗 发表于 2013-1-21 23:03
1.19已好

T T原来你们可以看到我的作业啊我都看不见我自己贴的作业……马上改好！请稍等一下下！

月明日暗UID：3400027

1.22已好。不好意思晚了哈。

这是我的22号的，麻烦看一下:)

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1486380-1-2.html

yhgggUID：3399477

好了~

yhgggUID：3399477

好啦 多多交流啊~

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yhggg 发表于 2013-1-30 11:16
好啦 多多交流啊~

嗯嗯谢谢哈~

bookchenUID：3051527

1.29 作业修改，来晚了!

yhgggUID：3399477

bookchen 发表于 2013-1-31 03:06
1.29 作业修改，来晚了!

lz 1.29 还有我的作业哦~【独立写作】yhggg作业贴
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