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发表于 2007-10-9 23:30:58 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

这些是我修改过的一些作文，可能收录不全，我会尽量再为大家改的！希望大家能支持！谢谢！

开始上学了。。。可能不能及时跟大家交流作文，希望大家见谅！我有时间一定帮助大家！

这只是个链接用的帖子，请不要跟帖作文，大家如果有需要修改的作文可以自己帖到论坛上，请大家一起改一改，交流交流，gter上除了我还有很多人都在帮助大家。我修改了以后我会在这个帖子上做链接的，并随时更新:-)

对大家提一个小小的要求：希望以后作文的前面能尽量的把作文题目写全，这样大家交流的时候会比较方便！如果能注明是OG上的题目还是几月份JJ上的题目那更好^_^

并祝所有gter能在TOEFL中考的理想成绩！！！

作文修改链接：
01. Topic: Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

02. Topic: 是否同意在高峰期对上路的司机收费

03. Topic: Agree or disagree? People can learn more from watching television than reading books.

04. Topic: In your opinion, which one is better, to spend money on sth last for a long time, such as valuable jewelry, or spend your money on short term pleasure such as vacation?

05. Topic: Agree or disagree? Movies and televisions have more positive or more negative effects on young people's behaviors.

06. Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement ? Games are as important for adults as they are for children.

07. Topic: 选择在一个地方住还是经常搬家？

08. Topic: should pets be treated like family members?

09. Topic: Agree or disagree? The ability to cooperate well with others is more important today than in the past.

10. Topic: It has been said,"Not everything that is learned is contained in books."Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important ?why?

11. Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising can tell you a lot about a country. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

12. Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

13. Topic: Are zoos necessary?

14. Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Being happy with your job is more important than high salary.

15. Topic: Does human activity improve or damage the earth?

16. Topic: A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory nearyour community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this newinfluence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory?Explain your position.

17. Topic: 社区要不要建大学？

18. Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement? Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is moreenjoyable than watching movies. Use specific reasons and examples toexplain your position.

19. Topic: It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your
answer.

20. Topic: The expression "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and neverstop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with thisstatement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

21. Topic: 好邻居的品质

22. Topic: Agree or disagree? It is the responsibility of the government to provide health care to everyone living in that country.

23. Topic: Some people think it isvery important to earn large amounts of money. Others just want to earna comfortable life. Analyze each viewpoint and give your own stance.

24. Topic: It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained inbooks." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience withknowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is moreimportant? Why?

25. Topic: A teacher’s ability to relate with the students is more important than have sufficient knowledge being taught.

26. Topic: 学生该学很多课程还是只集中在某一具体学科上

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