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发表于 2007-10-12 12:47:22 |显示全部楼层
10.21号考

得写写了

祝自己好运

再祝大家好运

各位xdjm,麻烦拍拍给点建议

我写了这么多,随便帮我该一篇吧,豆豆

118. Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you prefer? Explain why.  

Nowadays, some people holds the opinion that they want change, and look forward to new experiences. However, others argue that they like their lives to stay the same. Different people have diverse answers based on their individual background. As for me, the first statement deserves the priority. My reasons are listed as follows.

First of all, new experience can bring me superise. It would make my life more wonderful. For example, if I try new jobs in a new field, I could not only make plenty of  new friends but also get to know which field I have talent in. If I find a job that suits me well, I would be very happy for finding it, and then I could figure out what kind of job I can manage well. On the contrary, if I stay on the same job, it would be boring to do the same work and deal with the same people everyday.
So changes would be a better choice for me.

In addition, I can learn a lot of new knowledge in the changes. As we know, every filed has its own knowledge, if you are not in this field, you  might know little about it. If I try to experence new field, I can learn a lot. For instance, I am fond of  place of interest and even dream to do such an aderventure to pay a visit to every of them. If I do so, I could be familiar of the history of the world and the customs in different areas.
Thus new experience if necessary for me to learn more.

Furthermore, I can relieve myself in the changes. Iife would be terrible if it is all the same whole life, and I would be tired of the same thing every day. If I try to experience something new, then I would think this is just like a trip in my life, I could try anything I want and like. If I don't like, I could drop it. I would not  regards my jobs as a matter but a game. So why not take the changes?

for the factors discussed above, I unshakably think I would like changes.

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PS: 用那个 作文软件写的,30分钟完成的,很草啊:funk:   10.13

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发表于 2007-10-12 12:48:13 |显示全部楼层
A or B

1.Topic: Some people think it is very important to earn large amounts of money.
           Others just want to earn a comfortable life.
          Analyze each viewpoint and give your own stance.



There is a debatable issue about money. Some hold the opinion that it is very important to earn large amounts of money. However, others think earning a comfortable life should deserve the priority. Personally, I would rather side with the previous
group. My reasons are listed as follows.


First of all, with enough money, I could make my dreams come true. Everyone has his own dream which enables him to think life could be wonderful. For example, I am always dream of traveling to Gui Lin, located in China. The sky there is so blue, birds are singing on the trees, fish are jumping in the small river, you can image how harmony and natural world it is. Although I am eager to go there, my plan is usually canceled due to lack of money. If I possess lots of money, I would undoubtedly to enjoy my time in Gui Lin. So money can help me to accomplish my dream.In addition, I could help others out of trouble with some money. Money is always an efficient tool in dealing with some problems. For instance, if my friend falls sick, and need to have an operation, I think he would not only worry about his illness but also the medication fee of him. As we know, patient should take a good rest and be in a calm mood as well. If so, he would become worse and worse, and have no patience to take the medical care anymore. In this situation, I would help him out of trouble as long as I get lots of money.

Furthermore, if I own
a great deal of money, I could live a comfortable life with my family and make my life easier. As for me, the most precious thing in the world would be my family. If my family members are all in good state, I would think I am the happiest man in the world. If there is enough money for me, I can do whatever I can to support my family. Such as, I can send my children to the most celebrated school, give my parents the best medical care, construct the warmest atmosphere in my home. Thus money is necessary for me to cherish my family.

In a word, earning large amounts of money is important for me for the factors making my dream come true, helping friends, living a comfortable life with my family. I will unshakably try my best to earn a great deal of money.


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发表于 2007-10-12 13:19:22 |显示全部楼层
2.Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television.

When faced the debate that whether attending a live performance is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television or not, Different people may express diverse attitudes based on individual background. As for me, I definitely disagree with this statement. My reasons are list as follows.

First of all, I would feel uncomfortable when I am in a live performance. As we know, it is impolite to talk loudly or eat in the concert, you have to keep yourself silent and mind your action, so never mention enjoyable. On the contrary, if I watch it on television, I could enjoy the beautiful melody of the musicians without constrains. When I am hungry, I could take the delicious food; When I am tired, I could lay on my soft and comfortable bed; When I am lonely, I could talk with my friends freely. I don’t need to worry about that my behavior would affect others. So it would be more enjoyable for me to watch the performance a home.

In addition, watching the performance at home save me a lots of money. It is a common phenomena that you have to pay for the live performance. Due to that I have no job and no salary as well, I am usually lack of money. All the money I possess comes from my parents, which I usually spend on the scientific books which relate to my study. There is almost no money left for me to attend the live performance. If I watch it on TV, I could not only watch whatever performance I like without payment but also accumulate more money to purchase the books I need.

Although attending a live performance can also bring some advantages like providing me the close attention, from the factors uncomfortable  in a live performance and saving money when watch it on TV discussed above, I undoubtedly draw the conclusion that Watching the same event on TV is more enjoyable for me.

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发表于 2007-10-12 15:04:21 |显示全部楼层
127. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.  

An increasing number of people prefer to go to movies rather than read fiction. However, others state that reading fiction is more enjoyable than watching movies. Different people have different opinions based on their individual background. As for me, I think watching movies is more enjoyable. My reason for this point are listed as follows.

First of all, reading fiction in book would be very boring. There is no moving images or sounds, you not only have to read the words but also think what does that mean. For me, reading fiction in a book is just like I am study. On the contrary, watching movie, we just need to watch and listen, when you are hungry, you can take some delicious food; when you are tired, you can lay on your bed; when you are lonely, you can talk with your friends. So you can easily figure out that movie would be more enjoyable.

In addition, reading fiction for a long time would do harm to our eyes. As we know, there are more  and more close-eye people in the world because of using their eyes too much. In the fiction book, the words are so small that you eyes would be tired after a short time reading. If you keep on your reading, your sight would drop day by day. However, when you watching movie, the imagine is big  enough that you would feel tired of your eyes easily. Even if you are tired, you can still carry on the movie by closing you eyes and listenning to it.

Furthermore, we could get to know the latest fashional information in the movie. There are plenty of beautiful girls and handsome guys in the movie, they would bring us the latest fashinal information. I could learn how to dress me up and be a fashional man so that I could be confident in my daliy life. So why not  take it.


From the factors presented above, I would draw the conclusion that watching moive deserve the priority  and is more enjoyable than reading fiction without any hesitation.

Word Count: 348。 软件写的,30分钟完成,其实22分钟就写完了,一气呵成...

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发表于 2007-10-12 15:38:28 |显示全部楼层
Lz的文章有点像考过G的人写的 呵呵 Issue

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发表于 2007-10-12 15:44:11 |显示全部楼层

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什么意思?

本人未考G

第一次动笔,练练手感

给个具体评价也好啊,各位

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发表于 2007-10-12 17:55:22 |显示全部楼层
楼主不错啊
我也是21号考
半小时都写不完
愁啊
现在正自己归模板呢

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发表于 2007-10-12 17:56:51 |显示全部楼层

回复 #7 ttcsf 的帖子

你也加入一起写吧

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发表于 2007-10-12 18:00:02 |显示全部楼层
第二篇好像没有写满三个理由啊。

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发表于 2007-10-12 18:49:36 |显示全部楼层

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不一定非得3个理由吧?

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发表于 2007-10-12 19:04:21 |显示全部楼层
楼主这题目是随便选的吗?
用不用按类别挑几篇写啊?

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发表于 2007-10-12 22:50:57 |显示全部楼层
球拍

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发表于 2007-10-13 10:00:17 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2007-10-13 17:15:45 |显示全部楼层
豆豆,帮我改改

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发表于 2007-10-13 17:22:14 |显示全部楼层
好像有小小死板

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