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dongzhi428UID: 2556730

TOPIC: ISSUE88 - "Technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics."
WORDS: 306!
TIME: 00:45:00
DATE: 2009-8-25 9:57:17

Although technologies! have much influence on our present society within varies aspects, I partially agree with the speaker on the assertion claim that the technologies could determine social customs and ethics on every facets.

On the first place, it is true that the technologies have much influence on our lives. With the booming of the technologies, individuals' social customs has changed significantly. As we all know that the quality of the people's life has great increasingly, so that a great numbers of customs and ethics that are held by us have changed. Due to the comprehensive used in computer, people tend to write by hand less and less, at the same time, people's communication seems less than before. Take the dormitory of Chinese Universities for example, the students always played card or had a chat with each other during the free time ten yeas ago, however; now they are more absorbed by computer game. On positive facets, the technologies, which is taking a great numbers of innovations let our society more freedom and open. The women get more jobs as a result of that the headwork plays an important role in contemporary society. The international trade has more frequently than before and brings much more materials and culture.

On the second place, the technologies are also changing our standpoints at the same time. Dispite there are many unsolved knowledge in science fields, many cognations have already abandon by people.
For instance, before 18s the public was accepted that the earth was the center of the universe. But with the developing of astronomy, now we know our planet is just a little part inside the universe. The inventors, such as Huber scope help us to understand the unknown
world. Indeed, our society has been deeply influenced by technology.

Admittedly, the technology has changed us a lot; actually the profound customs and ethnics have still kept by us. Such as the traditional festival, basically social moral and religion believes. In Spring Festival, the Chinese should go back home and get tighter with families just like the American Thanks Giving Day. Moreover, even in today’s society, we also need respect our parents and foster our children. Finally, no matter what the science proof that there is no God, the believers always insist their faiths.

Taking into account all these factors, we may draw the conclusion that the technology can change our social customs and ethnic to same extent, however; it cannot impact all the cultures and ethnics, which we need to reserve in order to make the world more colorful and regular.

maggiegu1019UID: 2683879

TOPIC: ISSUE88 - "Technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics." WORDS: 306! TIME: 00:45:00 DATE: 2009-8-25 9:57:17 Although technologies! have much influence on our present society within varies aspects,（转折一下会不会好点) I partially agree with the speaker on the assertion claim that the technologies could determine social customs and ethics on every facets. On（In） the first place, it is true that the technologies have much influence on our lives. With the booming of the technologies（我的绝杀：the quantum leap in science and technology取代前边那句）, individuals' social customs have changed significantly. As we all know that the quality of the people's life has great increasingly, so that a great numbers of customs and ethics that are held by us have changed. Due to the comprehensive(改成populization ) used in computer, people tend to write by hand less and less, at the same time, people's communication seems less than before. Take the dormitory of Chinese Universities for example, the students always played card or had a chat with each other during the free time ten yeas ago(这种错误要注意哦), however; now they are more absorbed（attracted） by computer game. On positive facets, the technologies, which is taking a great numbers of innovations let our society more freedom and open (in mind). The women get more jobs as a result of that the headwork plays an important role in contemporary society. (女人获得了更多的工作，因此脑力劳动在当今的社会中更重要了，你想说这个意思？有点不对题吧)The international trade has（is） more frequently than before and brings much more materials and culture mores（culture后边加上这词，凑字数呀，还有水平）. In the second place, the technologies are also changing our viewpoints at the same time. Dispite there are many unsolved knowledge(知识就是已经知道的东西，改成problems) in science fields, many cognations have already abandoned by people. For instance, before 18s the public was accepted that the earth was the center of the universe. But with the developing of astronomy, now we know our planet is just a little part inside the universe. The inventors, such as Huber scope help us to understand the unknown world. Indeed, our society has been deeply influenced by technology. Admittedly, the technology has changed us a lot; actually the profound customs and ethnics have still kept by us. Such as the traditional festival, basically social moral and religion believes. In Spring Festival, the Chinese should go back home and get tighter(together) with families just like the American's Thanks Giving Day. Moreover, even in today’s society, we also need respect our parents and foster our children. Finally, no matter what(whether) the science proof  there is no God, the believers always insist their faiths and convictions. Taking into account all these factors, we may draw the conclusion that the technology can change our social customs and ethnic to some extent, however; it can not impact all the cultures and ethnics, which we need to reserve in order to make the world more colorful and regular.

maggiegu1019UID: 2683879

有点不够紧扣题，我认为！
人家说CUSTOM AND ETHICS 你就按照这两方面写，即使要延伸到生活，也是在这两方面的基础山延伸，按照题里列出的写肯定没错啦~~ 另外，我建议写双方相互的作用，这样比较容易扣紧题目，不爱跑偏~~