9.1日作文作业

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第一次交作业，大家多批评，超时了10分钟:funk:
Do you agree or disagree: Most people prefer others making decision for them than making a decision for themselves.
As the progress of the socialization, the relationship between people becomes more and more close than before. People seem to be more dependent on their friends. Hence, it comes to the controversial issue that whether making decision ourselves or by others. I concede that under some situation, it is more suitable for us to make decision ourselves .However, it is of great benefit for us to receive the advice of others.
I concede that the one who recognize us is ourselves. Hence, making a decision ourselves should most fit our need for the reason. For example, we have to choose our roommate at the very beginning of the first semester. Although our parents and relatives have more experiment than us, they cannot make a decision which roommate is better fit us. It is possible that my father claim that a roommate with the character of hard work is suit for me because I can shallow the influence of him and be forced to study hard. However, I hold the point that I have studied a whole day in the studying room and what I want to do in the dorm is to relax and rest. Such kind of roommate make me under the tension of the study and even effect the efficiency of my study the nest day .
However, it is hard for us to consider the decision in a two dimensional way without the helps of others. So it is undeniable we could observe the more comprehensive aspect of one thing by receiving the advices by others. For example, after graduating from the high school, we should choose university to get further education. It could be hasty for us to make a decision by myself for the reason that not only no experiment do I have but also I cannot hold the entire information needed to choose a university. Hence a better choice for us is that we should ask our teacher or our old brother for help.
In addition, making decisions by others can give us a chance to avoid the unnecessary responsibility. Although we should get into the habit of taking responsibility of what we do, it could help us from entangle me in trivialness. For example, when I go shopping with my mother, I always let my mother to choice the brand of juice because I would accuse the bad taste of it to my mother. Otherwise, my mother could blame me because of not following her choice for a long period of time, which makes little sense and could cause the misunderstanding between my mother and me .

In sum, I concede that under some special circumstance, it would be more suitable for one to make a decision ourselves. However, we could benefit a lot by making a choice by others. Because it will offer us more valid information and help us avoid unimportant responsibility.

752585UID: 2516542

As the progress of the socialization, the relationship between people becomes more and more close than before.（有between一定有and, 不如改为people’s relationship） People seem to be more dependent on their friends. Hence, it comes to the controversial issue that whether making decision ourselves or by others. I concede that under some situation, it is more suitable for us to make decision ourselves .However, it is of great benefit for us to receive the advice of others.
I concede that the one who recognize (understand,更好，recognize是认出)us is ourselves. Hence, making a decision ourselves should most（more） fit our need for the reason. For example, we have to choose our roommate at the very beginning of the first semester. Although our parents and relatives have（are）more experiment than us, they cannot make a decision which roommate is better fit us. It is possible that my father claims that a roommate with the character of hard work is suit for me because I can shallow（under？） the influence of him and be forced to study hard. However, I hold the point that I have studied a whole day in the studying room and what I want to do in the dorm is to relax and rest. Such kind of roommate makes me under the tension of the study and even effects the efficiency of my study the nest day .
However, it is hard for us to consider the decision in a two dimensional way without the helps of others. So it is undeniable we could observe the more comprehensive aspect of one thing by receiving the advices by others. For example, after graduating from the high school, we should choose university to get further education. It could be hasty for us to make a decision by myself for the reason that not only no experiment do I have but also I cannot hold the entire information needed to choose a university.（彻底语法不对） Hence a better choice for us is that we should ask （直接asking）our teacher or our old brother for help.
In addition, making decisions by others can give us a chance to avoid the unnecessary responsibility. Although we should get into the habit of taking responsibility of what we do, it could help us from entangle me in （out?）trivialness. For example, when I go shopping with my mother, I always let my mother to choice the brand of juice because I would accuse the bad taste of it to my mother. Otherwise, my mother could blame me because of not following her choice for a long period of time, which makes little sense and could cause the misunderstanding between my mother and me .(例子不好)

In sum, I concede that under some special circumstance, it would be more suitable for one to make a decision ourselves. However, we could benefit a lot(more) by making a choice by others. Because it will offer us more valid information and help us avoid unimportant responsibility.

最大的毛病就是老“I” “I concede”也多了点，直接说观点就OK，不要老“I”有点跑题（receiving the advices by others）最终决定的还

752585UID: 2516542

As the progress of the socialization, the relationship between people becomes more and more close than before.（有between一定有and, 不如改为people’s relationship） People seem to be more dependent on their friends. Hence, it comes to the controversial issue that whether making decision ourselves or by others. I concede that under some situation, it is more suitable for us to make decision ourselves .However, it is of great benefit for us to receive the advice of others.
! E; F- c, @$ i" @  {0 g" RI concede that the one who recognize (understand,更好，recognize是认出)us is ourselves. Hence, making a decision ourselves should most（more） fit our need for the reason. For example, we have to choose our roommate at the very beginning of the first semester. Although our parents and relatives have（are）more experiment than us, they cannot make a decision which roommate is better fit us. It is possible that my father claims that a roommate with the character of hard work is suit for me because I can shallow（under？） the influence of him and be forced to study hard. However, I hold the point that I have studied a whole day in the studying room and what I want to do in the dorm is to relax and rest. Such kind of roommate makes me under the tension of the study and even effects the efficiency of my study the nest day .
: A% d( h# p+ d/ x8 O& _However, it is hard for us to consider the decision in a two dimensional way without the helps of others. So it is undeniable we could observe the more comprehensive aspect of one thing by receiving the advices by others. For example, after graduating from the high school, we should choose university to get further education. It could be hasty for us to make a decision by myself for the reason that not only no experiment do I have but also I cannot hold the entire information needed to choose a university.（彻底语法不对） Hence a better choice for us is that we should ask （直接asking）our teacher or our old brother for help.
0 N/ h" _+ ^. w$ Q/ z- R& e1 FIn addition, making decisions by others can give us a chance to avoid the unnecessary responsibility. Although we should get into the habit of taking responsibility of what we do, it could help us from entangle me in
（out?）trivialness. For example, when I go shopping with my mother, I always let my mother to choice the brand of juice because I would accuse the bad taste of it to my mother. Otherwise, my mother could blame me because of not following her choice for a long period of time, which makes little sense and could cause the misunderstanding between my mother and me .(例子不好)
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6 Z1 n7 r/ z$ b! F( R0 jIn sum, I concede that under some special circumstance, it would be more suitable for one to make a decision ourselves. However, we could benefit a lot(more) by making a choice by others. Because it will offer us more valid information and help us avoid unimportant responsibility.

最大的毛病就是老“I”
“I concede”也多了点，直接说观点就OK，不要老“I”有点跑题（receiving the advices by others）最终决定的还

752585UID: 2516542

....快哭了。。。不知道怎么发颜色。。。我在word里编辑完，贴上没颜色

752585UID: 2516542

....快哭了。。。不知道怎么发颜色。。。我在word里编辑完，贴上没颜色