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In the application, the writer points out that it is a good idea to hold a jazz music club in Monroe. To strengthen the assertion, the writer cites that there is 65 miles from Monroe to the nearest jazz club. In addition, several well-known jazz musicians live in Monroe, and there are a lot of people who attended the last summer’s jazz festival. Besides, a survey shows that jazz fans spend about 1000 dollars per year. While close examination of the supporting evidence, however, none of them lends credible supporting to the recommendation.

To begin with, if the jazz is so popular in the Manroe, why no one jazz club was conducted here. The writer provides no information about this condition. Maybe the people in this area are much less than the place where the nearest jazz club was located. Thus there is no necessity for such less people to build a jazz club even who are in favor of the jazz.

Another reason that is against with the writer's viewpoint is the authority of the survey. Over 100,000 people attended the jazz festival last summer don't not mean that they will come every year, it is entirely possible that the festival was incited by the government for a special meeting which conducted only once. Besides, we can not be sure if the attended people are local, perhaps most of who come from the outside town, which means that there is not enough people to be interested in jazz.

Thirdly, the writer said the radio here is highest-rated, maybe people don't like listening to radio, even high, the actual quantity is small. Even people like the programmer; perhaps they think it is a better way to listen to the radio, therefore sufficient people to attend the jazz music. Moreover, several famous musicians live here is not sufficient show they work here, probably in the club 65 miles away.

Last but least is the investigation, we can not apply the nationwide level to everywhere, the writer give nothing about the actual money the local people spend on jazz. Even assuming the foregoing description is justifiable. Also the bank must consider if the finance can cover the need of this group developers. Or even having enough money, it might has other better choices to load the money to other developers.

In sum, the argument is logically flawed and thereby unpersuasive as it stands. The writer can not convince to accept his idea before providing more information about current situation in Monroe. Such as the rate of local people in the jazz festival and the money they spend on the jazz entertainment. Useful would be any more information about the famous jazz musicians. It is better if the writer can supply us with the strategies of the bank and government.