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发表于 2009-9-22 19:51:19 |显示全部楼层

这篇比较好写，但是没有准备过，自己用软件random来的，我想知道这个水平可以得多少分？也不需要太仔细评，提下意见就好。我后天就考，不，大后天，谢谢你们！！！我考完了肯定会常回这看看的！！
TOPIC: ISSUE116 - "With the growth of global networks in such areas as economics and communication, there is no doubt that every aspect of society-including education, politics, the arts, and the sciences-will benefit greatly from international influences."
WORDS: 540 TIME: 00:45:00 DATE: 2009-9-22 18:39:18

In this world with growing trend of globalization, the international influence permeates and shapes people's life at almost every turn. In my observation, this inernational influence is generally beneficial to education, politics, arts and science because of the convenient access to information and the usage of global resource. However, this influence also brings about some negative consequences, which I do believe, can be addressed by the development of globalization.

To begin with, global networks in economics and communication keep people informed of the latest development in science and technology, as well as many important events happening in the world. Many aspects of society benefit from this increasing exposure to internationl information. The most impressing aspect, for me, is our education. Using computers, Internet and other advanced devices, modern education presents student a world where they can attend classs in another country, talk to the world famous professor and communicate with foreign students on the Internet. It is beyond the imagination of people before the growing of international influences. Up to date information equips students with global eyesight, profound viewpoint and invite them to see the world in a critical and comprehensive way. With this global influence, students can progress with the rapidly changing world.

In addition, this global networks also confirm the link between different countries.
People gradually learn that they can benefit from global communication and cooperation. For example, many businesses have now adopted global strategy in producing and marketing their products. One country may be abundant with labor resource, but with scarce capital. While another country may just be the opposite. Global network matches them and contribute their both prosper and success. By specilizing in the field that a country is good at, both the working efficiency and production quality are improved. Besides, consumers all over the world now have more choices with lower prices. Now, when you drive your TOYATO at the beach, you may not realize that this car is actually made up from seven countries. It is magical, and it is created by global network.

However, I am afraid that the consequences of this global influence are not always positive. Take the international specilization for example, when two countries, or more countries are reallocating their resources and planning how to specilize in certain fields, they may not realize that their global strategy is depriving some workers' jobs. Large amount of workers, replaced by the autamation of industrial production and cheaper labor from the other side of the earth, find themselves unemployed and lacking the skills required by other jobs. They hate this kind of international influence and that is why there are campaign against globalization in some countries. The international influences have also created an ever -- increasing complicated world. Complicated politics, intricate multiculture, and intense competition in the areas of arts and science. All of these, are also created by global influences.

Now, how can we judge international influences? Should we welcome this kind of global network? This is not an absolute black and white matter, but I do think that the advantage that are brought about by the internationl influnences outweigh its disadvantages. With the further development of this global influences, some problems are expected to be solved and we human can actually live in a harmonious earth village.