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Good looks and dresses are more important for success than good ideas. Agree or disagree?
反对观点
正文提纲
1、先同意，毕竟像模特之类的职业还是很注重外表和穿着的
2、转折，打部分人来说还是good idea更重要
3、即便是模特也需要有good idea

No matter people are watching movies or in the real life, they can always find that good looks and good ideas are two common things people pursue to. Which one is more important for us to succeed? I think it is good idea of course.

When a model meets this situation, it is no doubt that the nice appearance is more important than his/her idea. It is ridiculous that a successful model who's height is 160 centimetre with a normal face walking on the T-shaped stag, even s/he is such a intelligent person who's IQ is 200. Because as a model, the most important element is his/her appearance include the height, nice face, temperament. We do not care his/her idea or intelligence, his education background, they are no use for a model.

However, to most of the people, have a smart brain is more important than beautiful looks. Since people who are models and other similar occupation are only a small group, most of the people are farmers, workers, researchers include scientists, teachers and so on. They really need good idea in their job. As a farmer, s/he must know what is the time to breed the sow, how to protect the farm from crucial insects' damage and find the way to increase the farm's output... Workers, researchers and other occupations are live in the same situation, because if they want to finish their job successfully, they should always have good idea.

What is more, a famous model is also need good ideas. If people want to be one of the most famous models in the world, I think, s/he must choose the right fashion show to take, the special designer to follow ... These are all need them to have good ideas.

All in all, it is more important for people to have good ideas than good appearance for reasons that nice appearance is only useful to a few people while the smart brain is suitable to almost all of the areas.

joyceliuUID: 2477232

Nomatter people are watching movies or in the real life, they can alwaysfind that good looks and good ideas are two common things peoplepursuit to. Which one is more important for us to success? I think itis good idea of course.
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When a model meets this situation, it is no doubt that the niceappearance is more important than his/her idea. It is ridiculous that asuccessful model who's height is only 160 centimetre with a normal facewalking on the T-shaped stag, even s/he is such a an intelligent personwho's IQ is 200 or more . Because as a model, the most important element ishis/her outside appearance include the height, nice face, temperament. We (people) donot care his/her idea or intelligence, his education background, theyare no(little) use for a model.8 K8 s' k( x0 w4 N) ]& x5 H

" v) h8 q2 X$ V" B2 lHowever, tomost of the(the majority of )people, have(having) a smart brain is more important than beautifullooks. Since people who are models and other similar occupation areonly a small group, most of the people are farmers, workers,researchers include scientists, teachers and so on. They really needgood idea in their job(jobs). As a farmer, s/he must know what is the time tobreed the sow, how to protect the farm from crucial insects' damage andfind the way to increase the farm's output... Workers, researchers andother occupations are live in the same situation, because if they wantto finish their job successfully, they should always have good idea(ideas).3 V5 b- Y. z9 E. X* c  O2 s$ C

' v, t) R, `) B7 hWhat is more, afamous model is also need (needs)good ideas. If people want to be one of themost famous models in the world, I think, s/he must choose the rightfashion show to take, the special designer to follow ... These are allneed them to have good ideas.2 G6 M# A1 h9 U) k

9 T+ j$ w4 H3 N" I# ~" uAll in all,it is more important for people to have good ideas than good appearancefor reasons that nice appearance is only useful to a few of peoplewhile the smart brain is suitable to almost all of the areas.

lupiscesUID: 2231942

No matter people are watching movies or in the real life, they can always find that good looks and good ideas are two common things people pursuit（pursuit是名词） to. Which one is more important for us to success（success是名词）? I think it is good idea of course.3 v$ Y) W$ q+ f, x0 t4 s0 F

When a model meets this situation, it is no doubt that the nice appearance is more important than his/her idea. It is ridiculous that a successful model who's height is 160 centimetre with a normal face walking on the T-shaped stag, even s/he is such a intelligent person who's IQ is 200. Because as a model, the most important element is his/her appearance include（应该是including） the height, nice face, temperament. We do not care his/her idea or intelligence, his education background, they are no use(应该是useful或者of no use) for a model.  ]) |3 y4 T) d, l! W' \9 }

However, to most of the people, have(having) a smart brain is more important than beautiful looks. Since people who are models and other similar occupation are only a small group, most of the people are farmers, workers, researchers include（应该是including） scientists, teachers and so on. They really need good idea in their job. As a farmer, s/he must know what is the time to breed the sow, how to protect the farm from crucial insects' damage and find the way to increase the farm's output... Workers, researchers and other occupations are live in the same situation, because if they want to finish their job successfully, they should always have good idea.' j1 n( x: k5 }. U* o9 y. i
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What is more, a famous model is also need good ideas. If people want to be one of the most famous models in the world, I think, s/he must choose the right fashion show to take, the special designer to follow ... These are all need them to have good ideas.

All in all, it is more important for people to have good ideas than good appearance for reasons that nice appearance is only useful to a few of (不需要of)people while the smart brain is suitable to almost all of the areas.

理由说的比较清楚
语法错误有些多，用词可以再斟酌一下~