进军美利坚作文组－10。7号

LeviathaZUID: 2456472

10.15 教师是否应该获得跟doctors,lawyers,business leaders一样的收入. i) T7 }6 h& s8 R% b: n
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In the rapidly developing society, what is the most important element? Undoubtedly, talent. Teacher（不能这样单用吧） consequently plays a more crutial role in the upcoming decade. Therefore there is a hot controversy that if teacher（一个问题，得加冠词吧或者teachers） should earn the money as much as doctors, lawyers, and business leaders. Personally speaking, I strongly advocate that teachers should gain higher salary（salaries？） than now. Of countless reasons, I will present the most conspicuous ones to you.

The first plain truth, I am presenting here, is that teacher is so important to each human being that we cannot pay the price for losing them.（这里没看懂） While（接句子吧？） nowadays in most cities of china, teachers only lead a life（是lives吗？我也一直没懂这个单复数对应的问题） from hand to mouth. Some even do not earn enough to support the whole family（families，同样的） in the village. In the current situation, how could they dedicate themselves to the education, to the future of the society.（？问句吧） So the number of teacher decline a little in some period, as few of （a few of）them quit the job. As old saying goes, teachers are the soul cleaner（cleaners，如果改错了请务必告知我） of human generation. Only by teacher’s work can each individual walk（walks） on the right road and become（becomes） a useful and decent person contributing to harmony and development of community.

The furthermore and subtle fact is that it is teacher who cultivate talents, such as doctors, lawyers, business leaders, why can’t they get the same salary as them. Essentially, no teacher no them（换个说法较好）. Teachers impart all of their knowledge and deep expectation to students. Under the caring and love, each student obtains sufficient knowledge to chase his or her dream and becomes qualified to the work in varieties of area.（这个观点说的很新颖）

In addition, teachers deserve high value due to their fairly hard work. Admittedly, it is the nature of teacher need all educators work hard, therefore they entitle to lead a better life.（这一句我没看懂，教师的天职就是需要教育者努力工作，因而得到更好的生活？）

论证的还是不错的，有些小问题需要注意。感觉句子都比较硬，我说不好，是太短了还是怎么着。加油

joyceliuUID: 2477232

Inthe rapidly developing society, what is the most important element?Undoubtedly, talent. Teacher consequently plays a more crutial role inthe upcoming decade. Therefore there is a hot controversy that ifteacher should earn the money as much as doctors, lawyers, and businessleaders. Personally speaking, I strongly advocate that teachers shouldgain higher salary than now. Of countless reasons, I will present themost conspicuous ones to you.

Thefirst plain truth, I am presenting here, is that teacher is soimportant to each（去掉） human being that we cannot pay the price for losingthem. While nowadays in most cities of china, teachers only lead a lifefrom hand to mouth. Some even do not earn enough to support the wholefamily in the village. In the current situation, how could theydedicate themselves to the education, to the future of the society. So（As a result)the number of teacher decline a little in some period, as(since) few of themquit the job. As (an)old saying goes, teachers are the soul cleaner ofhuman generation. Only by teacher’s work can each individual walk onthe right road and become a useful and decent person contributing toharmony and development of community.

Thefurthermore and subtle fact is that it is teacher who cultivatetalents, such as doctors, lawyers, business leaders, why can’t they getthe same salary as them. Essentially, no teacher no them(without the help from teacher, there are no other workers in the society). Teachersimpart all of their knowledge and deep expectation to students. Underthe caring and love, each student obtains sufficient knowledge to chasehis or her dream and becomes qualified to the work in varieties of area.

Inaddition, teachers deserve high value due to their fairly hard work.Admittedly, it is the nature of teacher need all educators work hard,therefore they entitle to lead a better life.

joyceliuUID: 2477232

第二段有点看不明白，为啥挣得少，还不辞职，是要说说明他们高尚么？所以要这那个工资，扯远了

daisy840228UID: 2684617

10.16 years from now, people will have more leisure time

When I was little girl, I usually heard my grandpa told me how hard it was in the past. They worked for a whole day only to lead a live from hand to mouth. While nowadays people can spend some time to drink coffee in the afternoon, watch movie after work, travel to some famous places to have fun. Obviously people present are living a better life than before. I am and will always be the one who strongly champion the view that people will lead a more cozy life and have more leisure time due to the development of society. Of countless reasons, I will give you the most conspicuous ones to you.

The first plain truth,I am presenting here, is that by the assistance of technology, people could work and study efficiently, and gain more time to entertain. No one can deny that it is an era characterized by the unparalleled explosion of technology, which brings our lives convenience and comfort. To illustrate it, the computer makes your study and work more efficiently, we can download the teacher’s lecture slides, and review it later; we are able to communicate to our boss by E-mail or have a conference on video online; we manage to google whatever information we need from the internet; All of these save us a great amount of time, which we can utilize to all sorts of recreation, such as having a walk with our beloved after dinner, arranging a picnic with the kids.

The furthermore and subtle fact is that abundant recreation activities would act out an increasingly important part of people’s life. From the old times to present time, more and more entertainment activities have been invented. According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily, a eminent periodical in the world, Another twenty percent of entertainment type is aching for emerging out to the market at the end of this decade. It is not hard to imagine what a colorful life would be in the near future.

To sum up, taken into account of the convenient facilities and more amusement activities, I am highly supportive of the view that people are inclined to get more leisure time at some future date.

ly8768UID: 2452066

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This is an era charicarized(characterized) by the unparalleled(不平衡的？) explosion of technology. Consequently, technology has prevailed(pervaded) into every corner of people’s life which leads to massive change to it. When it comes to success, there is still no universally agreed-on opinion that if it was easier to make success in the past than people now. A fair portion of people who bemoan the current situation and impute it to technology hold that it is much harder for present people to achieve their goals. However, I, as a commonalty,(as a commonalty, I) strongly contend that people are inclined to get success easier owing to technology. Of numerous reasons, I will present the conspicusous(什么意思) ones to you.

To begin with, nowadays people have impartial opportunity to get high-quality education. No matter who we are, from a wealthy family or just from a rural poor family, we all get the chance to study in university and devote ourselves to the society utilizing our knowledge we learned. It makes every person who work hard and possess great determination could realize his or her dream. For instance, my farther dreamed to attend college and become a lawyer as his carrer, while he couldn’t because even he studied hard, he was not chosen to enroll in the university in cultural revolution when people who belong to some organization have the priority to school. On the contrary, I am fortunate that I live in a period symbolied by peace and harmony, Everybody have chance including me to go to college to chase the dream and get success.

In addition people have convenient access to the information they need nowadays. With the advent of computer, especially internet, provide a vast ocean of knowledge and information in all sorts. Whatever we need, just google it. Based on this facility, we could know whatever we want, try our best without too much barrier to make succeess. There is old saying says that knowledge is limitless, the more you learn, the more you find to be unknown. Exatly,only innocent breeds arrogance, while knowledge lead us to a wonderful world where ample things await you to explore and sufficient chances of success expect you to get.

To sum up, due to fair chance to get high education and convenience facility leading to success. Therefore, I strongly supportive of that present people are prone to getting success.

这个语法和单词的错误，实在是太多了，勉强看完，觉得你观点还不错，但这个语法一定要改

daisy840228UID: 2684617

10.17 To truly understand world event, we should get our news from newspaper; television cannot provide enough information.-媒体

In the rapidly developing society, people get more access to a large amount of information, such as through newspaper, television, internet, radio. Among these means, newspaper and televison are the most pervasive and persvasive means to acquire the knowledge about what is happening now and what just happened. A fair proportion of people who prefer to read newspaper hold that, to truly understand world event, we should get our news from newspaper, for television cannot provide enough information. Hardly can I, as a fans of television, agree with this standpoint. Of the countless reasons, I will give the most conspicuous ones to you.

The first plain truth, I am presenting here, is that watching television to get news is much fun and vivid by the combination of word, video and speaking, serving as a means to help us understand the events. Admittedly, The word in television may be terse, but come to the point. Besides, with the assistance of video, what just happened is showing in front of you, as vivid as what is happening at that moment, resulting in a better－comprehensive understanding and long-lasting memory of the news. For instance, to get the news－be acquainted with what happened in Sichuang earthquake, newspaper may provide the number and the process of events. But we might still confused how it happened, and what extend it reached to. However, when we watched the striking image that building collapsed in front of us, children cryed for mom and dad, then disappeared into the earth. Hardlycould anyone forget the moment, or how far the event went, or what he or she can do. This is the concrete strenth of television.

The furthermore and subtle point is that with the more advanced technology, we can get more information at first hand. Since newspaper should suffer from the long process of making, such as collecting news, printing, publishing and sending out. While broading a news on television only involves in recording and broadcasting to some extent. Correspondingly, not until the newspaper arrive at our region, we may have got the news from the screen of TV. How nice it would be, especially getting news in time, which would definitely provide an avenue to the understanding. According to the recent survey in the China Daily, a prominent peoriodical in the world, more and more people resort to the television to keep in touch with the world latest events owing to its convenience and timely virtue.

Admittedly, newspaper possesses some innate strong points-advantages, such as word detailed description, but it cannot outweigh with the advantage of television. Accordingly, I am strongly supportive of the view that people can get news from television to truly and deeply understand the events.

ly8768UID: 2452066

21# daisy840228

10.17 To truly understand world event, we should get our news from newspaper; television cannot provide enough information.


In the rapidly developing society, people get more access to a large amount of information, such as newspaper, television, internet, radio. Among these, newspaper and televison(television) are the most pervasive and persvasive(persuasive) means to acquire the knowledge about what is happening now and what just happened. A fair proportion of people who prefer to read newspaper hold that, to truly understand world event, we should get our news from newspaper, for television cannot provide enough information. Hardly can I, as a deep fans of television, agree with this standpoint. Of the countless reasons(这句顺序有问题), I will give you(不要用you) the most conspicious ones to you

The first plain truth, I am presenting here, is that watching television to get news is much fun and vivid by the combination of word, video and speaking, serving as a means to help us understand the events. Admittedly, The word in television may be terse, but come to the point. Besides, under the assistance of video, what just happened is showing in front of you, as what is happening at that moment, resulting in a better understanding and longer-lasting memory of the news. For instance, to get the news what happened in Sichuang earthquake, newspaper may provide you the number and the events, we may still confused how it happened, and what extend it reach. However, when we watched the striking image that building collapsed in front of us, children cryed for mom and then disappeared into the earth, could no one forgot the moment,how far the event went, and what he or she can do. This is the concrete strenth of television.

The furthermore and subtle point is that with the more advanced technology, we can get more information at first hand. Since newspaper should suffer from the long process of making, such as collecting news, printing, publishing and sending out. While broading a news on television only involves in recording and broadcasting to some extend. Correspondingly, not until the newspaper arrive at our region, we may have got the news from the screen of TV. How nice it would be, especially getting news in time, which would definitely provide an avenue to the understanding. According the recent survey in the China Daily, an prominent peoriodical in the world, more and more people assort to the television to get in touch with the world latest events owing to its convenience and timely advantage.


Admittedly, newspaper possesses some innate strong points, such as word description, but it cannot outweigh with the advantage of television. Accordingly, I am strongly supportive of the view that people can get news from television to truly and deeply understand the events.

看了几段，发现有不少的问题，现在总结如下：
1 语法和拼写的错误过多，注意修正
2 有些句子似乎不符合老美的习惯。读起来挺费劲的
3 证明结构挺不错，有例子，有细节，要保持

fish1044UID: 2190500

In the rapidly developing society, people get more access to a large amount of information, (这里举例应该是information哦，你说的是媒体)such as newspaper, television, internet, radio. Among these, newspaper and televison are the most pervasive and persvasive(为什么连用？) means to acquire the knowledge about what is happening now and what was just happened. A fair proportion(没见过这种用法，能这么说么？我不确定) of people who prefer to read newspaper hold that, to truly understand world event, we should get our news from newspaper, for television cannot provide enough information. Hardly can I, as a deep（可以形容fans？） fans of television, agree with this standpoint. Of the countless reasons, I will give you the most conspicious（这个单词什么意思？） ones to you.



The first plain truth,that I am presenting here, is that watching television to get news is of much fun and vivid by the combination of word, video and speaking(sound), serving as a means to help us understand the events. Admittedly, The word in television may be terse, but they come to the point. Besides, under(with) the assistance of video, what just happened is showing in front of you, as what is happening at that moment,(不要以为加了逗号就可以随便写句子啊，还是要注意语法的！) resulting in a better understanding and longer-lasting memory of the news. For instance, to get the news of what happened in Sichuang earthquake, newspaper may provide you the number and the events, we may still confused(wondering of) how it happened, and what extend it reach. However, when we watched the striking image that（which shows） building collapsed in front of us, children cryed for mom and then disappeared into the earth, could no one forgot the moment,how far the event went, and what he or she can do. This is the concrete strenth of television.(虽然写作不能太拘泥于形式，但是你也不能这么随便啊！)" C* l) H: F1 O

  G- A2 D$ Q8 rThe furthermore and subtle point(没有这么说的吧) is that with the more advanced technology, we can get more information at first hand. Since newspaper should suffer from the long process of making, such as collecting news, printing, publishing and sending out. While broading a news on television only involves in recording and broadcasting to some extend.（先不说语法问题，你确定制作报纸比制作电视节目复杂？？） Correspondingly, not until the newspaper arrive at our region, we may have got the news from the screen of TV. How nice it would be, especially getting news in time, which would definitely provide an avenue to the understanding(这个是什么意思啊？). According to the recent survey in the China Daily, an prominent peoriodical in the world(这里想说什么啊), more and more people assort to the television to get in touch with the world latest events owing to its convenience and timely advantage.

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    Admittedly, newspaper possesses some innate strong points, such as word description, but it cannot outweigh with the advantage of television. Accordingly, I am strongly supportive of the view that people can get news from television to truly and deeply understand the events.

语法错误太多了，而且你的从句过于自由，英语里面逗号不能代替所有介词的。
好好加油。

daisy840228UID: 2684617

In rapid developing society, with the unparalleled explosion of knowledge, students have plenty of concrete and abstract knowledge to learn, concepts, ideas, facts and so on. In the limited study time, some students who prefer to read stories hold that facts are more important for they reveal something and help us learning. Others contend that we should pay more peed on concepts and ideas. Personally speaking, I side with the latter one. Of countless reasons, I will explore the most conspicuous ones.

The first plain truth is that the ultimate purpose of study is to comprehend the idea and concept from facts, especially the process, that is to say how to get the idea and concept from facts. There is no denying that facts in the world are limitless, so it is no essential for us to remember all the details of so many facts, needless to mention some useless information. This learning project would definitely consume a great deal of out finite time. What is important is the idea and concept based on the facts which our predecessors took great effort and energy to figure out.

More importantly, we should involve in the process. After that, we are truly understand and are able to utilize the knowledge to the real world. For instance, only if students majoring in geography connect the idea “how to distinguish fossil” and the fact “what fossil is”, would they be capable of telling what age the fossil comes from.

On the other hand, facts could serve as means to help us understand the idea and concept. Admittedly, some idea could easily be learned without relying on facts, such as physical lessons. However, some concept is impossible to learn without being acquainted with a series of facts. For example, in history courses, pale and boring are the word that history provides us a mirror to survey ourselves, however, if it is combined with vivid history events that how Li Shiming, an prominent emperor in Chinese history, treated his people learning from his history stories.

As a whole, taking into account of ultimate aim of study and facts’ usage, we can safely draw the conclusion that it is wise for us to lay more attention on idea and concept on the ground that facts are not supposed to be discarded.

melody106UID: 2559573

In rapid developing society, with the unparalleled explosion of knowledge, students have plenty of concrete and abstract knowledge to learn, concepts, ideas, facts and so on. In the limited study time, some students who prefer to read stories hold that facts are more important for they reveal something(useful) and help us learning. Others contend that we should pay more peed错词 on concepts and ideas. Personally speaking, I side with the latter one. Of countless reasons, I will explore the most conspicuous ones.
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语言变化丰富但需加强对于例子的阐述

beangtUID: 2691375

In rapid developing society, with the unparalleled explosion of knowledge, students have plenty of concrete and abstract knowledge to learn, concepts, ideas, facts and so on. In the limited study time, some students who prefer to read stories hold that facts are more important for they reveal something and help us learning. Others contend that we should pay more peed（attention） on concepts and ideas. Personally speaking, I side with the latter one. Of countless reasons, I will explore the most conspicuous ones.
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More importantly, we should involve in the process. After that, we are truly understand and are able to utilize the knowledge to the real world. For instance, only if students majoring in geography connect the idea “how to distinguish fossil” and the fact “what fossil is”, would they be capable of telling what age the fossil comes from.
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On the other hand, facts could serve as means to help us understand the idea and concept. Admittedly, some idea could easily be learned without relying on facts, such as physical lessons. However, some concept is impossible to learn without being acquainted with a series of facts. For example, in history courses, pale and boring are the word that history provides us a mirror to survey ourselves, however, if it is combined with vivid history events that how Li Shiming, an prominent emperor in Chinese history, treated his people learning from his history stories.$ t: ^# d1 ]3 m( o1 l5 o

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语言很棒~值得学习，结构，观点也不错。唯一不足的是第二段缺少实例。

daisy840228UID: 2684617

10.20        People will spend less time in cooking and preparing food in 20 years later. Do you agree or disagree?

I still remember when I was a little girl, my mother always began to cook two hours before dinner. She washed the fresh, vegetable, and cut them into pieces. After that, she ignited the fire with lumber for about five minutes and then cooked. Nowadays we only need to buy the tidy material which has been matched and cleaned from the supermarket, then turn on the button of gas cooker, then done. It may only consume us fifteen to thirty minutes.

What a big gap it is! based on the this trend and confidence of technique, I contend that People will spend less time in cooking and preparing food in 20 years later.  

The first plain truth, I am presenting here is that the technology facilities the cooking much easier than before. In the recent years, technology has pervaded into vast majority of people’s lives. For example, a gas cooker or an electrical cooker liberate us cooking from starting a fire and render us control the temperature at home. In the near future, it is no doubt that new more convenient machine would be devised that make us cooking quicker and quicker. Literally, In some modern families, they have begun to use robot to cook for them, which utterly free them of cooking.

A furthermore and subtle point is that the style of life would convert people to deem preparing and cooking food as time killing. There are so many wonderful things to do and concern that employees would pay less attention in preparing food in daily life. On the other hand, workers in food industry will see this commercial potential. Accordingly, the market would abound with clean and cut dish in all sorts, which rest on only supermarket nowadays. It will definitely save the time of preparing food.

As a whole, taking into account of more convenient technology in cooking and food markets changing, I can safely arrive at the conclusion that people will spend less time in cooking and preparing food.

spyUID: 2295035

I still remember when I was a little girl, my mother always began to cook two hours before dinner. She washed the fresh, vegetable, and cut them into pieces. After that, she ignited the fire with lumber for about five minutes and then cooked. Nowadays we only need to buy the tidy material which has been matched and cleaned from the supermarket, then turn on the button of gas cooker, then done. It may only consume us fifteen to thirty minutes.

What a big gap it is! based on the this trend and confidence of technique, I contend that People will spend less time in cooking and preparing food in 20 years later.

The first plain truth,（，不要） I am presenting here is that the technology facilities the cooking much easier than before.(有语法问题) In the recent years, technology has pervaded into vast majority of people’s lives. For example, a gas cooker or an electrical cooker liberate us cooking from starting a fire and render us control the temperature at home. In the near future, it is no doubt that new more convenient machine would be devised that make us cooking quicker and quicker. （这句比较没有说服力，现在的科技进步不意味未来也会有）Literally, In some modern families, they have begun to use robot to cook for them,（robot太超前了吧） which utterly free them of cooking."

A furthermore and subtle point is that the style of life would convert people to deem preparing and cooking food as time killing. There are so many wonderful things to do and concern that employees would pay less attention in preparing food in daily life. On the other hand, workers in food industry will see this commercial potential. Accordingly, the market would abound with clean and cut dish in all sorts, which rest on only supermarket nowadays. It will definitely save the time of preparing food.（市场上有净菜不能说明比现在时间花的少，毕竟现在就有了）

As a whole, taking into account of more convenient technology in cooking and food markets changing, I can safely arrive at the conclusion that people will spend less time in cooking and preparing food.

论据比较新颖，逻辑扣得再紧点，语法问题少点就很好了，加油！

HYPS2011UID: 2618437

I still remember when I was a little girl, my mother always began to cook two hours before dinner. She washed the fresh, vegetable, and cut them into pieces. After that, she ignited the fire with lumber for about five minutes and then cooked(这个表达 可以吗？). Nowadays we only need to buy the tidy material which has been matched and cleaned from（in） the supermarket, then turn on the button of gas cooker, then done. It may only consume us fifteen to thirty minutes.

What a big gap it is! based on the this trend and confidence of technique, I contend that People will spend less time in cooking and preparing food in 20 years later(你是这样理解的？我是以为 人们会越来越少做饭).

The first plain truth, I am presenting here is that the technology facilities the cooking much easier than before. In the删去 recent years, technology has pervaded into vast majority of people’s lives. For example, a gas cooker or an electrical cooker liberate us cooking from starting a fire and render us control the temperature at home. In the near future, it is no doubt that new more convenient machines would be devised that make us cooking quicker and quicker. Literally, In some modern families, they have begun to use robot to cook for them, which utterly free them of cooking.

A furthermore and subtle point is that the style of life would convert people to deem preparing and cooking food as time killing. There are so many wonderful things to do and concern that employees would pay less attention in preparing food in daily life. On the other hand, workers in food industry will see 换个词 this commercial potential. Accordingly, the market would abound with clean and cut dish in all sorts 很好, which rest on only supermarket nowadays. It will definitely save the time of preparing food

有些表达可以google下，另外论证可以再有力点。

daisy840228UID: 2684617

10.21        有很多钱不工作的人都不快乐，你支持否

It is generally considered that people who don’t work cannot be happy, although they own a large amount of money. From my perspective, I am one of those who bolster this standpoint. Of countless reasons, I will explore the most conspicuous ones.

The first plain truth, I am presenting here, is that work is the core of life. It’s a common sense that the essence of life is involvement. Only being involved in something meaningful can people perceive a sense of satisfaction and of happiness. When we are surrounded with work, we feel the zeal to be involved in. Otherwise, we would feel nothing but bored. For instance, once I was so indulged in work that I was deeply eager for a restful break. While a long break finally comes, I felt so bored, for there was nothing for me to do. At that moment I began to miss the feeling that getting something at hand. It is the involvement that makes me feel happy in my life.

The furthermore and subtle point is that man who possess a large amount of money would be obsessed with exorbitant entertainment and extremely luxurious life, which is eventually meaningless and boring after certain time. It is true that when the life is only fun, fun would not be fun anymore. The deeper wealthy people are addicted to the recreation, the unhappier they would feel. According to the recent survey conducted by China Daily, a prominent periodical in the world, more or less seventeen percent of idling rich people feel empty in their life, and fifteen percent of them commit suicide for they found the life is extraordinarily insignificant.

As a whole, taking into account of essence of work and meaningless long-term recreation, I can safely arrive at a conclusion that however rich we are, we can not be delightful without indulging in work.