进军美利坚作文组－10。7号

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10.21        有很多钱不工作的人都不快乐，你支持否)
It is generally considered that people who don’t work cannot be happy, although they own a large amount of money. From my perspective, I am one of those who bolster this standpoint. Of countless reasons, I will explore the most conspicuous ones.
喜欢简洁明了的开头。
The first plain truth, I am presenting here, is that work is the core of life. It’s a common sense that the essence of life is involvement. Only being involved in something meaningful can people perceive a sense of satisfaction and of happiness. When we are surrounded with work, we feel the zeal to be involved in. Otherwise, we would feel nothing but bored. For instance, once I was so indulged in work that I was deeply eager for a restful break. While a long break finally comes>came, I felt so bored, for there was nothing for me to do. At that moment I began to miss the feeling that>去掉 getting something at hand. It is the involvement that makes me feel happy in my life.
这一段说工作是快乐之源，不管有没有钱，不工作就不会快乐。赞。
The furthermore and subtle point is that man who possess a large amount of money would be obsessed with exorbitant entertainment and extremely luxurious life, which is eventually meaningless and boring after certain time. It is true that when the life is only fun> there is only fun in life, fun would not be fun anymore. The deeper wealthy people are addicted to the recreation, the unhappier they would feel.>这句还是不能很好的被支持，后面解释了有钱人会觉得空虚，但是越有钱越空虚还待说明 According to the recent survey conducted by China Daily, a prominent periodical in the world, more or less seventeen percent of idling rich people feel empty in their life, and fifteen percent of them commit suicide for they found the life is extraordinarily insignificant.
这一段说有钱就会用大量娱乐，然后无聊致死。好。
As a whole, taking into account of essence of work and meaningless long-term recreation, I can safely arrive at a conclusion that however rich we are, we can not be delightful without indulging in work.

写得很好。

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It is generally considered that people who don’t work cannot be happy, although they own a large amount of money. From my perspective, I am one of those who bolster this standpoint. Of countless reasons, I will explore the most conspicuous ones.（开头确实不错，值得学习）



The first plain truth, I am presenting here, is that work is the core of life. It’s a common sense that the essence of life is involvement. Only being involved in something meaningful can people perceive a sense of satisfaction and of happiness. When we are surrounded with(by) work, we feel the zeal to be involved in. Otherwise, we would feel nothing but bored. For instance, once I was so indulged in work that I was deeply eager for a restful break. While a long break finally comes, I felt so bored, for there was nothing for me to do. At that moment I began to miss the feeling that getting something at hand. It is the involvement that makes me feel happy in my life.（这段论述也很不错啊） 2 J3 d4 r# N- a5 C* n+ A


The furthermore and subtle point is that man who possess a large amount of money would be obsessed with exorbitant entertainment and extremely luxurious life, which is eventually meaningless and boring after certain time. It is true that when the life is only fun, fun would not be fun anymore. The deeper wealthy people are addicted to the recreation, the unhappier they would feel. According to the recent survey conducted by China Daily, a prominent periodical in the world, more or less seventeen percent of idling rich people feel empty in their life, and fifteen percent of them commit suicide for they found the life is extraordinarily insignificant.（太牛了，连数据都找出来了）
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As a whole, taking into account of essence of work and meaningless long-term recreation, I can safely arrive at a conclusion that however rich we are, we can not be delightful without indulging in work.

这篇文章肯定有范文水平了，要向你学习！

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居然忘记贴了
10.23 大学应不应该要求所有的学生都学习除了本国文化以外的文化？

As the advent of technology explosion, airplane, train, high-speed ship all make the world as small as a village. Consequently, more and more international culture is prevalent in college. Some people who believe they do not need the foreign knowledge contend that college should exert all culture to all the students. Others hold the opposite opinion that every student in college should learn foreign culture as well as national culture, considering that learning culture outside would benefit all the students. Personally speaking, I side with the latter one. Of countless reasons, I will explore the most conspicuous ones here.
The first plain truth, I am presenting here, is that learning varieties of culture would broaden one’s horizons and make a solid foundation for their communication and interpersonal skill. Since each culture has its merits, and take crucial role in some particular group of people’s development. Only by being aware of these cultures can people treat foreigners in appropriate ways. Suppose you want to invite a renowned foreign professor to present your school an excellent speech, if you do not know the etiquette of how to show respect in the professor’s country. , Yyou may not complete the task. As the chance is ample that we need to communicate with foreign people, we should be acquainted with their culture.
The furthermore and subtle point is that since knowledge is beyond country, students should acquire worldwide culture to be excel at academic career or become competent to the fancy job. Nowadays, almost each subject was developed from different from countries. The student has to know more culture about this country to assist the understanding in thesis. For instance, if a student wants to check about an English paper, there is no denying that he or she get has to learn English before. Besides, Employees would like to choose applicants who know more about one countries’s culture, for the person they are dealing with is not only from our country.
As a whole, taking into account of interpersonal and communication skill as well as being competent in the academic careery and jobs, It is conceivable that learning multiple culture is of great importance on each student’s development.

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10.24 when relaxing, some people like to spend time alone. What's your opinion?* D2 O' u2 v* g+ O) y
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Some people prefer to spend time alone when relaxing, considering that it frees them from consuming energy in communication and coordination on schedule. Others like to spend time with friends and families, for it could relieve the loneliness and increase more fun to their lives. Personally speaking, I,as one of those who would rather being killed than being alone, side with the latter one. My subtle reasons are as follows.


having entertainments, reading and doing sports are three of the main activities when I have time to kill. As to the entertainment, playing with friends is my inclination, for I feel more fun by sharing with them. For instance, I invariably go to ballroom dancing party, not only because I relish dancing with a jam of peple, but also for there are many friends who I can talk with,discuss with, and laugh with. That is the happiest time in my life. Besides, just imagine how beatuful a picture it is, when you enjoy a shiny sunrise with your beloved ones in a smooth beach. It is much better than enjoying alone. because happiness is added owing to sharing with friends or families.

Furthermore, to reading, keeping company is my preferance. Decorating a decent room, preparing some coffee and dessert, some good books, we can sit or lie on a comfatable sofa at home and throw ourselves in the fascinating stories. At breaks, we can walk around and share the opinions about the readings or the enjoyable scenes outside. Is it not inviting?

Last but not least, to sports, fight with my friends is the need. Since doing sports is long-lasting and require sequence, not until under the supervision coul I could persist on. Friends exert great motivation on my enduring sports. To my astonishment, Last year I even complete the three thousand meters’ Malathon under my friends’ encouragement. Not for their company hardly could I insist on doing exercise every day for these few years.

Admittedly staying alone does have some merits, such as air of freedome, of secret. However, I am one of those who just are dreadful to loneliness and are eager to have friends around. Thus, there is no doubt that people like me would definetely choose to have friends to spend the relax time.

daisy840228UID: 2684617

10.24 when relaxing, some people like to spend time alone. What's your opinion?* D2 O'  

Some people prefer to spend time alone when relaxing, considering that it frees them from consuming energy in communication and coordination on schedule. Others like to spend time with friends and families, for it could relieve the loneliness and increase more fun to their lives. Personally speaking, I,as one of those who would rather being killed than being alone, side with the latter one. My subtle reasons are as follows.

having entertainments, reading and doing sports are three of the main activities when I have time to kill. As to the entertainment, playing with friends is my inclination, for I feel more fun by sharing with them. For instance, I invariably go to ballroom dancing party, not only because I relish dancing with a jam of peple, but also for there are many friends who I can talk with,discuss with, and laugh with. That is the happiest time in my life. Besides, just imagine how beatuful a picture it is, when you enjoy a shiny sunrise with your beloved ones in a smooth beach. It is much better than enjoying alone. because happiness is added owing to sharing with friends or families.

Furthermore, to reading, keeping company is my preferance. Decorating a decent room, preparing some coffee and dessert, some good books, we can sit or lie on a comfatable sofa at home and throw ourselves in the fascinating stories. At breaks, we can walk around and share the opinions about the readings or the enjoyable scenes outside. Is it not inviting?

Last but not least, to sports, fight with my friends is the need. Since doing sports is long-lasting and require sequence, not until under the supervision coul I could persist on. Friends exert great motivation on my enduring sports. To my astonishment, Last year I even complete the three thousand meters’ Malathon under my friends’ encouragement. Not for their company hardly could I insist on doing exercise every day for these few years.

Admittedly staying alone does have some merits, such as air of freedome, of secret. However, I am one of those who just are dreadful to loneliness and are eager to have friends around. Thus, there is no doubt that people like me would definetely choose to have friends to spend the relax time.

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先占个座，，明天来学习下

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为什么不是今天的作文哇

daisy840228UID: 2684617

Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer
It's generallly considered that teachers should assign homework to students everyday to oversee if students understand and could utilize the knowlege they just learn. I am one of those who bolster this idea, since I benefited a lot from this requirement, which even form one of the best habits of me.

The first plain truth I am presenting here is that students are supposed to review the knowledge what they learn to avoid forgetting.  Nowadays, far more knowledge indulge in students' study. If they do not look over it as soon as possible, most of knowledge they just learn would drift away quickly. According to the efficiency curve which was conducted by a prominent psychologist, the longer you do not review the knowlege you just learned, the less you could remember. Thus, it is undeniably a great way to review that day when students learn new things. Then the question is how the teacher know if students have done the revision. Undoubtedly, homework is able to surve as a great means to tell if students have review the knowledge.

Furthermore, it's a good way to test if students understand the knowledge. Admittedly, it is pretty possible that even students learn and review, they may still can not use it. The reason is that they may not actually understand certain theory which they think they do. Thereby, homework enable students to ensure themselves efficiently.

Last but not least, homework can make teacher be acquainted with students habits or other information. For example, a student always does not do his homework, it maybe a sign to the teacher that the student may be too naughty to have a good habit, or has something problem in the study, or even his home surroundings. Then the teacher could take distinct measure to the students. For example, some students do not do homework due to being lack of self-discipline, teachers should constrain them in some ways. Therefore, homework is of  of great importancea in good habit formation and mental health in studying of students.



To sum up,  homework can serve as a means of reviewing knowlege, testing understanding, good habits formation and furthermore mental condition. Thus, teachers assigning homework everyday does great good to all students.

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In university students should take the history courses no matter what field they study. -24号

It is generally considered that students should learn history courses even though globalization and international culture has pervaded into every corner of our life, for history could enable us from the past to avoid making mistakes, and motivate us from the experience of our wise predecessors. I am and will always be one of those who bolster this idea, since I benefit a lot from studying history when I was in college.

The first plain truth I am presenting here is that it is of great benefit to learn from the history,  especially from some eminent persons' experience.  For instance, history is filled with examples that due to bloody wars, husbands, sons or fathers of  both countries dead and never came back, which tell us that appereciate the peace time and take any measure to protect and maintain harmony among countries. Besides,  history is abundant with biographies or stories of some prominent heroes in all sorts of fields, people of any field or dreaming to be some person could find out their own icons and learn from them. For instance, Archimedes, as a renowned scientist and philosopher, has not only invented numerous things, but also build up ample principles. More importantly, he was not in a bit of afraid of being killed when Roman soldiers encroached on his house. The ability of learning covering all areas and dedication to science, is what we lack today and what we should learn most.

Furthermore,by learning from history can we understand the current situation in our country. Extremely long though the history of our country is, it is still a developing country. Why? It is something about history. Only by being acquainted with this can we understand the reason of the situation now and furthermore grasp the knowledge that open and modest spirit can promote the economic developemnt of a countries. Some people may also concern about the realationship between our country and India or other countries, which may have great impact on these persons' business expansion when they set up their own business. Having access to history is the premier way to solve this problem.

To sum up, based on the discussions above, I can safely come to the conclusion that students should take history classes in university, for it is of great importance on students' character development and a means to utterly touch with the world outside the ivory tower combined with historic issue.

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[It is generally considered that students should learn history courses even though globalization and international culture has pervaded into every corner of our life, for history could enable us from the past to avoid making mistakes, and motivate us from the experience of our wise predecessors. I am and will always be one of those who bolster this idea, since I benefit（时态是不是错了？ 后面是was）K a lot from studying history when I was in college.

The first plain truth I am presenting here is that it is of great benefit to learn from the history,  especially from some eminent persons' experiences.  For instance, history is filled with examples that due to bloody wars, husbands, sons or fathers (没看懂这三个 单词的含义？)of  both countries dead and never came back, which tell us that appereciate the peace time and take any measure to protect and maintain harmony among countries. Besides,  history is abundant with biographies or stories of some prominent heroes in all sorts of fields很好, people of any field or someone dreaming to be some person could find out their own icons and learn from them. For instance, Archimedes, as a renowned scientist and philosopher, has not only invented numerous things, but also build(built) up ample principles. More importantly, he was not in a
bit of afraid of being killed when Roman soldiers encroached on his house. (这句话是用来 做什么呢？)The ability of learning covering all areas and（the ability of dedication to science?） dedication to science, is(are) what we lack today and what we should learn most

Furthermore,by learning from history can we 不用倒装understand the current situation in our country. Extremely long though the history of our country is, it is still a developing country. Why? It is something about history. Only by being acquainted with this can we understand the reasons of the situation now and furthermore grasp the knowledge that open and modest spirit can promote the economic developemnt of a countries. Some people may also concern about the realationships between our country and India or other countries, which may have great impact on these persons' business expansion when they set up their own business. Having access to history is the premier way to solve this problem.

有些句子 比较生硬，有些意思不是很明白楼住想表达的。Archimedes 例子很好，如果再展开一点的话就 更好了。小错误 比如单复数一定要避免哈。加油

daisy840228UID: 2684617

This is an era charcterized by the unparalleled explosion of technology. It has pervaded into every corner of people's life. When it comes to books, there is general considered that students will not use printed books any more in the next twenty years. I am one of those who bolster this idea. Of countless reasons, I will explore the most conspicuous ones to you.

The first plain truth I am presenting here is that electrical books is much convenient than printed books in nearly every aspect. We have more accesses to the E-books, such as computer, mobile phone. For instance, we can save E-books in the mobile phone and take it all around, reading it in all places you can imagine, such as a bus,at the summit of a mountain, at home, at school.Accordingly students are able to study at versatile places. Besides it is economical, all we need is to link to the internet, then download all the information we want. I still remember I was eager for one series of econmic books which is extrordinarily popular in the society last few days. There is no doubt that they cost a large amount of money which is out of my budget. Fortunately, I found them in the internet. So exited I was that I obtained them all in less than five minutes without any spending.  

Furthermore, using E-books exerts great importance on enviroment protection. It is universal sense that the printed books havehave imposed considerable threat to environment. Too many trees are contribute to books making for students worldwide,  consequently human being suffer large loss of forest, resulting in various sorts of environment degradation and environment pollution, such as water loss and soil erosion, air pollution. Thus, using E-books is one of the efficient measures human should take to the urgent protection of environment.
To our delight, there appears common phenomenon that many students has transferred to study relying on resources on a computer to fit tests need. For example, when TOEFL began to base on computer and internet, more and more students have started to study and do exercises on the computer in order to get used to the new pattern of test.And also, students are fond of the easy access to so much information and resources related to TOEFL in the internet.

As a whole, taking into account of convenience, promising environment cost and new style of test, it is conceivable that students will not use printed books anymore after twenty years.

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In university students should take the history courses no matter what field they study. -24号0 [" l' b7 I( e

It is generally considered that students should learn history courses even though globalization and international culture has pervaded into 喜欢这个短语哇every corner of our life, for history could enable us from the past这个用的有点怪啊。 to avoid making mistakes, and motivate这个用的不是很恰当。你想表达用先人的智慧和经历来激励我们吗？直接用encourage还好些。而且不要用from。用by好些us from the experience of our wise predecessors.第一句也太长了吧。能断开尽量断开把，这样改卷老师也会受不了的。O(∩_∩)O~ I am and will always be one of those who bolster this idea, since I benefit a lot from studying history when I was in college.



The first plain truth I am presenting here is that it is of great benefit to learn （from the不要了这俩词了，就of a great benefit from learning history) history,  especially from some eminent persons' experience.  For instance, history is filled with examples that due to bloody wars, husbands, sons or fathers of  both countries dead and never came back, which tell us that appereciate the peace time and take any measure to protect and maintain harmony among countries. 这例子好哇~真细节！建议可以再细节点。落实到一个具体的事例上。Besides,  history is abundant with biographies or stories of some prominent heroes in all sorts of fields, people of any field or dreaming to be some person could find out their own icons and learn from them. For instance, Archimedes, as a renowned scientist and philosopher, has not only invented numerous things, but also build up ample principles. More importantly, he was not in a bit of afraid of being killed when Roman soldiers encroached on his house. The ability of learning covering all areas and dedication to science, is what we lack today and可以用but what we should learn most.

Furthermore,by learning from history can we understand the current situation in our country. 前面这里差个Even though吧Extremely long though the history of our country is, it is still a developing country. Why? It is something about history. Only by being acquainted with this can we understand the reason of the situation now and furthermore grasp the knowledge 这个用的和从句写的不太对that open and modest spirit can promote the economic developemnt of a countries. Some people may also concern about the realationship between our country and India or other countries, which may have great impact on these persons' business expansion when they set up their own business. Having access to history is the premier way to solve this problem.我觉得这段写的有点散了，观点和方面太多了，而至于中印关系那一个地方够细节。其他的都很泛泛，建议抓住一个方面细节了就可以了

To sum up, based on the discussions above, I can safely come to the conclusion that students should take history classes in university, for it is of great importance on students' character development and a means to utterly touch with the world outside the ivory tower combined with historic issue.

觉得用了很多好的词和搭配，改的时候自己也记了不少O(∩_∩)O~
有一个问题，就是自己写的时候也这么觉得，总是感觉论证不够充分，没有写出那个无论什么专业都需要上历史课的必要性出来，给的理由都只是可有可无的好处，没有到必要性的层面上去~O(∩_∩)O~

daisy840228UID: 2684617

恩，我觉得我没有写出学生要学，只是写了历史的重要性

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10.28 The only effective way to encourage energy conservation is by increasing prices of gasoline and electricity. Do you agree or disagree?

To effectively encourage energy conservation is the premier event in high energy-consumption society. Some people claims that increasing prices of gasoline and electricity is the only way to achieve the subject, for this could lead to the considerable declining population using gasoline and electricity. However I am one of those who cast doubt on this standpoint, as I believe it is too superficial and cannot tackle the problem in the long run.

To begin with, if government virtually increases price of gasoline and electricity, many poor people or people who are not rich enough would suffer a lot. No one can deny that electricity and gasoline is pretty essential in people's daily life as well as work life, especially in the era whichen  ingulged in machines depending on electricity and gasoline are pervaded into every corner of people’s. For example, every person need to use electricity to watch TV, work,read. On the other hand, since the city's expansion, every person has to go to work or to school by bus or car to some extent, which rely primarily on gasoline. It therefore cannot be an exaggeration that no one can live freely and cozily without electricity  and gasoline.  If the government increases the price of gasoline and electricity, undoubtedly, many persons cannot afford this daily need. while some rich persare not influenced at all and lead an exorbitant life. The economic gap is consequently enlarged. Then a fair proportion of unrich peple will feel unfair and complain. When complain accumulats into angry, which would definitely compromise the stability of the society. Therefore, it is not wise to take this extreme measure to avoid energy consumption.

Furthermore,  there are many different ways the government should encourage to maintain the total amount of energy.  For example,  as the skyrocketing improvement of technology, artificial energy could exert a significant role in the energy storage. At the same time, government should take more efforts to tap and harness the new renewable energy, such as tidal energy, solar energy, wind power, to provide more and more power to human at best without underlining the offspring’s benefit. What is more, technology it is also urgent to  concerntrate on how to utilize energy most effectively by technology, such as diminish the exhaust gas from the automobiles to a relatively low level.

To sum up,  since there are many means goverment could adopt to encourage energy conservation, I  contend that it is definitely not a good idea to increase price of gasoline and electricity, which may cause unstability of society and make vast majority of people in miserable. And I believe under governments grim managementon tapping new energy and limiting energy consumption standard onby machine technology can the society use energy more resonably and conserve energe more effectively.

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10.29 Modern society has become more complex, so it is essential for the young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

As the society has become more complex, more and more people contend that young people should culture the ability to plan and organize, for this ability ensures young people to obtain final success and lead a better life. I am one of those who bolster this standpoint. Of countless reasons, I would explore the most conspicuous ones.

The first plain truth I am presenting here is that the ability to plan and organize in different phase of life is indispensable in order to keep pace with this skyrocketing development of the society. Nowadays the work pressure has become larger and larger, more and more people suffer it. According to the statistical conducted by the health centre, increasing number of people are suffering fatigue, stress and depression. The ability to plan and organize would help you tackle it and survive in the complex society. For example, hunting job has no longer been an easy process. One should have a good plan in advance and organize it phase to phase before the hunting. At the threshold, we accumulate enough knowledge according to our plan. We may begin from the basic knowledge in elementary school as well as in middle school to the specific knowledge in college. If the plan or goal allows, we may still do some internship to enhance our ability. Before landing job, we still need to set up a particular process, preparing the related information to perfectly show our ability to the employers. This far-sighted plan and organizing actions in every phase of life would definitely render us win the employers’ attention and finally outwit the competitors and get the job. In return, employees who are up on planning and organizing objectives would undoubtedly bring a great treasure to the company and be successful in the future.  

Furthermore, possessing this ability would render you to say goodbye to crisis and go through many hard times. Take me as an instance, in the last few weeks of a quarter, my professor gave me a urgent project just a few days before the deadline. It can not be worse that I had three exams to prepare, and an essay to write during that period. Fortunately due to the good habit that I started to prepare the exam earlier, I don’t need to be in pain for nothing has been done. Instead, I took this work for several steps. First, I wrote down a list about what I need to do and how I could take advantage of the time and energy to effectively deal with it. Second, I organized the sequence according to the priorities of this work and tick off when I completed the job. Third, I made sure that I just focused on one thing during the short time. Fortunately I completed all the work before each deadline, and obtained a good reputation from my professor.

What’s more, plan and organize would overcome some bad habits and ensure you concentrating one thing. For instance, a teenage has to a research on a computer. But when he begins to sit in front of the computer, he meets with so many fantastic things on internet, such as the news about the wound football star, the newest games which just begin to be on internet, the latest movies which his favorable actor is in. He maybe so excited that he cannot finish his job on time. However if he does have a plan, and put them in order tightly. Then what he need do is just to timely take the steps in his list. This would absolutely decline the distraction effectively.

To sum up, taking into account of ensuring success,  and overcoming bad habits, I utterly agree that it is essential for young people to learn the ability to plan and organize. Only by possessing this ability will success never be regarded as a luxurious fruit.