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\2 T5 Y7 a% `It is generallyconsidered that people will more happier if they get the success during(during这个词不合适吧)the difficult tasks and challenges than finish an easy job in themodern time, for(此处显得有些混乱了，这也句子也忒长了) workers and students will have the feeling of successwhen they have the accomplish and overcome various problems no matterwho, when and where（no matterwho, when and where是用来形容problem的么？）. I am one of the people who champion this opinion,since I have the feeling of accomplishment and success and which ispretty beneficial for me to increase my confidence during working andstudying.

The main reason involves the consideration that finishing a challengeand difficulty is pretty time-consuming（time-sonsuming是表达什么意思呢？好像跟happier不相关吧） for students during doing theexercise, especially exercise of science courses. To illustrate it,Wang Xiaoming, a friend of mine, is studying at the University Of HongKong, who tells me that he is happier when he finishes a difficultchallenge than finish an easy job, such applying for internishipprograms as participate the Math model contest in 2008, as well astaking office in students’ Union of the University Of Hong kong, sincehe can get the good results after taking effort and find their meritsand potential, which is vital for him to enhance his horizon andperspectives to some degrees.（建议你断一下句吧，你这一句里面太复杂了，一层套一层的~~，嘿嘿） After hearing his words, I cannot helpsurprising the influence and necessity of finishing the challenges andgetting happy feeling during studying. Therefore, we can understand thevoice and expression of the studeng concerning getting the feeling ofhappiness after finishing the challenge by seeing from example Imentioned above.（我觉得你并没有分析原因而是简单的举例，应该往深层次发展一下）
Secondly,such manifold careers as research of high-technological founder,president of countries as well as engineer is pretty significant andessential in the twenty-first century, on account that they will devotetheir energy and enthusiasm to socities’ development of our country,which will make them more happier than others who finish an easy job inreality. According to the recent survey conducted by China Daily, aprominent periodical in the world, almost eighty percent of scientistsand leaders are happier when they have accomplishment than finish aneasy task. Cuihua（我一眼看还以为是我们的翠花大姐呢，嘿嘿）, a successful leader of a city in China, tells usthat he ususally spends at least four or five hours in reading variuosdocuments and dealing with kinds of social issue and problems relatedwith the ordinary living of local people, and he needs to have thefeeling of happiness when he finishes a challenge, otherwise, he willbe freak because of boring work everyday.（这段的观点跟上一段很相像，有点显得重复）

Myview is that people are happier when they finish a challenging taskthan finish an easy job during working or studying at present, only inthis way can people will successfully survive in the society byfulfilling their self-value.

不好意思，我觉得你这篇文章并没有真正的回答题目，而是举了两个例子，我觉得是应该先说明原因，然后用例子例证你解释的原因，文章是需要有层次的。说的不好，请包含。