10.21作业（进军美利坚）

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In the recent years, there is a generalcontroversy over the issue that whether people who do not work because theyhave enough are rarely happy. Although someone may claim that only when peoplecould make their own money, can they feel happy, personally I prefer to thinkthat those rich people, even if they do not have their jobs will be very happyand I will provide concrete evidences to demonstrate my point of view.

First and foremost, wealthy people havemore opportunities to enjoy life with their families, which bring them morepleasure ultimately. For instance, they can travel to so many interestingplaces world wide without the consideration of money, they can listen to aconcert whenever they would like to, they can buy whatever objects they love toenjoy themselves, they can have their favorite food at any time. Besides, withthe money, they could not only gain personal satisfaction, but also pleasetheir families. For example, they can spend a large amount of money to buygifts for their lover's on birthday party, or they can give their children themost popular toys. However, as an ordinary person, we can never imagine to livesuch a life.

In the second place, rich people could alsouse their money to help those poor, at the same time, they themselves willobtain cheerfulness from their charitable behaviors. For instance, they candenote some money to the hospital, which is used to save the lives of those povertypatients, they can also offer financial support to children who need school education,or orphans who lost their parents. In fact, today some millionaires evenestablish their own charitable funding, in order to sponsor those who ask forimmediate help. In this way, they take the responsibility to fulfill some socialduties, and acquire recognition from public, which further increases theirhappiness as a result.

Last but not least, since they do not haveto work, it is possible for them to avoid many troubles from the workplace. Onthe one hand, working persons are suffering from a variety of stress, whichlead to certain pressure-related diseases, seriously threatening their health.On the other hand, workers have to spend time and energy to build goodrelationships with both their bosses and colleagues, which also bring them alot of headaches. Then, getting rid of work will also prevent them from all ofthese difficulties.

To sum up, taking into account of thediscussion mentioned above, we may safely reach the conclusion that money butno work will make people happy.

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In the recent years, there is a generalcontroversy over the issue that whether people who do not work because theyhave enough are rarely happy.（这句有语法问题，内容表达不清） Although someone may claim that only when peoplecould make their own money, can they feel happy, personally I prefer to thinkthat those rich people, even if they do not have their jobs will（用can比will好） be very happyand I will provide concrete evidences to demonstrate my point of view.

First and foremost, wealthy people havemore opportunities to enjoy life with their families, which bring them morepleasure ultimately. For instance, they can travel to so many interestingplaces world wide without the consideration of money, they can listen to aconcert whenever they would like to, they can buy whatever objects they love toenjoy themselves, they can have their favorite food at any time. Besides, withthe money, they could not only gain personal satisfaction, but also pleasetheir families. For example, they can spend a large amount of money to buygifts for their lover's on birthday party, or they can give their children themost popular toys. However, as an ordinary person, we can never imagine to livesuch a life.

In the second place, rich people could alsouse（这个看不懂了） their money to help those poor, at the same time, they themselves willobtain cheerfulness from their charitable behaviors. For instance, they candenote some money to the hospital, which is used（用is used 不好） to save the lives of those povertypatients, they can also offer financial support to children who need school education,or orphans who lost their parents. In fact, today some millionaires evenestablish their own charitable funding, in order to sponsor those who ask forimmediate help. In this way, they take the responsibility to fulfill some socialduties, and acquire recognition from public, which further increases theirhappiness as a result.

Last but not least, since they do not haveto work, it is possible for them to avoid many troubles from the workplace. Onthe one hand, working persons are suffering from a variety of stress, whichlead to certain pressure-related diseases, seriously threatening their health.On the other hand, workers have to spend time and energy to build goodrelationships with both their bosses and colleagues, which also bring them alot of headaches. Then, getting rid of work will also prevent them from all ofthese difficulties.

To sum up, taking into account of thediscussion mentioned above, we may safely reach the conclusion that money butno work will make people happy.

观点很新颖，例子举的不错，就是语法错误有点多，有多个地方两个单词连在一起，不知道什么原因，加油！