2009 进军美利坚作文组 leon

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We cannot emphasize the importance of college and university education in the role of our society anymore. The majority of people are eager to accept high-level education in order to get a good job or achieve their life goals finally. Contrary to the idea of most people is my strongly disagreement with the opinion that everyone have the opportunities to get college or university education.

It is true that a whole society college or university education will benefit the society a lot in various aspects. If we could make this goal into real, everyone will be well-disciplined, there will be no one to violate rules and laws, and people will live peacefully and happily. In addition, it seems that we are entitled with the equal chance to get college or university education since we all pay tax to government who will take use all of this money- national finance, to develop education of colleges and universities.

However, it does not anyway mean, in my opinion, that (that删除)everyone should be allowed to accept（receive更好点吧） college or university education when the following respects are taken into consideration. First, not all students have a genuine interest of studying or doing research. If we just allow all students to flood with our campus, you could image what a bad situation it might be.  There are students sleeping in the class, fighting on the playground, or arguing in the library, which a good student will be shameful of. These will really destroy（spoil） good study or academic atmosphere in universities.

On the other hand, there is a limitation of teaching facilities or staffs in university. If we put all students, no matter of their academic performance, into the campus, many people will can （can删除）not enjoy their opportunities to communicate with their teachers which will improve their understanding of class knowledge greatly. Also, they may be excluded of the lab equipments which are limited as result of too many students. All of which mentioned above will indisputably affect the qualities of our education in university. However, if we just focus our money and energy on the excellent students, the situation will be reserved.

To sum up, considering the reasons discussed above, I want to make the conclusion that only excellent students should have chance to get college or university education. And only in this way will students value their chance more and become useful ones in future.

作者的立意很清楚。但是有较多的语言方面的错误，然后论证方面还是有些过于主观和绝对。

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11.2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

It is our parents who teach us to speak and walk; it is also our parents who help us plan our career far ahead of our employment.  Contrary to the idea of people is my strongly disagreement with the opinion that parents are our best teachers.

Admittedly, time that parents spend with us is longer than any person. Untile we attend college or university, we start be independent. In addition, no one loves us more than our parents. They indisputably give us more attention than others. However, it does not, in any way, mean that parents are the best teacher. There are several reasons as followings.

Parents are not less professional than teachers who are formally trained. Longer although the time our parents spend with us is, they do not educate us with correct methods. For example, parents have bad habits, like smoking and grambling. Children are easily affected by their parents and form these bad habits. However, teachers' bad habits will be forbident in classroom.

Parents who are dominated with their jobs have no time to  teach their students. Undoubtedly, parents love their children greatly, But most of time, they just do not know how to love them. Students are spoilt by their family members. Therefore, they are considered as a princess or king in their family. Teachers in school will treat their students strictly in order to educate their well. For example, teachers will acquire their students to hand in assignments on time and make them form a good habit of not being delaying today's work until tomorow. While, parents will hold that their children are so tired and could accomplish their work tomorrow which leads to the harzoud habits.

To sum up, considering of the discuss above, I want to make the conclusion that parents are not the best teachers. Only the teacher accepting formal education and training  can be the best teachers and their role in society is irreplaceable.