11-28独立写作

溜冰小新UID: 2397498

Some people like to stay in one place all their life, for they can enjoy the accompany of their relatives and the familiar place can make them feel cosy and comfortable. There’s nothing to blame because everyone has his or her own value of life. However, in my view, moving to different palces during one’s life can make our lives more colorful and give us more chances.

Take myself as an example. I’m from northeast of China and pursue my education in a southern university. Many of my classmates wonder why I get out of the cosy atmosphere at home but go to a place so far away. My experience during these three years in the South can answer them. In the South I really get a deep understanding about the people and the distinct culture here, thus gaining a whole picture of China and people from different places. However, if I spend all my life in my homwtown, maybe I do not have to make efforts to get used the southern culture and the customs, but I also lose the chance to see more and experience more. I guess it is not just my thought. Many people choose to leave home and move to another place in their life hold the opinion that the experience can boraden their horizon, enrich their life and make friends from all places in the world.

Also, many people move to other places in pursuit of a better life and more chances. In China, many students turned down postgraduate recommendations in their universities but choose to take pains in taking GRE and Toefl test just in order to pursue a better education in the US. They move to the US because they want to keep up with the pace of the world and become an international elite. They are not the only group of people who move to other places to realize their dreams. Many people in a small town go to big cities because there are more job chances, better education and health care there. Only by going out of their hometown and move to big cities can this group of people enjoy the facilities and chances.

There are also people who do not like to leave home, because they are satisfied with their life or do not want to get out of their comfort zone. However, going out can give people the chance to see other amazing parts in the world and offer us more chance to live a better life. In conclusion, to the people who want to pursue better life and experience more things, the statement that people should live in the city or country all life instead of moving to another place is unaccpetable.
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sinead520UID: 2731727

还行

lllcccUID: 2537251

总体还好，细节上lz要注意。还有尽量不要用自己举例子吧~~~
palces-->places
get used + to
boraden-->broaden
Only by going out ..... and moving....

莘梓UID: 2732079

你的评语很中肯，我也感觉句子太简单，不精彩，谢谢~