10。考2月作文 第一次写 很困难

peanut1008UID: 2499237

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people's attitudes are determined more bytheir immediate situation or surroundings than by any internal characteristic.
相比于人们内在的性格，人们的态度更多的是由他们现在的处境或周围环境决定。

1.开头：同意

什么是态度？态度是人们对于事件的个人看法，以及由这种看法可能会产生的行为。
2.人的内在性格在一定程度上可以影响态度，然而人的态度不可能脱离实际
3.不同性格的人在同样的环境下，对于一件事可以产生相同的态度
4.环境改变，而性格此时可能没有改变，但是人们对于事情的态度可能会改变。
5.结尾：态度更多的是由环境决定的

说实话 感觉一直停留在初中水平 句子不够长 词汇变化不够丰富 词汇不够高级 结尾也写不出什么具有深度的想法
很是崩溃  很是艰难  大家提提意见吧 同时看了一些文章 但是怎么解决我这个 幼稚型的作文 还是很困惑



What play more important role indetermining our attitudes, the outside or the inside? To answer this question,onething must be cleard that attitudes which can be changed through somefactors are people's thoughts to something that happen to them.What's moreattitudes can influence one's behavior.In my mind, I think the external factorsincluding the immediate situation or surroundings that have a strong effect toone's attitudes.

Honestly speaking, characteristics canmore or less act a role in one's attitudes.However, we human beings are socialanimals, we can't possess attitudes only through our solo characteristics. Eachof our attitude may determine our behavior, which may have effect on ourrelationship with others and may be in matter of the surroundings. GeofferyRose, a famous clinician and epidemiologist had ever said 'Things in principlemay be yes while in practice will have diffculties.It deponds on theenvironment.' He's words implied that when we determined our attitudes we haveto take the surroundings as a concern. In today’s world, almost everyone is go ona diet no matter how healthy they are, especially some teenager girls ,some ofwhom are pursuing good shape in an extremly way like don’t take any food in thewhole day’s time, which do really harm to their health. If you tell them thatthey’re in good shape and thin enough.You may get the reply that the supermodel or the hollywood star’s BMI are their goals. What’s more, all of theirfriends and classmates are going on a diet.Although under the skin they are notheavily care about their weight, under the surroundings they have to determinetheir attitudes that the thinner the better

People who have differentcharacteristics live in the same surroundings may have similar attitudes. Inour daily life, there are a variate of persons around us. Some of them may havequick temper, while others may be slowpokes. Some of them probably areoptimistics, on the contrary others may be a little pessimistic. When theyfaced things happen to them, may they take the same attitudes? When theydetermined wether to go shopping or go to the cinema during the Oscar MovieFestival? When they make their mind to spend the money wether on taking a touraround the world or helping the person who suffered from the Hurricane Katrina?
Can you say that people have the sameattitudes towards things have the same characteristics? Obviously not. It's notthe internal characteristics but the immediate situation that have moreinfluence on determining one's attitudes.

Surroundings are easy to change whilecharacteristics are not.Sometimes onething occur that we may exploure in astrange immediate situation. Undering such unfamiliar cirrumstance, do we stillhold the same view? Or we may change our attitudes.I can remember it clearlythat when I was 19, I went to the park with my friends, together we took thebungee jumping. I didn't feel any nervous untill I got to the top of themountain. When I stood on the mountain and leaned over to take a look at theground, after seeing how small the persons on the ground are,I scared andchanged my mind that I wounld not take the bungee jumping. So did my friends. Insuch a short moment, both my friends and I have the same characteristics as wewere before, so why did we change our attitudes to the bungee jumping? Theanswer was the surroundings, it's the immediate situation which had changedthat determined our attitudes.

Attitude is a kind of complicatedemotions which influnenced by both the internal characteristics and theimmediate situation or surroundings.Everyday millions of different thingshappen to us that we face to plenty of immediate situation, hardly can weconfirm our attitudes without thinking over the surroundings.As far as I'mconcerned the immediate situation or the surroundings take the big role inone's attitudes determine.

NaperyUID: 2710990

What play more important role Which one plays a more important role 恩，语法错误。 in determining our attitudes, the outside or the inside? To answer this question,one thing must be cleard that attitudes which can be changed through 用by some factors are people's thoughts 用response会不会好点？ to something that happen to them.[关于单词的定义，可以查查wiki或者韦氏，上面的解释挺精准的。]What's more, attitudes can influence one's behavior 或许改成people's attitudes can influence their behaviors比较好. In my mind,一般说in my opinion比较多吧？ I think 这个和前面的in my mind重复了 the external factors including the immediate situation or surroundings that去掉 语法问题 have a strong effect to应该是On 固定搭配 one's attitudes.

就先小小的稍微改一段吧。我也是新手，有错请见谅。
拼写的格式有问题，很多单词都没分割开。
一些错误都是最基本的，表述有些不明确呢。
建议你多看看坛子里的好东西呀，嘿嘿。
例如审题方面的，还有语法知识方面的，都要看看咧。
先别急着下手写呢，让自己对AW有个明确的了解框架后再写也不迟呀。
我个人觉得，看了经验帖子也不够，自己也一定要多多思考下呀。
嘿嘿，冒泡，看下lz作文~~~

kkwmmUID: 2671732

俺也是，3月考，也是感觉初中水平，555，写了两篇完就放到word，一看一片红的绿的，先自己改，看一次改一次，没好意思放上来，楼主也可以先写完放word里自己改改，学到了好的表达方式就试着再自己文章里用用，我觉得应该有用吧
现在先暂时不写作文，在用北美范文学习中翻英。。。

peanut1008UID: 2499237

谢谢各位
我继续努力
说实话 真是心很寒啊

NaperyUID: 2710990

别心寒啊 大家都是这样的嘛
嘿嘿
天冷了 心要暖点哦 免得被隔离了！
:lol