Q的12月4日独立作文 国内外旅游

名字是个词儿UID: 2707493

这次之所以按时完成，原因很囧：我试图直接在回复框里写作文，结果写到一半按错了键，退到上个页面，一切码字泡汤，只好重新计时～～～～～～～～并且并且，我还死心不改地重蹈复辙，第二次都写到结尾段了然后按回退键:mad:
所以当我终于学乖用记事本写文章时，已经轻车熟路了:L

“狗熊是怎么死的？”
“怎么死的？”
“它是笨死的！”
“怎么笨死的？”
“。。。。。”

2.4 Doyouagree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit morefromtravelling in their own country than travelling in a foreigncountry.

I used to do back-packing in western Europe, and I also have been arounda good amount of places in my own country, China. Based on my personal experience, I strongly agree that travelling in one's own country is more beneficial than that in a foreign country.

The primary reason that people travel is to relax and have fun. In people's homecountry, where they find it more familliar and speak the same language with others, they are more likely to feel comfortable, and relax themselves. On the contray, travelling in a different environment, instinc make people tend to turn more alert, and pay less attenion on simplly enjoying the trip itself. That's what I did when I travelled with several friends in Europ, we spent a lot of time on communicating with local people, such as asking about direction to a Franch who didn't speak English. In my own country, I won't have to worry about such detail things deverting my focus, hence will enjoy the trip more.

Another advantage about travelling in one's own country is that they achieve more fresh information, thus understand and appreciate more about what they see. When people travel in their own country, they have a lot of related background knowledge about the place they visit, so they have greater chances to understand and appreciat it. Once I was on a trip to Xi-An, a beatiful historical city in north China, I went to see those famous clay soldiers, which were thousands of years ago and burried in a former king's grave. I found it extremely interesting, because I know about that part of history of my own country. However I found a blond girl didn't seem know well about the whole artifact. Same thing happened to me in Europe, although I did research online before taking off to the trip, I found it relatively harder to apprehend everything I saw, and ended up taking a picture in front of every site, then simplly moved on. I believe someone from Europe will benefit more than I did from the same trip.

According to what is demonstrated above, I feel it obvious that travelling in their own country help people torelax and have good time, as well as understand the places of interest, hence is more beneficial.

cavadorisUID: 2646574

I used to do back-packing in western Europe, and I also have been around a good amount of places in my own country, China. Based on my personal experience, I strongly agree that travelling in one's own country is more beneficial than that in a foreign country.（开头简单扼要 但是观点明确值得学习）& P* E" P4 ]9 ~+ X0 ]- H
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The primary reason that people travel is to relax and have fun. In people's homecountry, where they find it more familliar and speak the same language with others, they are more likely to feel comfortable, and relax themselves. On the contray, travelling in a different environment,instinc make people tend to turn more alert（lz是想说本能使人更警觉么。。。个人感觉有点Chinglish）, and pay less attenion on simplly enjoying the trip itself. That's what I did when I travelled with several friends in Europ, we spent a lot of time on communicatingwith local people, such as asking about direction to a Franch whodidn't speak English. In my own country, I won't have to worry aboutsuch detail things deverting my focus, hence will enjoy the trip more.
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Anotheradvantage about travelling in one's own country is that they achievemore fresh information, thus understand and appreciate more about whatthey see. When people travel in their own country, they have a lot ofrelated background knowledge about the place they visit, so they havegreater chances to understand and appreciat it. Once I was on a trip toXi-An, a beatiful historical city in north China, I went to see thosefamous clay soldiers, which were thousands of years ago and burried ina former king's grave. I found it extremely interesting, because I knowabout that part of history of my own country. However I found a blondgirl didn't seem know well about the whole artifact. Same thinghappened to me in Europe, although I did research online before takingoff to the trip, I found it relatively harder to apprehend everything Isaw, and ended up taking a picture in front of every site, then simpllymoved on. I believe someone from Europe will benefit more than I didfrom the same trip.
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( m9 o+ O! O& ~( O4 h- AAccording to what is demonstrated above, Ifeel it obvious that travelling in their own country help people torelax and have good time, as well as understand the places of interest,hence is more beneficial.

lz的观点很明确，文章很流畅，语言驾驭也很自如，读起来很舒服，很值得我学习，如果有精力可以把句型和过渡再完善下。ps下 下次可不可以空空格呢。。。难道是因为记事本的原因么？加油加油！:p

shiwei83UID: 2680950

I used to do back-packing in western Europe, and I also have been around a good amount of places in my own country, China. Based on my personal experience, I strongly agree that travelling in one's own country is more beneficial than that in a foreign country.

The primary reason that people travel is to relax and have fun. In people's homecountry（homeland）, where they find it more familiar and speak the same language with others, they are more likely to feel comfortable, and relax themselves. On the contray（contrary）, travelling in a different environment, instinc make people tend to turn more alert（by instinct）, and pay less attenion on simplly enjoying the trip itself. That's what I did when I travelled with several friends in Europ,(Europe) we spent a lot of time on communicating with local people, such as asking about direction to a Franch(Frenchman) who didn't(cann’t) speak English. In my own country, I won't have to worry about such detail things deverting my focus, hence will enjoy the trip more.

Another advantage about travelling in one's own country is that they achieve more fresh information, thus understand and appreciate more about what they see. When people travel in their own country, they have a lot of related background knowledge about the place they visit, so they have greater chances to understand and appreciate it. Once I was on a trip to Xi-An, a beautiful historical city in north China, I went to see those famous clay soldiers, which were thousands of years ago and burried in a former king's grave. I found it extremely interesting, because I know about that part of history of my own country. However I found a blond girl didn't seem know well about the whole artifact. Same thing happened to me in Europe, although I did research online before taking off to the trip, I found it relatively harder to apprehend everything I saw, and ended up taking a picture in front of every site, then simply moved on. I believe someone from Europe will benefit more than I did from the same trip.

According to what is demonstrated above, I feel it obvious that travelling in their own country help people torelax and have good time, as well as understand the places of interest, hence is more beneficial.
你的文章结构很清楚，用词造句也都不错，注意个别单词的拼写。
问题是，你谈到国内游的优点只有两点，最好能再加上一点，另外，是否能再加上一段（或者在第一段里），谈谈出国游的好处，不用展开，简单阐述即可。