TPO11明日萌 综合写作

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From the reading passage, there is a phenomenon that the young is reading far less literature such as novels, plays and poems. We have to admit this decline, however, the professor also refute the opinions provided above.
It is described in the passage that nothing else offers intellectual stimulation that literature does. Books as respect to science, histories are often of high quality and this kind of books just can be well-written by the specialists or novelists. As a result, the fact that people reading books unable to stimulate their imagination does not equal to the conclusion that less literature is produced.
Secondly, it is illustrated that more readers divert their time from reading to movies, web pages and so on. The professor underlines that it is not a waste of time to go on with these activities. For the form or pattern of culture behaviors now has become diverse and plenty, changes in cultural entertainments like movies and music do not stand for a lower level of culture.
Lastly, it is considered in the passage that the trend of reading less literature is due to lack of audience for talented writers, which blame for publishers’ reducing investment on writers. The professor argues that there might exist the possibility that
authors’ fault since their works are too difficult to understand ,which loses their readers instead of the poor standards of today’s readers.

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From the reading passage, there is a phenomenon that the young is reading（觉得现在时比进行时要好一些~） far less literature such as novels, plays and poems. We have to admit this decline, however, the professor also refute （refutes）the opinions provided above.
It is described in the passage that nothing else offers intellectual stimulation that literature does. （加In the lecture之类）Books as respect to science, histories are often of （会不会用In更好？）high quality and this （these）kind of books just can be well-written by the specialists or novelists. As a result, the fact that people reading books unable to stimulate their imagination does not equal（这句话有两个谓语了哦~~~） to the conclusion that less literature is produced.（应该写明是阅读中的观点还是听力中的观点）
Secondly, it is illustrated that more readers divert their time from reading to movies, web pages and so on. The professor underlines that it is not a waste of time to go on with these activities. For the form or pattern of culture behaviors now has become diverse and plenty, changes in （into）cultural entertainments like movies and music do not stand for a lower level of culture.
Lastly, it is considered in the passage that the trend of reading less literature is due to lack of audience for talented writers, which blame for publishers’ reducing investment on writers. The professor argues that there might exist the possibility that （加it is）
authors’ fault since their works are too difficult to understand ,which loses their readers instead of（我觉得应该用rather than） the poor standards of today’s readers.  
内容写得不错，感觉每段的结构不明显~~~写明阅读还是听力的内容会更好……有些长句写清先行词，避免出现两个谓语~~~加油加油哦~~

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also 不应该要 literature是可数的 the young today is reading far less literatures such....than their predecessors did.
books respected to
the fact that 的从句中无be动词 people reading books are
has 改为 have
the lack
blame to the deducing investments from the public on writing
this may be the authors'fault, the reason is that  their works are too difficult to be understand by their readers rather than the poor standards of current readers.