ISSUE13 处女作，麻烦请大家狂砍了。。。谢谢

Blithe0404UID: 2738704

【题目】
ISSUE13
Many of the world's lesser-known languages are being lost as fewer and fewer people speak them. The governments of countries in which these languages are spoken should act to prevent such languages from becoming extinct.

The lesser-known languages,which are now suffering from the extinctation,should be taken seriously.According to the linguist,there are approxiately six thousads and nine handred languages till now,but half of those would disappeared in the next century.The experts  also said that , languages seems like the liquid which varies from the brain image .Maybe it is just a natural thing to loss hese languages,however,the trouble is that,the losing speed is too fast that ten well-used of the lesser-known language died every ten days.What's more,a plenty of information maybe taken away by them.As a conclusion,the extincting languages is supposed to be well protected or it will do bad effect for the science.
A variety of languages functioning well  for the improvement of the philology.Fortunately,as shown by the linguists, a few of these language were recorded or noted,nevetheless,the majority of these languages did not run in this way and they disappeared without much notice.Actually,these languages can make great contribution to the philology that they would let us recognise that how our brain absorb,arrange and using the languages. Also,we can reach a heart to heart chat speaking in these languages instead of English.
Additionally ,different languages shows us the depth and range of the ability in languages .Can you imagine that a world there is only an English for us to do reaserches .
Last but not least,a great many features can the lesser-known languages be reflect .From the linguists, the lesser-known languages develop our understanding to the natural world while as to the humanist ,we can learn more from these languages of the relevant migration or the perish of the past people,such as  the Maya who speak Mayan. As we all know, the Maya language,which played an important part in the past Maya civilization but scarcely ever used than it before.What's worse,the language is becoming more and more rarely speaking now .Maya language and also the culture developed around it were once thriving for a long time. They had caculated the lengh of one year to three handred and sixty-five days exactly which was almost one handred years early than the Europeans.Moreover ,the old books shows briliant of Maya people in architecture,astronomy and so on.However,the fact is that, most of the Maya language writting books and materials they had devoted to was ruined by the Spanish.In addition,the Maya language speaking people disappered all in a sudden.As a result,there is no specific proof for their gone,and the a number of their dedications were in ruins.According to the status suppoted by the experts,a great deal of contributions did the people using Maya have made.Fortunately,there are still some Maya language users who were survived from the Spanish massacre .There is no way but safeguard their language and go on their civilization .Language which is the basic of a country should goes first to protect their culture.
But by what means can we do to slow down the extincting languages?Firstly,media,which is famous for the people nowadays.Must have you heard the movie 2012,which showed the present Maya people about the prediction of the end of the world.This movie attacted many people and also made the Maya culture famous to the global people.Consequently,media such as TV,newspaper would be an effective way to deal with this problem.Secondly,some detail measures should be taken by the goverment,like some profits to the people who use the lesser-known languages,a low-score of apply for a school maybe take into consideration.Last but not least,schools can found a language centre for these languages.
Languages,which express the intelligence of our humanbeings and also the most precious treasure of the humanbeings.Today,faced with the lesser-known languages extinction,specific measurses ought to be taken and make effective impacts on the lesser-kown languages.If not,we would suffer an huge loss not only the language itself but also abundant information of science.

littlelingxinUID: 2289523

试着改了改，不对的表拍我
逗号和句号后面都应该空一格，而不是前面，段与段之间应该空一行
有的地方主被动语态有问题，有的句子只有个从句，没有谓语动词。
改后的文章：
The lesser-known languages which are now suffering from the extinctation should be taken attention seriously. According to the linguist, there are approxiately six thousads and nine handred languages till now, but half of those would disappeared in the next century.The experts  also said that languages seems like the liquid which varies from the brain image .Maybe it is just a natural thing to loss these languages. However, the trouble is that the losing speed is so fast that ten well-used lesser-known language died every ten days. What's more, a plenty of information maybe taken away with their disappearance. As a conclusion, the extincting languages is supposed to be well protected, otherwise it will do bad effect for the science.

A variety of languages function well for the improvement of the philology. Fortunately,as shown by the linguists, a few of these language were recorded or noted. Nevetheless, the majority of these languages did not run in this way and they disappeared without much notice. Actually, these languages can make great contribution to the philology that they would let us recognize that how our brains absorb, arrange and use the languages. Also, we can reach a heart to heart chat speaking in these languages instead of English.

Additionally, different languages shows us the depth and range of the ability in languages .Can you imagine a world in which there is only English for us to do reaserches on?.

Last but not the least, there are a great many features the lesser-known languages can reflect. From the linguists, the lesser-known languages develop our understanding to the natural world while as to the humanist, we can learn more from these languages of the relevant migration or the perish of the past people, such as the Maya who speak Mayan. As we all know, the Maya language, which played an important part in the past Maya civilization but was scarcely ever used than that before. What's worse, the language is becoming more and more rarely spoken now .Maya language and also the culture developed around it were once thriving for a long time. They had calculated the length of one year to three handred and sixty-five days exactly which was almost one handred years earlier than the Europeans. Moreover, the old books showed brilliance of Maya people in architecture, astronomy and so on. However, the fact is that, in most of the Maya language written books and materials they had devoted to were ruined by the Spanish. In addition, the Maya language speaking people disappeared all in a sudden. As a result, there is no specific proof for their gone, and a number of their dedications were in ruins. According to the status supported by the experts, there were great deals of contributions the people using Maya have made. Fortunately, there are still some Maya language users who survived from the Spanish massacre .There is no way but safeguard their language and go on their civilization .Language which is the basic of a country should goes first to protect their culture.

But by what means can we do to slow down the extinction of those languages? Firstly, you can use media, which is well-known for the people nowadays. You must have heard of the movie “2012”, which showed the present Maya people about the prediction of the end of the world. This movie attracted many people and also made the Maya culture famous to the global people. Consequently, media such as TV, newspaper would be an effective way to deal with this problem. Secondly, some detail measures should be taken by the government, like some profits to the people who use the lesser-known languages. A low-score of apply for a school maybe take into consideration.Last but not least, schools can found a language centre for these languages.

Languages express the intelligence of our human beings and also the most precious treasure of the human beings. Today, faced with the lesser-known languages extinction, specific measurements ought to be taken and make effective impacts on the lesser-known languages. If not, we would suffer a huge loss not only the language itself but also abundant information of science.

Blithe0404UID: 2738704

2# littlelingxin
真是谢谢了，等了俩天终于有人“屈尊”帮我改了。哈哈 谢谢

qisaimanUID: 2703629

看了下 觉得偏离题目了。应该主要讲政府怎么做吧。
不过没关系，慢慢来吧。我也是

Blithe0404UID: 2738704

4# qisaiman
哦 好的，谢谢你的意见 我会改的 呵呵。