读故事拿钱了！

waloboUID: 2633769

下面有三个故事，哪个最好。说出最合理理由的1000寄托币。

生词: heroic 英雄般的。Paladin 游侠，就暗黑破坏神里那个。graveyard 墓园，还是暗黑破坏神里那个。:loveliness:

Story A:
Having learned substantial basic combat skills as well as magic knowledge, you are now a young paladin. Off you go to the adventures ahead!

Paladin goes to the graveyard from the royal palace with a bucket of water. Paladin pours water on the evil witch. Within a few seconds, she dissolves completely. The only things left are a pair of black pointed witch shoes. Paladin takes those shoes back to the palace, and shows them to the king. As a reward, the king tells paladin the directions to a secret cave full of treasures, known only to the royal family.

Paladin finds his way to treasure cave. Paladin picks up some gold coins on the ground. This seems to have triggered some machinery.Suddenly, the gate of the treasure cave is closed and paladin is locked inside. After some complex manipulation of some stone buttons and levers, paladin finally opens the gate of the cave. Paladin walks free with a lot of gold!

Story B:
Once upon a time, there is a land of magic. In the magic land, there are princes and princesses, heroes and heroines, and young people aspiring to become them one day. After several years of rigorous training in a secret location, you learned substantial basic combat skills as well as magic knowledge from your teacher. You are now a　young paladin. Off you go to the adventures ahead!

Paladin takes with him a bucket of water. Paladin pours water on the evil witch. Within a few seconds, she dissolves completely. The heroic effort of paladin wins the trust of the king.

Paladin picks up some gold coins on the ground of the treasure cave.This seems to have triggered some machinery. Suddenly, the gate of the treasure cave is closed and paladin is locked inside. After some complex manipulation of some stone buttons and levers, paladin finally opens the gate of the cave. Paladin walks free with a lot of gold!

Story C:
Paladin goes to the graveyard from the royal palace with a bucket of water. Paladin pours water on the evil witch. Within a few seconds, she dissolves completely. The only things left are a pair of black pointed witch shoes. Paladin takes those shoes back to the palace, and shows them to the king. As a reward, the king tells paladin directions to a secret cave full of treasures. The heroic effort of killing the king’s worst enemy wins his trust. Now the king can trust you with the mission of rescuing the princess, he tells you directions to the dragon’s lair, where she is imprisoned.

Paladin finds his way to treasure cave. Paladin picks up some gold coins on the ground. This seems to have triggered some machinery. Suddenly, the gate of the treasure cave is closed and paladin is locked inside. After some complex manipulation of some stone buttons and levers, paladin finally opens the gate of the cave. Paladin walks free with a lot of gold!

凉秋-人淡如菊UID: 2587559

杀个花
就走
打酱油

凉秋-人淡如菊UID: 2587559

英文太搓
就不丢人了
打酱油去

节俭的D同学UID: 2625249

没玩过暗黑啊

waloboUID: 2633769

没关系，我就是借用了一下名词而已。总之游侠就是个骑士，墓园就是。。。墓园

凉秋-人淡如菊UID: 2587559

没关系，我就是借用了一下名词而已。总之游侠就是个骑士，墓园就是。。。墓园
walobo 发表于 2009-12-23 04:05

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An_fieldUID: 2486341

飘过

节俭的D同学UID: 2625249

B故事比较好，有一个一开始学习各种技能的过程
而且男人为女人而战，这个情节男女玩家都喜欢啊

sharkangleUID: 2180822

you will lose your audience in the first several sentences if you dont have a good start

凉秋-人淡如菊UID: 2587559

赞阿鲨E文

waloboUID: 2633769

大家还可以继续回答，回答得好的继续发钱

generUID: 119764

不懂英文的飘过。。。

Miss.夜2UID: 2719579

只有a像个故事...其他的感觉逻辑混乱

暖羊羊UID: 2738218

我选A，因为“A交待的好清楚，懂魔法可以杀巫婆，懂打斗技术才有本事逃出来，皇家宝藏只有皇家人知道，这个也很合理~开头就是一个全能骑士，去冒险很合理，成功脱险也很赞”。

B嘛，“开头像哈利波特，一二段之间没有很好的联系，第三段也没有交代主人公是怎么知道宝藏秘密的~像是三张漫画，需要充分发挥想象力。。。”

C嘛，“开头太突兀了，没有交代为什么要去，还有为啥主人公知道水能让妖怪化没了~还有公主那个线索，下文就没有交代了，也和宝藏没有直接联系~”:loveliness: