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2.6作业，https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1055072&extra=&page=3
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2。7 交作业拉

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2.7 作业
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captainlch 2月7号作业，我每次都是拿GREpp3写，30分钟由电脑控制，所以每次总是把第一次草稿放上，这样本人认为才算真正水平，如果您觉得例子比较傻，那就是说明我实在想不出来现编的，无须评论。
I have ever heard one word, namely, vicissitude, which give an pertinent description of the fluctuation of the lives .No one luckily enough can say presumptuously that he/she had never suffered from the great loss and depression when the moment of failure finally comes. In fact, the essential meaning of life may sometimes lies in acceptance, however reluctant we are or not. Thus in my point of view, I regard it much more important to keep optimism and happiness despite that success worried us all the time.

First, I bet every one on keeping a optimism and happiness owing to the reasonable result rendered by cutting scientific research, which means that optimism and happiness guarantee long life span .Specifically, On one hand, optimism and happiness will impede the production of some specific kind of hormone, thus prevent its poisonous nature from encroaching our organisms. On the other hand, optimism and happiness, which can be converted into some kind of electrical signal spreading in our brain, help the secretion of some other kinds of hormones so important in the improvement of some certain organisms. Thus during this kind of organic process not very complex in consideration, much more time for us to live as a men has been endowed by god as well by ourselves, for instance, I have ever heard one old men, living in our community, a qualified professor in philosophy when young, always believed in the credo that happiness and optimism will save us at last, however tough or painful we are face up right now. He lived for more than 95 years before death.

Secondly, optimism and happiness, rather than and anxiety and depression, help the birth of inspiration, to some extent we are unable to describe where it derived . On one hand, May be some times our perspective in success lies in that kind of inspiration, I mean, think of the great inventions and creations both in scientific and art circle, inspiration came from accidental experience on the ground that we are in happy and optimism. For instance, my own experience shown that when I was wandering around the major avenue in my city, inspirations needed for my research paper knocked me most frequently, for the reason that when I witness the skyscraper, strands of cars, how vigorous and inspiriting it presented to me! Thus my brain works in highest measure, in best condition. On the other hand, optimism and happiness help us when we get troubled facing obstacles, for they keep us clam and efficient. Concerning the Mozart, however bitter life distressed him, he always treated it with such kind of optimism and happiness, where the sweat melodies derive. Thereby he established himself as the giant in music, that seems kind of success.

However, I do not mean to regard the success as trivial, for the reason that success is the consequence, kinds of verification and something in substantial forms confirming our efforts, and just where the practical benefits and interest comes. Specifically, all the students strive a high score, although many people try to find relief in saying that I enjoy the process of running for my dreaming score, all the times students care the final score most.

In all, optimism and happiness account for the most importance. Success are the thing we pursue in such high devotion. Yet do play less importance in pursuing a happy life.

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