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发表于 2010-2-4 21:34:29 |显示全部楼层

2、4作业感谢您的不吝赐教O(∩_∩)O~
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1057808&extra=

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发表于 2010-2-4 21:52:37 |显示全部楼层

请问楼主这些题目是185道中的么？2.4的题目怎么没在里面找着啊？

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发表于 2010-2-4 22:10:58 |显示全部楼层

2.4 作业。。https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1057829&extra=

超时。。
让暴风雨来得更猛烈些吧~

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发表于 2010-2-4 23:12:51 |显示全部楼层

2.4作业。。太墨迹了
It's a universally acknowledged fact that technology symbolize the high civilization and the development of human society.in other words,technology dramatically enhance people's working and production efficiency which eventually results in people's simpler life rather than more complicated ones.thus,technology brings more colourful living conditions instead of a more complicated lifestyle.

one reason that technology makes people's lives simpler is that it provides more comfortable and convenient conditions.for instance,with the aid of Google,the worry of shortage of information will be unnecessary.if not for the benefits we get from automobile,could we still be able to live far from our office?what's more,remote ancestors desire to solve the problem of temperature in different seasons affecting their normal life,which is easily solved by air conditioners nowdays.how could we deny the positive impacts of technology in making our lifes simpler?

another reason should be mentioned is that despit the complicate process of designing new technology,the operation for normal users is quite convenient and simple.admittedly,the programming process is a chanllenging and difficult task needing most genius staff while products operation are designed for customers as simple as possible.although Windows has renewed for several generation so far,the operation becomes easier and safer.similarly,an intelligent engineer may spend years in designing a new car,in contrast to a customer needn't waste much time in adapting to the use of such cars.

last but not the least,so-called more complecated sometimes come from those who are not willing to adopt new things.for example,women may find that washing clothes besides river is tiring and wasting time,but the unfamiliarity with washing machine will result their unwillingness to learn to use it.just because habits inhibits people from recieving more efficient and simpler new technologies.apparently,the variety of technology is somewhat a obstacle for eldly generation to accept,which does not indicate that technology makes the life more complicated.

in conclusion,according to the comprehensive analysis of technologies' effects on daily life,i disgree with the point that technology makes people's lives more complicated and agree with the idea that it makes people's lives simpler.

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发表于 2010-2-4 23:16:01 |显示全部楼层

我错了，，，
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发表于 2010-2-4 23:21:25 |显示全部楼层

本帖最后由 carriexu 于 2010-2-5 19:10 编辑

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1057855-1-1.html
2.4

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发表于 2010-2-4 23:37:47 |显示全部楼层

2.4 作业 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1057464-1-1.html
谢谢大家希望坚持

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发表于 2010-2-4 23:56:54 |显示全部楼层

本帖最后由小心littleheart 于 2010-2-5 00:45 编辑

2.4作业，https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1055072&extra=&page=3
~~~今天好多人啊~~我又超时了好久~~~~

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发表于 2010-2-5 08:45:47 |显示全部楼层

本帖最后由 yuminjia 于 2010-2-5 09:48 编辑

2.4 作业马上交 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1057939&extra=
把俺分进去吧
3Q

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发表于 2010-2-5 15:43:46 |显示全部楼层

2,5作业
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我负责努力赚钱，也负责美丽妖娆。

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发表于 2010-2-5 15:55:18 |显示全部楼层

2.5 作业
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