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As an indispensable parts of modern society,increasing people pay attention to the important role that children act in society,the author think that it is the children's socilization that determines the destiny of society and the author believe people still not know how to teach children to bring a better society meanwhile.The author's opinion may seem true at the first glance,but when we view it in depth,we can find that there are some  limitations exist in this point of view.

First,the author hold the view that the destiny of society depended on how children are socialized ,it is safe to say socilization of children effects today's society in many fields.According to a famous professor in the harvord university,''the socialization of a child could help he or she to recognize what the society seems like and then master the skills to survive in society and finally promote the development of society''.when children become socialized,they will master the foudation skills such negotiation or business competition which could help them hold correct attitudes towards society and then influence the destint of society.If a child don't know what is society,how to survive in society and how to develop the society,obviously that this child cannot accliniate to the fast development of modern society and become a victim of the social competiton and then bring to society lots of adverse impacts.

However,under no circumstance could we believe that the sociazation of children decide the destiny of society ,because as the famous scientist shannon said,"one thing could not determine the success or failure of an entirety'',there are many other character of child impact the society,such as the education level of a child,we could not deny that children who accepted advanced education could help the develop of society than those who just recieved elementary education,moveover,the personal quality of children also influence the destiny of society.Thus,the socialization of children is just one factor effect the destiny of our society but not the only one.

The author also believe that we have not master how to educate children so that they don't know how to bring about a better society.We must understand the definition of 'better society' at the begining,in my opinion,there are no fixed explanations about'better society',educators may define better society as everyone received Tertiary Education,psychologists believe that better society means that all people have good mental health,etc.So each individuals have different point towards the ideal of better society,in other words,we could not use single perspective to judge the opinion that whether we have learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society or not.

We have to admit that there are some shortcomings of modern education,but I personally believe that these shortcomings are pygmies alongside it advantages' giants,compare with formal education ,we have already get a big progress in imparting children how to develop society,take ancient chiese education system for example,in ancient china,schools and parents only teach children how to resolve problem such as mathmatics or physics,nor there were a place could impart child how to view society and how to develop it .In the contrast,nowadays,more and more parents and teachers begin to tell children the society around them and what could these children to do in order to help the development of society,furthermore,many college have already set the sociology as a major and more and more people devote themselves to this field,that is to say ,we have already have the ablitity to help children hold a ture opinion of society and it is obvious that we could teach children how to develop a better society.

My conclusion is ,therefore,neither the author correctly awared the relationship between children's socialization and the destiny of society,nor does the author comprehensive consider the role of modern education in helping children develop a better society.