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修改铺暂时不修改了。。。
过年+读书。。。恩。。。~
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具体重新开张日期。。。
择日再议。。~。。。请各位童鞋见谅
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好~ 楼主加油~

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唉呀...莫有看到上面落落大人的话捏...
就算顶个贴支持落落大人吧...

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一大早起来抢座,应该符合规则,希望能被改到,谢谢哈~ 链接也有https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=1062108&extra=
issue 8: It is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold information from the public.

   Political issues are forever themes of the world, and the speaker strongly asserts that it is desirable for political leaders to withhold secrets from the citizens? While there are some necessities in a certain degree, however, for the most interest of the country and a longer flourish of a government, political leaders had better be transparent to public if it's suitable.

   There is no denying that some information needs to be hidden in the dark, including some military, political and private documents of one's own, for the stability of a country as well as its longer development, Due to their huge responsibility, political leaders should have a thorough consideration about all possible situations, therefore some concealment is acceptable. One apt illustration involves the case of the world famous document-Warren Repot, which is believed as a protection to the CIA, once published, countless political leaders will be involved in such an event that associated with the assassination of Kennedy, thus the stability of the country is to be devastated.

   Admittedly, concealment works in some particular events. But the more a political leader withholds information from the public, the more hostility the public advocated against the government. While in reverse, the closer the leaders are to the public and give appropriate information they care about, the more problems will be solved. Upon the Great Depression, many hoodwinked and anxious people withdrew all their cash from the bank and consumers' spending and investment were depressed. The American economy was about to collapse. Fortunately, Franklin Roosevelt changed the situation completely. His "fireside chats", which is considered to be amiable and talked without reservation as if in one's family, were warmly welcome by the masses. He gave the public confidence which was of utmost significance and questions raised were answered in detail. Citizens were inspired by his tolerance and leadership and overcame the difficulties together.

Furthermore, every citizen legally has the right to know the truth and they deserve the power to spur the government to be perfect. Apart from the event of Nixon's "Watergate", the sex scandal of the former president of the US--Bill Clinton. The scandal let people focus on not only the scandal itself but also misconduct as the big president and the flaw in the government's supervision. Though the impeachment eventually failed, it warns the leaders who have the potential to violate the law. Sometimes the political leaders withhold certain information to prevent opponent ideas; nevertheless, different voices don't necessarily represent the incompatible of a society. People's supervision is necessary in government's inherent problems. Only if citizens have the access to the truth, can our government as well as its leaders promoted.

   In conclusion, owing to the special role of political leaders, sometimes it is necessary even desirable for them to withhold information from the citizens, however, to prevent the possible right abuse and promote the cohesion of the whole society, a right supervision system must be established and promoted. Only in this way can we assure that the right leaders lead us in a right way and our right to know be thoroughly protected.
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issue 50 我的第三篇issue全文求拍

本帖最后由 cucu_816 于 2010-2-22 16:14 编辑

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TOPIC: ISSUE50 - "In order to improve the quality of instruction at the college and university level, all faculty should be required to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach."
WORDS: 496         TIME: 00:45:00          DATE: 2010-2-22 13:26:15

Should all faculty be required to spend time working outside the academia in professions relevant to the courses they teach, in order to improve the quality of instruction at the college and university level, as the title issue suggests? In response to this statement, we need to analyze systematically and completely. In a sense, real-world experience would help educators to instruct students. However, unduly working outside would bring detriment to the quality of education.

Firstly and basically, there is no denying fact that educators should link the knowledge with real-world experience. Common sense tells me that the pace of nowadays updating technology is faster than the embodying into textbook. So only know the theory from textbook without the latest information, young people would not make them fit for living in our society, especially in some high technology field, such as IT. One apt illustration of this point involves the story about Larry Ellison. He was famous as the co-founder and the CEO of Oracle Corporation. As we know, he entered three universities but did not obtain any diploma. With respect to all knowledge he had learned to develop program are derived from outside academic world, because there was limited knowledge about database or programming in traditional school at that time. Thus, outside real-world experience provided him more opportunity and approach than courses taught by college teachers for setting up his own business. Therefore in order to make students mastered the latest information, teachers should have certain outside working experience.

Despite the merits of the speaker's claim, however, I disagree with the statement because it seems to recommend that working outside is the only and most important way to improve the quality of instruction and university level. Consider, there are many other factors determine the efficiency and effectiveness of the education. For example, the teachers’ teaching attitude, the spirit of their academic research, the capability of handle questions from students, as well as their communicational skills. Furthermore, whether the teachers were donated the enough fund to study and research, and whether they were given adequate power to comprehensively direct their students, planning their schedule, listing their courses, are playing significant role in determining the educational quality.

Finally, and perhaps most importantly, overstate the importance of working outside would affect the educational quality and university level. Unduly working outside would distract teachers attention from their main duty- informing knowledge. In a recent survey show that fifty-three percent of teachers work outside in order to earn more money. It is not the intention that they work outside for improving educational quality. The longer they work outside, the less attention would be paid to academic area.

From the analysis made above, I concede that real-world experience help teachers and their students understand better relevant information. Nevertheless, without limitation of the outside working, it dose harm to the real quality of education. In the final analysis, we need to meet a balance between educators working non-academia and in their professional environment.

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请多多指点 :loveliness:
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103   "The study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives."
   

History is the precious experience of mankind, not only including the aspects which is relevant to our daily lives, but also the aspects which the activities of societies and countries. From this view point, I think the most valuable part of history is at the macro aspect, such as military, political and economical respects. Because the experiences of daily life is relatively easy to gain, but the worthwhile learning experiences in the macro respects is difficult to attain in the current society, we must learn it from the study of history. So the speaker’s statement is incomplete.
We indeed learned lots of things from history to make our daily life become better. Through the study of architecture history, we learn how to build better buildings; through learning the medical history, we have a good guidance to live more healthy life; through studying the historical books, people learn more moral principles to construct a better society, for examples of confucius who lived in thousand years ago can teach us so much about life thanks to the study of history.
However, the respects that can benefit all of us in society from studying history are the more macro aspects,such as military and political history, though they are far from our daily life. In the military field, the bloody facts of too many wars in the history warn us that the pursuit of peace should be the goal of all the countries and societies, the experience from war history brings all people safety and welfare as an invisible guide.  
It is the same in political field, cite an example I am familiar with, the planning of a city, it was the duty of the designer and the policies makers, far away from our daily life, but the planning actually affect the development of the city and indirectly affect the people live in there. No one knows the absolutely right way about how to planning this city to achieve prosperity, the designers have to draw the similiar proper methods from the history of previous cities, and use it combine with their own conditions to creat a reasonable planning. Accordingly, history is the most valuable resource of all the professional fields and it has nothing to do with whether this field is relevant to our daily life.
We always use the history as a mirror of the contemproary society, through this mirror we can find what happens is improper and unreasonable, and we can figure out the more correct way which has been verified in history to solve it. The importance of studing history is not only in the respects relevant to our daily life ,but also in respects relatively far from our daily life.
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O(∩_∩)O~ 没注意到

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我无语了。。。

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