issue130.我希望这次写的能比上次好一点~谁拍拍我~

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130"How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."

2010-1-29 13：52
提纲：
不同意，我们所处的社会是有很多因素决定的，不单单是孩子的社会化，而且，事实证明我们是可以培养出那些推动社会发展的年轻一代的。
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诚然，孩子的社会化可以促进社会发展，因为孩子是未来社会的中坚力量，社会化的培养使得他们更加有社会责任感，正如primer Wen said…，而且也可以使他们更有集体意识和团队精神。
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但是，不够社会化与无法领导社会走向成功是两码事，很多英雄式的任务往往显得与社会格格不入。
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其次，社会怎样并不单纯取决于孩子，还有很多其他因素：例如中国加入世贸组织促进经济发展，我们研制新型的武器装备来确保社会安定，通信，交通的发展使得我们的社会节奏加快，但这些与孩子的社会化没有你然的联系。
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而且，我们对于下一代的培养还是极大地促进了社会的发展，例如美国牛校出了恩多诺贝尔奖获得者，海伦凯勒在老师的教导下从一个看不见听不道的世界走出来，为人类的精神文明创造了极大的财富。所有这些都说明我们的教育是可以是社会更好的。
总结：孩子的社会化重要但不是唯一，而且我们会教育。
2010-1-29 14：18-15：30
正文：
Children in our society are becoming more and more socialized, however, the claim that our children’s socialization can decide the destiny of society is apparently exaggerate the function of socialization of our children.

Granted that the socialization is vital to the formation of the social responsibility and the realization of teamwork and consideration. Perhaps just like Primer Wen,who is the current primer of China, said:”Our country need children who would like to look up to the star-space.” That is, who have the responsibility to hold up the mission in the future. Besides, during the socialized cultivation, children can also learn how to work with others so that they can achieve the target and how to concern others to establish emotional relationship with their team-members. All of these virtues are profit from the socialization of our children and education.

However, the extent of socialization cannot-at least only-indicate the merit of a person. For example, Gandy, who was always be alienated by the upper-class of Indian, also contribute a lot for our society. Van Gough, who was regarded as a crazy man at the time he was alive, had to rove from here to there because of poverty and people’s misunderstanding. His “sunflower” is now preserved as fortune of our human beings. Roosevelt, in spite of his isolate, odd manners in his early life, he ascended to the social-activist presidency of USA, he achieve all of these rely on his determination of overcoming his physical infirmities, his voracious appetite to knowledge and his intellect. These heroes, who are not so socialized, also became a leader of their realm and even the whole society.
Moreover, not only the socialization of children, but also other factors like economic, politics, and culture can promote our society as a better one. The participation of WTO promote Chinese economic development, the study of technological arms ensure the peace of our country,meanwhile, the rapid modernization and automation in the fields of transportation, telecommunication and even entertainment have allowed people enjoy a much better society than ancient times,which, as all may know , has no necessary relationship with how our children are socialized.

Furthermore, even assumes that the status of children’s socialization cannot be replaced, a deluge of evidence show that we have learned how to raise a person who can lead to a better circumstance.Just take a look at the elites from The Ivy League, a majority of them have been awarded the Nobel Prize, which is regarded as an honor for their prominent contributions to human beings. Can you say that they are the victim of our education?Helen Keller, whose story inspired a large number of people suffered from the fate,thanks for Ms Mary,who leaded her to the world filled with”sound” and “color”,and, of course, love. Even though there are still a lot of flaws and shortages of our education which rely on the assistance from various aspects, like the government, the educational departments ,etc. to improve and ameliorate, these persons inform us that we have cultivated children not only socialized, but also have promoted the society.

To sum up, socialization is a standard to measure a person, however , not the unique one. What we should consider includes many aspects like economic, politics and education to ameliorate our society.